Great chapter, K66! Wow, that last bit quite intense. I think this was the first time we see Rose and Lloyd almost on opposing sides. If not the first, then definitely a rare time.
Great chapter, K66! Wow, that last bit quite intense. I think this was the first time we see Rose and Lloyd almost on opposing sides. If not the first, then definitely a rare time.
Yeah... they’re going through a rough time.
A rough time indeed. I'll be looking forward to it.
I guess he's like a Pokémon; everyone wants to catch him.
*shrug*
Why, thank you. See, Miss K?? I'm not always spontaneous and psychotic!! I can be deep, too! And no, sorry, miss. That's LordTigress-trademarked. (jk of course you can use it. )
I’ve heard you say that before.
Sweet.
I guess I just like the idea of Lloyd being compared to a Pokémon. "The Garmadons, gotta catch 'em all!!"
Random: Do you have the rest of LWaP planned out in your head, or is it still kind of a work in progress?
I guess I just like the idea of Lloyd being compared to a Pokémon. "The Garmadons, gotta catch 'em all!!"
Random: Do you have the rest of LWaP planned out in your head, or is it still kind of a work in progress?
Lol.
Sorta. I know where I want to get to, but I don't know how I'm gonna get there. I really write, edit, sometimes scrap the idea I'm working on, write, edit, see if I'm happy with it, write some more, edit some more, scrap the last part of that idea, write some more, edit, post.
I guess I just like the idea of Lloyd being compared to a Pokémon. "The Garmadons, gotta catch 'em all!!"
Random: Do you have the rest of LWaP planned out in your head, or is it still kind of a work in progress?
Lol.
Sorta. I know where I want to get to, but I don't know how I'm gonna get there. I really write, edit, sometimes scrap the idea I'm working on, write, edit, see if I'm happy with it, write some more, edit some more, scrap the last part of that idea, write some more, edit, post.
Ahh, I see. I've done that before -- up until I started the habit of planning the story in my head for six months before so much as writing a single word. Do you wish you had planned more before you'd started out, or does this system work for you?
Sorta. I know where I want to get to, but I don't know how I'm gonna get there. I really write, edit, sometimes scrap the idea I'm working on, write, edit, see if I'm happy with it, write some more, edit some more, scrap the last part of that idea, write some more, edit, post.
Ahh, I see. I've done that before -- up until I started the habit of planning the story in my head for six months before so much as writing a single word. Do you wish you had planned more before you'd started out, or does this system work for you?
Fun. I try to know where I want to get to and go from there. It depends. Most of the time I'm alright with it; other times I hate it when I write a part and want to hit myself for writing it ans not thinking it through further. That part with them being right outside the door is a very good example. I rewrote the next part a few times because of it.
Ahh, I see. I've done that before -- up until I started the habit of planning the story in my head for six months before so much as writing a single word. Do you wish you had planned more before you'd started out, or does this system work for you?
Fun. I try to know where I want to get to and go from there. It depends. Most of the time I'm alright with it; other times I hate it when I write a part and want to hit myself for writing it ans not thinking it through further. That part with them being right outside the door is a very good example. I rewrote the next part a few times because of it.
Mm, I see what you mean. Something I do for more complicated stories is that I jot down notes of the basic timeline I want, the loose ends and red herrings that have been previously mentioned, and all the important and significant scenes I know I want for the story. This way I have all the highlights I need to remember in front of me on paper - or on screen -- and it's easier to organize it in my head. I don't know if this would make it a little more stressful for you or would help, but you could try it.
Fun. I try to know where I want to get to and go from there. It depends. Most of the time I'm alright with it; other times I hate it when I write a part and want to hit myself for writing it ans not thinking it through further. That part with them being right outside the door is a very good example. I rewrote the next part a few times because of it.
Mm, I see what you mean. Something I do for more complicated stories is that I jot down notes of the basic timeline I want, the loose ends and red herrings that have been previously mentioned, and all the important and significant scenes I know I want for the story. This way I have all the highlights I need to remember in front of me on paper - or on screen -- and it's easier to organize it in my head. I don't know if this would make it a little more stressful for you or would help, but you could try it.
Hmm. I might try that at some point. Thanks for the tip.
Mm, I see what you mean. Something I do for more complicated stories is that I jot down notes of the basic timeline I want, the loose ends and red herrings that have been previously mentioned, and all the important and significant scenes I know I want for the story. This way I have all the highlights I need to remember in front of me on paper - or on screen -- and it's easier to organize it in my head. I don't know if this would make it a little more stressful for you or would help, but you could try it.
Hmm. I might try that at some point. Thanks for the tip.
I look at the door, my heart racing. "W-What do we do?" I turn back and look at Jay, who was trying to sound brave. I meet my Mom's calm eyes. You're not safe, a voice in my head tells me. I look back at the door. You need to leave. Everyone else starts chattering away, but I don't hear any of it. Leave. I think it slowly, proccessing the new idea. Yes. Leave so you might keep your family safe from yourself. "Leave," I whisper, barely heard over the chatter. "Lloyd?" I look up reluctantly at my Mom. Her eyes looking worried, almost as if she could read my thoughts. Do it for her, the voice says. "Her." I can't help repeating it in the whisper. "Nya!" Wu calls. "Lloyd's in a trance!" Has he been watching me, too? I barely notice the cold splash of water that hits my face. Your friends can't stop me, Lloyd. "It didn't work," Nya says, sounding defeated. "R-r-ro...." I lose the thought I was trying to say. I get a weird headache. Almost as if something is blocking my thought process. "Great! Now we lost him again!" Kai fumes. I look up at him and get up without thinking. "You will never free him from my grasp.” My voice sounds like mine, but it’s not. It’s angry. Before I even realize it, I raise my fist and punch Kai hard in the nose. He falls back onto the floor; he was not expecting that. Before the others can process what’s going on, I kick Nya’s feet, sweeping them out from under her. I’m about to hit Jay in the stomach when Zane catches my arm and flips me. I gasp as the breath is knocked out of me. I look up, dazed at my Mother’s face. “Lloyd?” Everything fades to black.
I wake up with a massive headache. I shuffle a groan. “You did well.” Everything is black. I groan in my head. “What do you want, Rose?” I hate myself for sounding so cruel and mean to her. It’s not the same Rose. I tell myself. “Now what did I do to deserve this kind of treatment?” I look to my left, putting a hand on my throbbing head. “I can assure you I am the same Rose you know and love.” “Really?” I snap. “You haven’t done a thing so far to prove that to me!”
I wake up with a massive headache. I shuffle a groan. “You did well.” Everything is black. I groan in my head. “What do you want, Rose?” I hate myself for sounding so cruel and mean to her. It’s not the same Rose. I tell myself. “Now what did I do to deserve this kind of treatment?” I look to my left, putting a hand on my throbbing head. “I can assure you I am the same Rose you know and love.” “Really?” I snap. “You haven’t done a thing so far to prove that to me!”
Bad Rose.
Why are all the bricking girls turning on Lloyd all of a sudden?!?
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