The Awakening Dawn

(Okay, don't cringe too much, and keep in mind that I wrote this when I was 11-12 so yeah, also I got out most of the grammar errors, so don't complain, there were a lot more)

Prologue

"Remember! Come back by dinner!" Called Lilac Dazzle, a tall, brown-haired elf, with sparkling green eyes, and whose hair was littered with pink petals. An earth elf she was and was Bloom's mother.
"Yes Mother!" Bloom Dazzle, a brown-haired, green-eyed girl, wearing a long white dress laced with pink flowers, called back cheerfully as she skipped down her blue stone path.
"Hello, Father!" She waved at a tall, light elf, with white hair (not because he was old, but because he was a light elf) and grey eyes.
"Hello Bloom, my hibiscus. What have you planned for today?" Said Glint Dazzle. Bloom's father.
"Oh, nothing much," she said with a twinkle in her eye.
"Okay, go have fun. But remember, but be back for dinner." He said.
Bloom smiled. It was great being part light elf and part earth elf.
She soon was out of her yard and was on the road, she quickly and quietly closed her gate, as she was told to do every time she opened it.
She scanned the streets, looking at all the different kinds of elves, but not a single darkness elf to be seen. She knew this was because darkness is weak to light, which means they can never live in harmony together.
She waved at a short, red and yellow haired, fire elf, and a tall, silver and white haired, air elf.
They waved back at her, then began to run up to Bloom. The air elf leaving behind the other.
"Hello, Firdem" Bloom said to the fire elf. She was wearing a red dress that had a stripe of yellow at the bottom. "Hello Clouderia." Bloom said to the air elf. She was wearing a purple dress with a long silver cape.
"Greetings Bloom, doth thou care to go to the park?" Asked Clouderia, in her "normal" way of talking.
"Okay, I'll be Clouderia's translator: she wants to know if you want to go to the park." Said Firdem.
"Okay sure!" Said Bloom.
As they were walking, they came across a girl of black hair that was in a braid that snaked down her back. She was wearing a black dress.
"Who is she?" Clouderia inquired.
"I don't know, she looks suspicious. Wait! What are you doing!?" Firdem yelled at Bloom who was walking towards the stranger.
"Hello." Bloom said.

Chapter One

(guys it takes a while to get better, but it does, trust me. I didn’t really know what I was doing here, but there a plan later on.)

**Eight years later**

Bloom Dazzles eyes fluttered open to see her sky blue ceiling. It was a long night, and she welcomed the new day warmly.
No one had found out what had happened to Eve, or where she disappeared too, and everyone had given up the search.
Bloom was hiding in the shadows, but not intentionally.
She walked downstairs to make her breakfast and found that her Mother had already made it. Her Father wasn't up yet.
"Good morning Bloom!" Said Lilac Dazzle cheerfully.
"Good morning Mother!" Bloom said back.
"What are your plans for today?" Lilac asked.
"I don't know, maybe meet up with my friends." She replied.
"All of them?" Lilac said.
"Maybe." Bloom answered.
"Well, finish up then." Said the earth elf.
So Bloom quickly finished up her fruit, hugged her mother, and went outside.
Bloom had grown into a beautiful lady, her brown hair with white highlights flowed in the wind, so did the long train of her light pink dress.
She whistled a shrill whistle, and a light bird gracefully flew up to her.
"Now, messenger, go to Clouderia's house, Firdem's house and Shwella's boat, oh, and if she's not there, try her beach house, and tell them to meet me in the park, near the big tree, please," Bloom asked the bird, and the bird flew off with her message is mind. "Thank you!" She yelled after it.
She began walking towards the park. Then started to sing a song.
"Nice singing." Smirked a voice that came from behind a tree.
"Ugg, Fwrem, quit spying on me." Bloom said in annoyance.
"Sure, whatever." Said Fwerm, a tall fire Elf, with red, red hair, black eyes, and a wry expression.
"Just, leave me alone for once!" She said walking past him. Then she burst into a run and arrived at a giant tree.

Chapter Two 

As the dragon attacked Shwella's dragon, Lara (Firdem's dragon), rushed up to help its friend, Whoon (Shwella's dragon), roared something in dragon language, and Lara roared back.

Whoon barrel rolled, dropping Shwella off his back. Lara, made a fast dive towards Shwella, and caught her mid-air, to put her on the ground for safety.
Then she flew up again, attacking the dragon mid-flight.

But darkness is one of the strongest elements.

Lara shot a fireball at the evil dragon, which it dodged easily.
The two dragons flew at the one, Whoon, making a cloud of lightning around it, but the darkness dragon moved behind Whoon.

"What do we do!" Screamed Firdem in dismay.
"I know!" Said Bloom, with determination sounding her voice.
"Then thou must act swiftly!" Said Clouderia. Then she noticed that Shwella was unconscious. "Bloom! An unfortunate event hath landed on Shwella!" Said Clouderia.
"And you are the healer!" She said.

Bloom looked down at her hands, she had to move quickly, so she could help Shwella, who was getting over taken by the power of darkness.
From her hands, a little light ball started to form. That light ball grew bigger and bigger, until she could not hold it back any longer. She let it go in the form of a light beam, it hit the evil dragon, who let out a tremendous roar, and flew off.

Bloom ran up to Shwella. The dragons landed. Bloom started making a green light beam coming from her hands, which began to heal her.
Bloom was an excellent healer, but that was really the only thing she knew how to do, the laser beam was only by accident, she hadn't wanted to study her powers, because what she did to Eve scared her out of it.

Shwella woke up coughing up a dark fluid.
"Shwella, what happened up there?" Asked Firdem.
"I don't know! Whoon and I were just flying, and then, and then..." Shwella said.
"You don't have to say anymore." Said Firdem. "So, Bloom, why did you call us?" She Asked.

Bloom looked into the sky, the wind flowing perfectly, the birds singing beautifully, and the flowers so bright and colorful, as if nothing had happened. The wind rustled through her hair. Then she thought about Eve. What had happened to her. she thought.
"Anyone care about going on a quest?" She asked.

Chapter Three Part Two

"Hushhhh! Did thou hear that?" Asked Clouderia.
Everyone shook their heads.

Clouderia made a sudden move outside, they heard a scuffle, and Clouderia came back inside.
"Spy." She said shortly.

(I promise this gets better in a bit)

Chapter: Five

"Bloom! Bloom!" Called Syania.

She could hear Clouderia give a cry. "Come swiftly, over here!" She cried softly.

Shwella and Syania came running over to where they could hear her, she was kneeling over a huddled, motionless body, it was quite definable, it was Bloom.

All of them wear speechless, until finally Clouderia spoke.
"She is breathing." She said.

"Great." Said Shwella in relief, then her voice went tense. "Do you think that it was that thing we heard?" She asked.

"Maybe." Said Syania, she was deep in thought, about many things.

"Look!" Shwella said, pointing to the sky, and interrupting Syania's thoughts.

The three elves looked up, their eyes landed on a crow, it's throat gave a deep call, 'Ca-aw! Ca-aw!' And three other crows joined it.

"One does not (simply walk into Mordor. I'm kidding, I'm kidding) spy many crows in Elevandale, it is a riddle, of what that means I can not tell." Said Clouderia.

"Look, Bloom is waking up." Pointed Syania.

Bloom sputtered, then woke up, then sat up, her eyes opened, they had a dazed look in them.

She began to cough.

"Are you okay?" Asked Shwella.

"I-I think so." Bloom replied in a shaky voice.
"What happened?" Asked Syania.

"I'm-I'm n-not sure." She said back.

"Regan thou's voice, then tell us what you do know, in detail." Said Clouderia.

"O-okay." Bloom answered.

"Can you walk?" Asked Syania, Bloom nodded. Then stood up.

"Ahh, here." Shwella said, then whistled. "Ride on Whoon." She said.
Whoon walked up, then placed Bloom on his back.

"Well, second thoughts, clearly we shall all ride on Whoon." Said Shwella.
And they did. Each one in deep thought.