That's a good thought. It might daunt users who are not as good readers or who don't have much time. Are you considering trying smaller chunks to see how it works?
I mean, I could spread the segments apart.
Sounds noice. I guess try it and hopefully more people will read it.
King paced back and forth between the kitchen and the living room with the phone to tucked between his ear and shoulder. He crossed another name off with a pen on the lined notepad he was holding. He took the phone and dialed the next number on the list. He was running out of numbers… The dialing tone went on and on and one before finally a mechanical voice got on and told him that the number he was trying to reach no longer existed. He muttered something unsavory under his breath and crossed that number out too. He had only three left. Wanda glanced up at him from her book as she reclined on the couch. “Do you think you should take a break.” He waved an abrupt and dismissive hand at her as he mentally pleaded with the droning dial tone to yield results. Just as he was giving up the phone clicked and a familiar calm voice came on the line. “Hello?” King broke out in a grin and tossed his pad and pen onto a nearby chair, that also happened to contain Carter. “Hey Zach? It’s King.” Carter frowned and shoved the pad off his lap before returning to his movie. “Oh King. It’s been a long time. It’s really good to hear from you again.” King chuckled happily, “You too man.” Zachariah cut straight to the chase, “So what can I do for you?” King rubbed his neck as he continued pacing, “We’ve been trying to get the team back together to do some deep investigation. Something isn’t feeling right.” There was a considering pause on Zechariah's end before a response. “Okay, I’ll help if I can. What are you thinking?” King stopped pacing in front of the clock and grinned, “Got any jets laying around....”
Damian hurried his way through the terminals then glanced back to see his younger counterpart struggling to keep up with her less maneuverable luggage. “Hey, you got it.” She nodded and responded between short breaths. “Oh yea….we’re almost there right?” He nodded, “Yep, we can sit here while we wait for our bus. Where did your bro go?” She glanced around before shrugging and falling into the hard plastic chair. “I dunno, something about bag tags. I’m surprised he left work to come on this crazy trip.” Damian glanced at the roof, “Yeah I’m really not….” She frowned and crossed her arms. “I can take care of myself!” Damian snorted, “You’re fourteen, Penny. There’s no way on this earth that your older brother is going to let you gallivant around the world with a total stranger. And he's right.” She pouted a little and muttered, “I could do it…” Finally Rhett joined them with his duffel bag and plopped down next to his sister before eyeing Damian’s single backpack. “Light packer?” Damian smiled calmly, “Got all I need to make it for a loooong time.” Rhett jerked his chin up in acknowledgement and Natalie decided to work on her computer and ignore the very cool atmosphere going around the group. After over an hour their bus was finally called and they all trooped onto the bus for their twelve hour drive. Destination: a farm in Cloverton Midwest.
Everyone exchanged tender goodbyes except Source who stood with his arms crossed and his hat low. A few tears were shed as they all had only been able to see their friends for a short time before being separated again. Elliea drifted close to Source as if to say farewell but he glowered at her sourly and did everything to stave her off short of screaming at her. The plan stewardess finally got fed up with the massive delay being caused by the agents and marched out. She stalked up behind Landon and tapped him on the shoulder, though it felt more like a stab. She was very much in a bad mood. He turned, blinked twice, then his eyes bugged out. “YOU!” The stewardess recognized him as well and went purple in the face. “You!The glass man!” She hissed, pure rage in her eyes. This was going to be a plane ride to remember.