Damian hurried his way through the terminals then glanced back to see his younger counterpart struggling to keep up with her less maneuverable luggage. “Hey, you got it.” She nodded and responded between short breaths. “Oh yea….we’re almost there right?” He nodded, “Yep, we can sit here while we wait for our bus. Where did your bro go?” She glanced around before shrugging and falling into the hard plastic chair. “I dunno, something about bag tags. I’m surprised he left work to come on this crazy trip.” Damian glanced at the roof, “Yeah I’m really not….” She frowned and crossed her arms. “I can take care of myself!” Damian snorted, “You’re fourteen, Penny. There’s no way on this earth that your older brother is going to let you gallivant around the world with a total stranger. And he's right.” She pouted a little and muttered, “I could do it…” Finally Rhett joined them with his duffel bag and plopped down next to his sister before eyeing Damian’s single backpack. “Light packer?” Damian smiled calmly, “Got all I need to make it for a loooong time.” Rhett jerked his chin up in acknowledgement and Natalie decided to work on her computer and ignore the very cool atmosphere going around the group. After over an hour their bus was finally called and they all trooped onto the bus for their twelve hour drive. Destination: a farm in Cloverton Midwest.
Sounds noice. I guess try it and hopefully more people will read it.
Honestly though, if that's the only reason they read it is it worth it?
If they didn't want to read it in the first place then why would the formatting change matter? Where as if someone wanted to read it but was intimidating the change might help. : )
Everyone exchanged tender goodbyes except Source who stood with his arms crossed and his hat low. A few tears were shed as they all had only been able to see their friends for a short time before being separated again. Elliea drifted close to Source as if to say farewell but he glowered at her sourly and did everything to stave her off short of screaming at her. The plan stewardess finally got fed up with the massive delay being caused by the agents and marched out. She stalked up behind Landon and tapped him on the shoulder, though it felt more like a stab. She was very much in a bad mood. He turned, blinked twice, then his eyes bugged out. “YOU!” The stewardess recognized him as well and went purple in the face. “You!The glass man!” She hissed, pure rage in her eyes. This was going to be a plane ride to remember.
Damian hurried his way through the terminals then glanced back to see his younger counterpart struggling to keep up with her less maneuverable luggage. “Hey, you got it.” She nodded and responded between short breaths. “Oh yea….we’re almost there right?” He nodded, “Yep, we can sit here while we wait for our bus. Where did your bro go?” She glanced around before shrugging and falling into the hard plastic chair. “I dunno, something about bag tags. I’m surprised he left work to come on this crazy trip.” Damian glanced at the roof, “Yeah I’m really not….” She frowned and crossed her arms. “I can take care of myself!” Damian snorted, “You’re fourteen, Penny. There’s no way on this earth that your older brother is going to let you gallivant around the world with a total stranger. And he's right.” She pouted a little and muttered, “I could do it…” Finally Rhett joined them with his duffel bag and plopped down next to his sister before eyeing Damian’s single backpack. “Light packer?” Damian smiled calmly, “Got all I need to make it for a loooong time.” Rhett jerked his chin up in acknowledgement and Natalie decided to work on her computer and ignore the very cool atmosphere going around the group. After over an hour their bus was finally called and they all trooped onto the bus for their twelve hour drive. Destination: a farm in Cloverton Midwest.