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Post by ~DatSpicyPorg~ on Feb 3, 2018 23:14:45 GMT
Chapter 1: I’m Saving Your Life!
Captain America
The words stung. They hit my head as hard as the “Rejected” stamp to my Army volunteer form. I opened my mouth to argue, but I knew it was no use. One look at me then and it would be hard to believe that I would be leading the charge against HYDRA. As I polished my shield, Bucky came over to me, jolting me out of the past. “Patrol came in at oh-nine hundred. Found a Canadian all alone, fatigues ripped to shreds.” I jumped off the Jeep I was sitting on and walked towards the medic tent.
The Canadian was on the edge of his cot, hands on his knees. He slowly looked up at me, a mix of anger and sadness on his face. “Captain… America?” His voice was gravelly with pain. “What’s your name, soldier?” I asked. The reply was barely a whisper. “Logan.” I knew that tone. I had used it years before, walking out of the recruitment center while people scoffed at me. The soldier shook his head. “Logan.”
4th wall commentary: Welcome! Could have wrote more, but I think its enough for now.
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Post by ultra on Feb 4, 2018 0:15:01 GMT
I love it! Keep it up.
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Post by gurnechnaz on Feb 4, 2018 10:15:22 GMT
Great so far! Keep it up!
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Post by ~DatSpicyPorg~ on Feb 11, 2018 1:33:26 GMT
Chapter 1: Fighting With Claws and Shield
Logan
I can hear my comrades’ screams. Feel the shots as they punctured my uniform like a tire, like they did to my friends. Remember my rage as I felled them one by one. They still haunt me. When I sat down, the memories of last night flooded into my consciousness. He shouldn’t have come here. Repeating my name only made it worse. I lost control and lunged at Cap with all the pent-up fury of my miserable life, claws sharp. He dodged and I went into a roll. “Logan, stop!” he shouted. I turned around and slashed at Cap. He instinctively lifted his shield to block it, spun and smacked me in the chest. I howled like an animal and kicked him in the head. He staggered back, holding his shield to protect his body. In an instant I was scraping and stabbing at Cap on the ground. I managed to peel his shield away like tape, and was about to strike at his neck when something as fast as a train slammed into me. I skidded across the mucky ground of the camp and hit a Jeep with enough force to crumple its frame. “Enough, soldier.” I looked up. A guy in a ridiculous tin hat frowned at me. “I’m the Flash, and you need to stand down.”
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Post by Judah on Feb 15, 2018 21:46:24 GMT
Like the Cap/Wolverine crossover idea. Very unique. And unable to be done in movie form. So sad.
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Post by ultra on Feb 19, 2018 2:48:42 GMT
Like the Cap/Wolverine crossover idea. Very unique. And unable to be done in movie form. So sad. another reason cap should survive avengers 4
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Post by Judah on Feb 21, 2018 20:33:55 GMT
Like the Cap/Wolverine crossover idea. Very unique. And unable to be done in movie form. So sad. another reason cap should survive avengers 4 Nah, he needs to end.
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Post by ultra on Feb 22, 2018 1:45:41 GMT
another reason cap should survive avengers 4 Nah, he needs to end. my head says the death of steve rogers would be one of the best moments in a marvel movie ever but my heart says we need cap forever
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Post by Judah on Feb 22, 2018 22:23:59 GMT
Nah, he needs to end. my head says the death of steve rogers would be one of the best moments in a marvel movie ever but my heart says we need cap forever Oh, you'll have Cap, definitely! Just not in the form of Steve Rogers... It will be... Peggy Carter.
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Post by ultra on Feb 22, 2018 23:55:03 GMT
my head says the death of steve rogers would be one of the best moments in a marvel movie ever but my heart says we need cap forever Oh, you'll have Cap, definitely! Just not in the form of Steve Rogers... It will be... Peggy Carter. i honestly want a whole movie where they tease bucky taking up the mantle and then sharon carter becomes cap at the end
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Post by Judah on Feb 26, 2018 16:33:49 GMT
Oh, you'll have Cap, definitely! Just not in the form of Steve Rogers... It will be... Peggy Carter. i honestly want a whole movie where they tease bucky taking up the mantle and then sharon carter becomes cap at the end That'd be cool too
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Post by ~DatSpicyPorg~ on Mar 2, 2018 3:08:34 GMT
Chapter 3: Briefing
Flash
I hate patrols. It seems like the only thing they use me for. So when the time came for yet another patrol, I was surprised that I wasn’t called. Instead, some guy took me into the main tent. Cap, Bucky, and the angry guy from yesterday were waiting.
“Morning, sir.” Cap nodded. “I called you all here for a reason,” Cap said. He unfurled a map of Europe. “While transporting an artefact from Latveria to the Soviets, an American convoy was ambushed by Hydra. They only took one prisoner, a member of the Monuments, Fine Arts, and Archives division named Daniel Garrett.” Cap opened a folder and pulled out a photograph of a young man who looked like an archaeologist, wide-brimmed hat and all. “He led the unit to find a golden statue.” Why Hydra wanted it, I don’t know. “Garrett knew something about the statue we don’t. The enemies were highly trained, and left little trace they were there.” Bucky fished a Hydra badge out of his pocket and held it up for all of us to see. “Except this,” he added. “It looks like a stone of some kind. Here’s where it gets interesting.” He fiddled with the badge until it suddenly projected a bunch of numbers onto a wall. “Coordinates. We call this ‘Belshazzar’s Writing’. These coordinates point to a location in Northern Italy.” Cap stepped forward. “Our mission is to survey the area, infiltrate any bases, and rescue Garrett. Are there any questions?” “No, sir,” we replied in unison. I zoomed out of the tent, ready to go.
4th wall comments: Well, after a long time, I got Chapter 3 done. Good job me.
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Post by ~DatSpicyPorg~ on Mar 2, 2018 3:11:06 GMT
I just realized I put Chapter 2 as Chapter 3.
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Post by ultra on Mar 2, 2018 17:40:41 GMT
I just realized I put Chapter 2 as Chapter 3. did you put chapter 2 as chapter 3? or did you put chapter 2 as chapter 1? or did you put the prologue as chapter 1, and chapter 2 as chapter 3? lol, great chapter, man. i think to tie everything together, the chain of souls was on that american convoy. not that it has to be mentioned, though; i just might write a one-shot about it after this story is over.
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Post by ~DatSpicyPorg~ on Mar 3, 2018 17:59:40 GMT
I just realized I put Chapter 2 as Chapter 3. did you put chapter 2 as chapter 3? or did you put chapter 2 as chapter 1? or did you put the prologue as chapter 1, and chapter 2 as chapter 3? lol, great chapter, man. i think to tie everything together, the chain of souls was on that american convoy. not that it has to be mentioned, though; i just might write a one-shot about it after this story is over. {JAMMERS! -abbie- ONLY!} The Chain of Souls was inside that convoy. It remains in West Germany (and then Germany) after the war.
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