I'm going to start posting bios of all my characters here, both RPCs and named NPCs. Because of this, I've updated Lycor's bio with more accurate information (the new parts are underlined). Above is the revised and expanded version of Lycor's bio. ——————^
Another one of my characters (character type--RPC):
Name: Bliston
Gender: Male
Position: Bat King (1ic)
Appearence: Bliston wears a silver and gold crown/crest on his forehead. While his natural appearance is that of a standard black and blue bat, he wears an intricate silver armor on his torso with gold symbols and highlights carved in it. In the middle of his chest is his chi orb socket, and he has large, bulky black shoulder pads. He wears mysterious purple armor on his lower body/legs.
Weapons and gear: A large, double-bladed axe with a silver handle and 2 black blades. Also, a double-barreled purple and gold chi laser blaster that mounts on his hand and arm like a guantlet.
Personality: Bliston feels that the Bats are superior to the other mammal tribes because they can fly, but he doesn't resent them, and believes that all animals deserve to be evolved from chi. However, as the Bats are a very militaristic tribe and army, they hunger for fighting, just for the fun of it. Bliston is a very intelligent bat, and is good at manipulating negotiations to make sure they "accidentally" cause a war to start between any number of tribes. This would allow the Bats to have the pleasure of fighting again, while also giving them an excuse to snatch as much chi as they can. Bliston is very patient, and is waiting for the war in Chima to end while he witnesses it from afar. He will wait for the tribes from Chima to enter his territory, rather than it being the other way around. That way, he can prepare for a new war in case there is one, without appearing as an angry, attacking force to the animals in Chima. So, Bliston waits patiently, sitting on his dark throne within the mouth of the Black Fang Mountain.
Backstory: Before being evolved, Bliston was the first bat to discover a way out of the gorge. After being evolved, he led his tribe out, using this as an opportunity to gain power in the bat tribe. Because he led his tribe out of the terrible gorge, and because of the fact that he is the smartest bat, Bliston became the King of the Bat Tribe.
(OOC: What no mention of his sister? Imma redo the bio for her. )
Name: Bratta Lavenderwing (can Blistion have this last name? )
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Sibling: Blistion (younger than him)
Posistion: 2IC Steward
Personality: Sly, Seductive, Tomboyish, smart, manipulative, mostly like her brother.
Apperance: She wears clothing similar to Rouge The Bat from the Sonic franchise. But to a more militant extent, having a kevlar lined suit under her breastplate made from gold and silver, leggings of very chrome-like steel, and nice heels that are more akin to combat boots than fancy footwear. Her main fur color is a nice shiny silvery-white, contrasting from Blistion’s standard blue coloring. Her wings are in this very beautiful lavender, wishing her brother would have the same wingcoloring as hers. Her skin color is a nice tan, and her nose color a good fleshy pink color. Her eyes have no pupils strangely, and are different colors, the left being green, the right being orange.
Weapon(s) Of choice: Duel Chi Revolvers that look like the NERF Maverick Rev-6. That and her patented bat-a-rangs that are almost exactly like Batman’s. She also has a nice lavender colored Sonoranti as a backup weapon.
Bio: Being alongside her brother for all her life. Bratta has developed a nice sibling relationship with Blistion, wishing their parents would’ve survived the rush to evolve. She was appointed the first bat steward as a nice gift for her birthday when she turned to the age specified above. She always went off on her tangents when she didn’t get her way with her brother, being constantly naggy and whiny at her brother before he snapped and did what she asked him to do. She was always special and sly, helping her brother in whatever he needed as well, although reluctant. Bratta also riles up the bat king’s armies just with herself alone, thus giving her the idea of putting a woman’s touch on the tribe, letting females do more, if not, the same as the males. She only wishes that her tribe was more equal gender-wise, and also that the bats would take all ov Cavora’s chi, wanting to be powerful. Although she tried to manipulate her older beother Ala Cragger and Crooler, it was pretty much in vain, leading to Blistion to become suspicious of her own sister. Leading controversy comes to the main topic of how she was once in control of the Forgotten as a sleeper agent. Wandering around the caves, she was met with the Forgotten Leader, Scrin. The two talked out about the Forgotten and their goals of corruption of the monarchies in the outlands and leading them as republics of democracy. Bratta put up a resistance before being stung from Scrin. Leading to the acts that almost killed the scorpion prince! From being cured, she still has those odd ideas of rebellion, and is now planning to start the resistance uprising in the Bat’s inner sanctum, if only Barney Balhoun could comply, and she knows of her ways to make him comply, but best not to talk about it. Being a good freind of Bachell, the two girls will soon unite Forgotten Bats, those whom have been exiled and left out to die, to lead an complex rebellion, from which Scrin would be proud of.
Name: Scorpix (Trivia: I made another LEGO character named Scorpix in one of my stopmotions (LEGO Island Adventures), but this is a completely different character than that Scorpix, and is not a prehistoric robot built by aliens. The only similarity is the relation to Scorpions, and the name, which I think is a good name for a scorpion character. )
I see why you decided on making the turtle tribe You should really shout out this rp on your channel.
Name: Scorpix (Trivia: I made another LEGO character named Scorpix in one of my stopmotions (LEGO Island Adventures), but this is a completely different character than that Scorpix, and is not a prehistoric robot built by aliens. The only similarity is the relation to Scorpions, and the name, which I think is a good name for a scorpion character. )
So anyway...
Name: Scorpix Gender: Male Position: 2.5 ic (High ranking General) Appearence: Wears the same golden armor/chi harness mold as Scorm, and has a silver and black torso, as well as a gold head. He has one gold arm and one silver arm, the 2 armor colors showing his rank. He wears green on his lower body/legs. Weapons and gear: 2 gold and green Scorpion swords, and a surprisingly large arm-mounted slingshot that can launch a poisonous vial of green stinger venom that explodes on impact. Personality: Scorpix is one of Scorm's favorite generals, because of his ruthless, savage, and relentless battle strategies. He is a very smart strategist and tactician, and would prove a worthy opponent against Lycor, should the Scorpions and Lions ever war with each other. Backstory: Drank the chi that the gorilla dropped into the gorge and evolved. He was given a high rank due to his intelligence.
Character Category: NPC Name: Scorponok (like if you know who this is named after. ) Gender: Male Appearance: A big, green, 6-legged scorpion. Secondary anatomical color is black. He wears a gold and silver chi harness. On his torso, underneath the armor, he wears a smaller version of the robes described in the jammers above. Class: Deathstalker/stomper Rank: 4ic (Because Scortica is 3ic, yes?) Age: Unknown (not necessary for an NPC anyway) Weapons and Gear: A stinger scythe, a triple-barreled poison blaster, and his own powerful stinger and legs. Personality: Scorponok is a loyal warrior of the scorpions who enjoys experimenting with venom (even when his dangerous experiments are to the dismay of the scorpion scientists). He reports only to the king, the queen, and Scorpix. He is also a long time friend of Scorpix, so even if Scorpix didn't outrank him, he'd still be loyal. He has secretly been assigned by Scorpix to spy on any scorpions within the tribe who Scorpix doesn't trust. He'll play a moderately important role in the outland storyline, but I can't explain why without spoiling it.
Rank: Formerly-- Lion Field Marshal. Currently-- Pirate Captain.
Weapons and gear: Formerly-- MaChi guns. Currently-- A silver and green vengious sword, and an old-fashioned chi handgun.
Appearance: (Minifigure pictures coming soon, same with Lycor.) Personality: Bold, headstrong, wants to be the best at everything he does. And now a sneaky thief.
Backstory: See Lycor's backstory (or, read Retribution: A Chima Roleplay Prequel Story for an in-depth and detailed account of their backstories).
Rank: Formerly-- Gorilla governor. Currently-- Lyrix' First Mate (Pirate 2ic)
Weapons and gear: Formerly-- None. Currently-- Classic pirate sword, old-fashioned chi handgun.
Appearance: Like Gibbs from Pirates of the Caribbean, but as a gorilla.
Personality: A cheating, stealing politician, and later a cheating, stealing pirate. If he's in trouble, he'll do whatever he can to get out of it, even if it means working for his enemy to avoid being smashed (in this case, Lyrix).
{JAMMERS!-FelipeDutra- ONLY! (If your a reader the following contains spoliers)} The idea is that if the lions are a parliamentary democracy, then when the civil war breaks out they wont support the gorilla monarchy as they are horrible abusers of human rights and have suspended their constitution and limited their peoples freedoms, the lions wont support the monarchists on a moral basis, and when the republicans take the capital, the lions will reconsise the republicans and possibly (depending if you want this) may support the republicans.
{JAMMERS! -For Felipe only, questions- ONLY!} Ok, this is based on how you would react to the current situations. Also 30 years ago were you democratic/ did the people have rights.
Would the gorilla republic get chi from the lions?
Would the lions atleast in a minor economic sense support the rebellion?
{JAMMERS!-FelipeDutra- ONLY! (If your a reader the following contains spoliers)} The idea is that if the lions are a parliamentary democracy, then when the civil war breaks out they wont support the gorilla monarchy as they are horrible abusers of human rights and have suspended their constitution and limited their peoples freedoms, the lions wont support the monarchists on a moral basis, and when the republicans take the capital, the lions will reconsise the republicans and possibly (depending if you want this) may support the republicans.
{JAMMERS! -For Felipe only, questions- ONLY!} Ok, this is based on how you would react to the current situations. Also 30 years ago were you democratic/ did the people have rights.
Would the gorilla republic get chi from the lions?
Would the lions atleast in a minor economic sense support the rebellion?
{Jammers on, Egorsmirnov only} The Lions had a small and primitive "constitution" in the form of traditions and separate laws during Leopold's early reign. It granted basic rights to citizens, and isolated the king. However, there were a few loopholes that were exploited. Funding would in that case come mostly from rich republicans, there were quite a few. The official constitution would be written as a response to the threat of a domestic revolution after the Gorilla revolution.
Even if they were not democrats, the Lions would not support the Gorilla monarchy given what you're telling me. Chi would still be distributed due to tradition.
Another one of my characters (character type--RPC):
Name: Bliston
Gender: Male
Position: Bat King (1ic)
Appearence: Bliston wears a silver and gold crown/crest on his forehead. While his natural appearance is that of a standard black and blue bat, he wears an intricate silver armor on his torso with gold symbols and highlights carved in it. In the middle of his chest is his chi orb socket, and he has large, bulky black shoulder pads. He wears mysterious purple armor on his lower body/legs.
Weapons and gear: A large, double-bladed axe with a silver handle and 2 black blades. Also, a double-barreled purple and gold chi laser blaster that mounts on his hand and arm like a guantlet.
Personality: Bliston feels that the Bats are superior to the other mammal tribes because they can fly, but he doesn't resent them, and believes that all animals deserve to be evolved from chi. However, as the Bats are a very militaristic tribe and army, they hunger for fighting, just for the fun of it. Bliston is a very intelligent bat, and is good at manipulating negotiations to make sure they "accidentally" cause a war to start between any number of tribes. This would allow the Bats to have the pleasure of fighting again, while also giving them an excuse to snatch as much chi as they can. Bliston is very patient, and is waiting for the war in Chima to end while he witnesses it from afar. He will wait for the tribes from Chima to enter his territory, rather than it being the other way around. That way, he can prepare for a new war in case there is one, without appearing as an angry, attacking force to the animals in Chima. So, Bliston waits patiently, sitting on his dark throne within the mouth of the Black Fang Mountain.
Backstory: Before being evolved, Bliston was the first bat to discover a way out of the gorge. After being evolved, he led his tribe out, using this as an opportunity to gain power in the bat tribe. Because he led his tribe out of the terrible gorge, and because of the fact that he is the smartest bat, Bliston became the King of the Bat Tribe.
(OOC: What no mention of his sister? Imma redo the bio for her. )
Name: Bratta Lavenderwing (can Blistion have this last name? )
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Sibling: Blistion (younger than him)
Posistion: 2IC Steward
Personality: Sly, Seductive, Tomboyish, smart, manipulative, mostly like her brother.
Apperance: She wears clothing similar to Rouge The Bat from the Sonic franchise. But to a more militant extent, having a kevlar lined suit under her breastplate made from gold and silver, leggings of very chrome-like steel, and nice heels that are more akin to combat boots than fancy footwear. Her main fur color is a nice shiny silvery-white, contrasting from Blistion’s standard blue coloring. Her wings are in this very beautiful lavender, wishing her brother would have the same wingcoloring as hers. Her skin color is a nice tan, and her nose color a good fleshy pink color. Her eyes have no pupils strangely, and are different colors, the left being green, the right being orange.
Weapon(s) Of choice: Duel Chi Revolvers that look like the NERF Maverick Rev-6. That and her patented bat-a-rangs that are almost exactly like Batman’s. She also has a nice lavender colored Sonoranti as a backup weapon.
Bio: Being alongside her brother for all her life. Bratta has developed a nice sibling relationship with Blistion, wishing their parents would’ve survived the rush to evolve. She was appointed the first bat steward as a nice gift for her birthday when she turned to the age specified above. She always went off on her tangents when she didn’t get her way with her brother, being constantly naggy and whiny at her brother before he snapped and did what she asked him to do. She was always special and sly, helping her brother in whatever he needed as well, although reluctant. Bratta also riles up the bat king’s armies just with herself alone, thus giving her the idea of putting a woman’s touch on the tribe, letting females do more, if not, the same as the males. She only wishes that her tribe was more equal gender-wise, and also that the bats would take all ov Cavora’s chi, wanting to be powerful. Although she tried to manipulate her older beother Ala Cragger and Crooler, it was pretty much in vain, leading to Blistion to become suspicious of her own sister. Leading controversy comes to the main topic of how she was once in control of the Forgotten as a sleeper agent. Wandering around the caves, she was met with the Forgotten Leader, Scrin. The two talked out about the Forgotten and their goals of corruption of the monarchies in the outlands and leading them as republics of democracy. Bratta put up a resistance before being stung from Scrin. Leading to the acts that almost killed the scorpion prince! From being cured, she still has those odd ideas of rebellion, and is now planning to start the resistance uprising in the Bat’s inner sanctum, if only Barney Balhoun could comply, and she knows of her ways to make him comply, but best not to talk about it. Being a good freind of Bachell, the two girls will soon unite Forgotten Bats, those whom have been exiled and left out to die, to lead an complex rebellion, from which Scrin would be proud of.
(OOC: What no mention of his sister? Imma redo the bio for her. )
Name: Bratta Lavenderwing (can Blistion have this last name? )
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Sibling: Blistion (younger than him)
Posistion: 2IC Steward
Personality: Sly, Seductive, Tomboyish, smart, manipulative, mostly like her brother.
Apperance: She wears clothing similar to Rouge The Bat from the Sonic franchise. But to a more militant extent, having a kevlar lined suit under her breastplate made from gold and silver, leggings of very chrome-like steel, and nice heels that are more akin to combat boots than fancy footwear. Her main fur color is a nice shiny silvery-white, contrasting from Blistion’s standard blue coloring. Her wings are in this very beautiful lavender, wishing her brother would have the same wingcoloring as hers. Her skin color is a nice tan, and her nose color a good fleshy pink color. Her eyes have no pupils strangely, and are different colors, the left being green, the right being orange.
Weapon(s) Of choice: Duel Chi Revolvers that look like the NERF Maverick Rev-6. That and her patented bat-a-rangs that are almost exactly like Batman’s. She also has a nice lavender colored Sonoranti as a backup weapon.
Bio: Being alongside her brother for all her life. Bratta has developed a nice sibling relationship with Blistion, wishing their parents would’ve survived the rush to evolve. She was appointed the first bat steward as a nice gift for her birthday when she turned to the age specified above. She always went off on her tangents when she didn’t get her way with her brother, being constantly naggy and whiny at her brother before he snapped and did what she asked him to do. She was always special and sly, helping her brother in whatever he needed as well, although reluctant. Bratta also riles up the bat king’s armies just with herself alone, thus giving her the idea of putting a woman’s touch on the tribe, letting females do more, if not, the same as the males. She only wishes that her tribe was more equal gender-wise, and also that the bats would take all ov Cavora’s chi, wanting to be powerful. Although she tried to manipulate her older beother Ala Cragger and Crooler, it was pretty much in vain, leading to Blistion to become suspicious of her own sister. Leading controversy comes to the main topic of how she was once in control of the Forgotten as a sleeper agent. Wandering around the caves, she was met with the Forgotten Leader, Scrin. The two talked out about the Forgotten and their goals of corruption of the monarchies in the outlands and leading them as republics of democracy. Bratta put up a resistance before being stung from Scrin. Leading to the acts that almost killed the scorpion prince! From being cured, she still has those odd ideas of rebellion, and is now planning to start the resistance uprising in the Bat’s inner sanctum, if only Barney Balhoun could comply, and she knows of her ways to make him comply, but best not to talk about it. Being a good freind of Bachell, the two girls will soon unite Forgotten Bats, those whom have been exiled and left out to die, to lead an complex rebellion, from which Scrin would be proud of.
(OOC: What, nobody saw this? )
OOC: Nope, I cant see this post on my screen. Thanks for quoting it.
Another one of my characters (character type--RPC):
Name: Bliston
Gender: Male
Position: Bat King (1ic)
Appearence: Bliston wears a silver and gold crown/crest on his forehead. While his natural appearance is that of a standard black and blue bat, he wears an intricate silver armor on his torso with gold symbols and highlights carved in it. In the middle of his chest is his chi orb socket, and he has large, bulky black shoulder pads. He wears mysterious purple armor on his lower body/legs.
Weapons and gear: A large, double-bladed axe with a silver handle and 2 black blades. Also, a double-barreled purple and gold chi laser blaster that mounts on his hand and arm like a guantlet.
Personality: Bliston feels that the Bats are superior to the other mammal tribes because they can fly, but he doesn't resent them, and believes that all animals deserve to be evolved from chi. However, as the Bats are a very militaristic tribe and army, they hunger for fighting, just for the fun of it. Bliston is a very intelligent bat, and is good at manipulating negotiations to make sure they "accidentally" cause a war to start between any number of tribes. This would allow the Bats to have the pleasure of fighting again, while also giving them an excuse to snatch as much chi as they can. Bliston is very patient, and is waiting for the war in Chima to end while he witnesses it from afar. He will wait for the tribes from Chima to enter his territory, rather than it being the other way around. That way, he can prepare for a new war in case there is one, without appearing as an angry, attacking force to the animals in Chima. So, Bliston waits patiently, sitting on his dark throne within the mouth of the Black Fang Mountain.
Backstory: Before being evolved, Bliston was the first bat to discover a way out of the gorge. After being evolved, he led his tribe out, using this as an opportunity to gain power in the bat tribe. Because he led his tribe out of the terrible gorge, and because of the fact that he is the smartest bat, Bliston became the King of the Bat Tribe.
(OOC: What no mention of his sister? Imma redo the bio for her. )
Name: Bratta Lavenderwing (can Blistion have this last name? )
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Sibling: Blistion (younger than him)
Posistion: 2IC Steward
Personality: Sly, Seductive, Tomboyish, smart, manipulative, mostly like her brother.
Apperance: She wears clothing similar to Rouge The Bat from the Sonic franchise. But to a more militant extent, having a kevlar lined suit under her breastplate made from gold and silver, leggings of very chrome-like steel, and nice heels that are more akin to combat boots than fancy footwear. Her main fur color is a nice shiny silvery-white, contrasting from Blistion’s standard blue coloring. Her wings are in this very beautiful lavender, wishing her brother would have the same wingcoloring as hers. Her skin color is a nice tan, and her nose color a good fleshy pink color. Her eyes have no pupils strangely, and are different colors, the left being green, the right being orange.
Weapon(s) Of choice: Duel Chi Revolvers that look like the NERF Maverick Rev-6. That and her patented bat-a-rangs that are almost exactly like Batman’s. She also has a nice lavender colored Sonoranti as a backup weapon.
Bio: Being alongside her brother for all her life. Bratta has developed a nice sibling relationship with Blistion, wishing their parents would’ve survived the rush to evolve. She was appointed the first bat steward as a nice gift for her birthday when she turned to the age specified above. She always went off on her tangents when she didn’t get her way with her brother, being constantly naggy and whiny at her brother before he snapped and did what she asked him to do. She was always special and sly, helping her brother in whatever he needed as well, although reluctant. Bratta also riles up the bat king’s armies just with herself alone, thus giving her the idea of putting a woman’s touch on the tribe, letting females do more, if not, the same as the males. She only wishes that her tribe was more equal gender-wise, and also that the bats would take all ov Cavora’s chi, wanting to be powerful. Although she tried to manipulate her older beother Ala Cragger and Crooler, it was pretty much in vain, leading to Blistion to become suspicious of her own sister. Leading controversy comes to the main topic of how she was once in control of the Forgotten as a sleeper agent. Wandering around the caves, she was met with the Forgotten Leader, Scrin. The two talked out about the Forgotten and their goals of corruption of the monarchies in the outlands and leading them as republics of democracy. Bratta put up a resistance before being stung from Scrin. Leading to the acts that almost killed the scorpion prince! From being cured, she still has those odd ideas of rebellion, and is now planning to start the resistance uprising in the Bat’s inner sanctum, if only Barney Balhoun could comply, and she knows of her ways to make him comply, but best not to talk about it. Being a good freind of Bachell, the two girls will soon unite Forgotten Bats, those whom have been exiled and left out to die, to lead an complex rebellion, from which Scrin would be proud of.
IC: jgread already specified that he doesn't want a rebellion in the bat tribe.
(OOC: What no mention of his sister? Imma redo the bio for her. )
Name: Bratta Lavenderwing (can Blistion have this last name? )
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Sibling: Blistion (younger than him)
Posistion: 2IC Steward
Personality: Sly, Seductive, Tomboyish, smart, manipulative, mostly like her brother.
Apperance: She wears clothing similar to Rouge The Bat from the Sonic franchise. But to a more militant extent, having a kevlar lined suit under her breastplate made from gold and silver, leggings of very chrome-like steel, and nice heels that are more akin to combat boots than fancy footwear. Her main fur color is a nice shiny silvery-white, contrasting from Blistion’s standard blue coloring. Her wings are in this very beautiful lavender, wishing her brother would have the same wingcoloring as hers. Her skin color is a nice tan, and her nose color a good fleshy pink color. Her eyes have no pupils strangely, and are different colors, the left being green, the right being orange.
Weapon(s) Of choice: Duel Chi Revolvers that look like the NERF Maverick Rev-6. That and her patented bat-a-rangs that are almost exactly like Batman’s. She also has a nice lavender colored Sonoranti as a backup weapon.
Bio: Being alongside her brother for all her life. Bratta has developed a nice sibling relationship with Blistion, wishing their parents would’ve survived the rush to evolve. She was appointed the first bat steward as a nice gift for her birthday when she turned to the age specified above. She always went off on her tangents when she didn’t get her way with her brother, being constantly naggy and whiny at her brother beforehesnappedanddidwhatsheaskedhimtodo. She was always special and sly, helping her brother in whatever he needed as well, although reluctant. Bratta also riles up the bat king’s armies just with herself alone, thus giving her the idea of putting a woman’s touch on the tribe, letting females do more, if not, the same as the males. She only wishes that her tribe was more equal gender-wise, and also that the bats would take all ov Cavora’s chi, wanting to be powerful. Although she tried to manipulate her older beother Ala Cragger and Crooler, it was pretty much in vain, leading to Blistion to become suspicious of her own sister. Leading controversy comes to the main topic of how she was once in control of the Forgotten as a sleeper agent. Wandering around the caves, she was met with the Forgotten Leader, Scrin. The two talked out about the Forgotten and their goals of corruption of the monarchies in the outlands and leading them as republics of democracy. Bratta put up a resistance before being stung from Scrin. Leading to the acts that almost killed the scorpion prince! From being cured, she still has those odd ideas of rebellion, and is now planning to start the resistance uprising in the Bat’s inner sanctum, if only Barney Balhoun could comply, and she knows of her ways to make him comply, but best not to talk about it. Being a good freind of Bachell, the two girls will soon unite Forgotten Bats, those whom have been exiled and left out to die, to lead an complex rebellion, from which Scrin would be proud of.
(OOC: What, nobody saw this? )
Bliston's last name is Belkoroth though. But perhaps "Lavendarwing" was the original last name/maiden name of their mother? So Bratta chose to take her mother's last name instead? Also, Bliston's name is spelled "Bliston", not "Blistion".
That's a cool bio overall, but I'm going to need to null some parts that contradict continuity and/or previously established traits of other characters (don't worry, I won't null the whole bio, only parts). The nulled sections have been bolded and struck-through.
Reasons for nulling: •Bliston does not simply "snap" and obey his sister's whines. He is the most patient and smart bat (not to mention he's known Bratta his entire life), so he can put up with that kind of stuff longer than anyone else would.
•If anything, the bat tribe is the most gender-equal faction in Chima. Literally every female bat is a soldier, just like the males. The female bats do the exact same work and the exact same level of work as the males. The whole concept of gender is almost meaningless in the bat tribe, as bats of different genders are treated the same way.
•It has already been established that all Forgotten presence has been completely wiped away from the Bat tribe (and yes, it made perfect sense in the story). The only bats in existence who were ever members of the Forgotten were either insane or brainwashed. They have all been cured and returned to the Bat tribe. Both Bratta and Bachell have been cured of the mind control that made them Forgotten spies. If they still have rebellious intentions, fine, but Bat NPCs do not. I lead the Bat tribe, and I have the tribe's fate planned out. If a civil war erupts in this tribe, it would completely contradict everything I have planned for the Bats. For you see, that is why I don't want the Forgotten to have anything to do with the Bats; it would ruin the perfect ending I have planned for them. If you want to know why, I'll tell you in Jammers.
Bliston's last name is Belkoroth though. But perhaps "Lavendarwing" was the original last name/maiden name of their mother? So Bratta chose to take her mother's last name instead? Also, Bliston's name is spelled "Bliston", not "Blistion".
That's a cool bio overall, but I'm going to need to null some parts that contradict continuity and/or previously established traits of other characters (don't worry, I won't null the whole bio, only parts). The nulled sections have been bolded and struck-through.
Reasons for nulling: •Bliston does not simply "snap" and obey his sister's whines. He is the most patient and smart bat (not to mention he's known Bratta his entire life), so he can put up with that kind of stuff longer than anyone else would.
•If anything, the bat tribe is the most gender-equal faction in Chima. Literally every female bat is a soldier, just like the males. The female bats do the exact same work and the exact same level of work as the males. The whole concept of gender is almost meaningless in the bat tribe, as bats of different genders are treated the same way.
•It has already been established that all Forgotten presence has been completely wiped away from the Bat tribe (and yes, it made perfect sense in the story). The only bats in existence who were ever members of the Forgotten were either insane or brainwashed. They have all been cured and returned to the Bat tribe. Both Bratta and Bachell have been cured of the mind control that made them Forgotten spies. If they still have rebellious intentions, fine, but Bat NPCs do not. I lead the Bat tribe, and I have the tribe's fate planned out. If a civil war erupts in this tribe, it would completely contradict everything I have planned for the Bats. For you see, that is why I don't want the Forgotten to have anything to do with the Bats; it would ruin the perfect ending I have planned for them. If you want to know why, I'll tell you in Jammers.
Ah, okay then, I don’t mind if the continuity is against me. I don’t mind at all!
Bliston's last name is Belkoroth though. But perhaps "Lavendarwing" was the original last name/maiden name of their mother? So Bratta chose to take her mother's last name instead? Also, Bliston's name is spelled "Bliston", not "Blistion".
That's a cool bio overall, but I'm going to need to null some parts that contradict continuity and/or previously established traits of other characters (don't worry, I won't null the whole bio, only parts). The nulled sections have been bolded and struck-through.
Reasons for nulling: •Bliston does not simply "snap" and obey his sister's whines. He is the most patient and smart bat (not to mention he's known Bratta his entire life), so he can put up with that kind of stuff longer than anyone else would.
•If anything, the bat tribe is the most gender-equal faction in Chima. Literally every female bat is a soldier, just like the males. The female bats do the exact same work and the exact same level of work as the males. The whole concept of gender is almost meaningless in the bat tribe, as bats of different genders are treated the same way.
•It has already been established that all Forgotten presence has been completely wiped away from the Bat tribe (and yes, it made perfect sense in the story). The only bats in existence who were ever members of the Forgotten were either insane or brainwashed. They have all been cured and returned to the Bat tribe. Both Bratta and Bachell have been cured of the mind control that made them Forgotten spies. If they still have rebellious intentions, fine, but Bat NPCs do not. I lead the Bat tribe, and I have the tribe's fate planned out. If a civil war erupts in this tribe, it would completely contradict everything I have planned for the Bats. For you see, that is why I don't want the Forgotten to have anything to do with the Bats; it would ruin the perfect ending I have planned for them. If you want to know why, I'll tell you in Jammers.
OOC: Come on, jgread! Now you've made me curious about the ending.
Bliston's last name is Belkoroth though. But perhaps "Lavendarwing" was the original last name/maiden name of their mother? So Bratta chose to take her mother's last name instead? Also, Bliston's name is spelled "Bliston", not "Blistion".
That's a cool bio overall, but I'm going to need to null some parts that contradict continuity and/or previously established traits of other characters (don't worry, I won't null the whole bio, only parts). The nulled sections have been bolded and struck-through.
Reasons for nulling: •Bliston does not simply "snap" and obey his sister's whines. He is the most patient and smart bat (not to mention he's known Bratta his entire life), so he can put up with that kind of stuff longer than anyone else would.
•If anything, the bat tribe is the most gender-equal faction in Chima. Literally every female bat is a soldier, just like the males. The female bats do the exact same work and the exact same level of work as the males. The whole concept of gender is almost meaningless in the bat tribe, as bats of different genders are treated the same way.
•It has already been established that all Forgotten presence has been completely wiped away from the Bat tribe (and yes, it made perfect sense in the story). The only bats in existence who were ever members of the Forgotten were either insane or brainwashed. They have all been cured and returned to the Bat tribe. Both Bratta and Bachell have been cured of the mind control that made them Forgotten spies. If they still have rebellious intentions, fine, but Bat NPCs do not. I lead the Bat tribe, and I have the tribe's fate planned out. If a civil war erupts in this tribe, it would completely contradict everything I have planned for the Bats. For you see, that is why I don't want the Forgotten to have anything to do with the Bats; it would ruin the perfect ending I have planned for them. If you want to know why, I'll tell you in Jammers.
Ah, okay then, I don’t mind if the continuity is against me. I don’t mind at all!
OK, do you want me to tell you the future of the Bat tribe in jammers? Because I think you really need to see it. Then you'll know what I mean when I talk about the Forgotten's presence (or lack thereof) in the Bat tribe.
Bliston's last name is Belkoroth though. But perhaps "Lavendarwing" was the original last name/maiden name of their mother? So Bratta chose to take her mother's last name instead? Also, Bliston's name is spelled "Bliston", not "Blistion".
That's a cool bio overall, but I'm going to need to null some parts that contradict continuity and/or previously established traits of other characters (don't worry, I won't null the whole bio, only parts). The nulled sections have been bolded and struck-through.
Reasons for nulling: •Bliston does not simply "snap" and obey his sister's whines. He is the most patient and smart bat (not to mention he's known Bratta his entire life), so he can put up with that kind of stuff longer than anyone else would.
•If anything, the bat tribe is the most gender-equal faction in Chima. Literally every female bat is a soldier, just like the males. The female bats do the exact same work and the exact same level of work as the males. The whole concept of gender is almost meaningless in the bat tribe, as bats of different genders are treated the same way.
•It has already been established that all Forgotten presence has been completely wiped away from the Bat tribe (and yes, it made perfect sense in the story). The only bats in existence who were ever members of the Forgotten were either insane or brainwashed. They have all been cured and returned to the Bat tribe. Both Bratta and Bachell have been cured of the mind control that made them Forgotten spies. If they still have rebellious intentions, fine, but Bat NPCs do not. I lead the Bat tribe, and I have the tribe's fate planned out. If a civil war erupts in this tribe, it would completely contradict everything I have planned for the Bats. For you see, that is why I don't want the Forgotten to have anything to do with the Bats; it would ruin the perfect ending I have planned for them. If you want to know why, I'll tell you in Jammers.
OOC: Come on, jgread! Now you've made me curious about the ending.
Imma redo the bio for her. 
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The only similarity is the relation to Scorpions, and the name, which I think is a good name for a scorpion character. 
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Also, Bliston's name is spelled "Bliston", not "Blistion".