Sorry LordTigress and Gnuehchcaz , you two probably have a ton of likes from me now. BUT I AM FINALLY CAUGHT UP YAY!!! And I am so glad I am up at 1:36am finishing this. Honestly worth every bit of staying awake. (And if I stopped, I wouldn't have been able to sleep anyway.) I must say, you guys, this is like Princess Bride level funny stuff. perhaps a film adaption is in store The story is amazing and captivating, the characters are lovable, and the lines are memorable. I must draw fanart asap. Anyhoo, I know I've joined right before the end, but I can't wait to see what's next!
I see absolutely nothing to be sorry for. I feel bad for depriving you of sleep... XD Oh my gosh--thank you so much!! That's super flattering! asdfghjk I wanna see this fanart stat. We've had a lot of fun just messing around but also building a story out of our crazy idea. I think I'm very lucky to have Zach as my writing partner. Thank you so much!
Don't feel bad lol, it was my choice anyway xD You're quite welcome! Oh fanart, yes hehe. Here we go:
Hope you like it! Okay, okay, I'll do some REAL fanart soon, don't worry. Wow, it's so crazy how well this story turned out! The plot is quite impressive, especially since two different people are writing the story. You and Zach are very talented!! x3
I'm sorry I just have to reply to this (finally started reading this because I have all this nice time ) This part literally made me laugh out loud. xD Also this is great so far. I know I'm about a year behind still, but I'll catch up soon hehe.
"Be free!" She said to the chickens, but the chickens didn't understand. "Bok bok bok." She said as she pretended to be a chicken leaving the barn, but the chickens still didn't understand. "Ugh, fine." She got some chicken feed and spread it outside, and the chickens began to follow.
I'm sorry I just have to reply to this (finally started reading this because I have all this nice time ) This part literally made me laugh out loud. xD Also this is great so far. I know I'm about a year behind still, but I'll catch up soon hehe.
I'm glad you enjoyed that part! This part was one of my favorites and most memorable moments to write.
Temptation opened the bottle and tried to hold it steady so he wouldn't spill. He watched as Joy was being dragged across the ground, then slowly raised up toward Lord Fear's mouth.
The jaws of the Maximus Tentaculous was big and wide, and had lots of little teeth that could pierce any armor. To Lord Fear, Joy would just be an appetizer.
Temptation had never felt so scared in his whole life, seeing Joy being swallowed alive, but he knew what he had to do. Right when he tentacle clutching onto Joy was just about to enter the jaws, he let go of his other hand.
What took only a few seconds, felt like a sequence in slow motion.
He fell from a long distance, free-falling toward the tentacle that held Joy's legs tightly. He looked toward Lord Fear's mouth and counted to three.
"One... two... three..." He was in view of the mouth, and right in that second he hurled the bottle and the potion into Lord Fear's mouth. He watched as it was swallowed easily.
Next, he looked downward and saw Joy hanging upside down like a bat, scared for her life. From her perspective she saw a mouth, but then she saw Temptation right in front of her falling "up".
Temptation reached her with his arms and hugged her tightly as he fell, and the force of the fall was just enough to make her legs slip free from Lord Fear's tentacle grasp.
With Joy in his arms, Temptation twisted his body a few directions to manipulate their angle, which led to them landing back onto the rocky floor on Temptation's back.
Both were knocked unconscious for only a few seconds. Joy woke again watching Temptation with his eyes closed, and turned around to see Lord Fear, still massive and big, but somehow frozen for just a little bit. So much happened in about ten seconds of time, and Joy was still processing all of it.
All I can say is...
Thanks again! Wow, you read really quickly. I just wrote that part a couple weeks ago.
Sorry LordTigress and Gnuehchcaz , you two probably have a ton of likes from me now. BUT I AM FINALLY CAUGHT UP YAY!!! And I am so glad I am up at 1:36am finishing this. Honestly worth every bit of staying awake. (And if I stopped, I wouldn't have been able to sleep anyway.) I must say, you guys, this is like Princess Bride level funny stuff. perhaps a film adaption is in store The story is amazing and captivating, the characters are lovable, and the lines are memorable. I must draw fanart asap. Anyhoo, I know I've joined right before the end, but I can't wait to see what's next!
I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story, Aurora! I'm quite surprised you read it from beginning to now in a single sitting and went through all 148 pages to read it all!
Thanks again! I can definitely see the Princess Bride level stuff in this story as well. I probably got inspiration from it as well for some parts. You really did made it just in time right before the end. It must've been quite interesting to read from the beginning to the last part and realize there's more to come soon! Awesome, I can't wait to see your fanart.
I'm sorry I just have to reply to this (finally started reading this because I have all this nice time ) This part literally made me laugh out loud. xD Also this is great so far. I know I'm about a year behind still, but I'll catch up soon hehe.
That was almost a year ago already!?! O.O
Yep! And in less than a month we will be approaching the 2nd year anniversary of Tales of Desires!
I'm sorry I just have to reply to this (finally started reading this because I have all this nice time ) This part literally made me laugh out loud. xD Also this is great so far. I know I'm about a year behind still, but I'll catch up soon hehe.
That was almost a year ago already!?! O.O
I think we've been writing this for-- no... no, it can't be... two years? Someone tell me I'm wrong. >.>
I see absolutely nothing to be sorry for. I feel bad for depriving you of sleep... XD Oh my gosh--thank you so much!! That's super flattering! asdfghjk I wanna see this fanart stat. We've had a lot of fun just messing around but also building a story out of our crazy idea. I think I'm very lucky to have Zach as my writing partner. Thank you so much!
Don't feel bad lol, it was my choice anyway xD You're quite welcome! Oh fanart, yes hehe. Here we go:
Hope you like it! Okay, okay, I'll do some REAL fanart soon, don't worry. Wow, it's so crazy how well this story turned out! The plot is quite impressive, especially since two different people are writing the story. You and Zach are very talented!! x3
XD Wow! Stupendous! Marvelous! You've captured everything deep and beautiful about our beloved characters! Yay. I'm a little shocked myself, to be honest... I mean, most co-writes get confusing and dwindle into inactivity, but even though we didn't plan out the plot and had no idea what we wanted the end goal to be... wow. 0.0 Thank you!! That's really encouraging. x3
I'm sorry I just have to reply to this (finally started reading this because I have all this nice time ) This part literally made me laugh out loud. xD Also this is great so far. I know I'm about a year behind still, but I'll catch up soon hehe.
I'm glad you enjoyed that part! This part was one of my favorites and most memorable moments to write.
Sorry LordTigress and Gnuehchcaz , you two probably have a ton of likes from me now. BUT I AM FINALLY CAUGHT UP YAY!!! And I am so glad I am up at 1:36am finishing this. Honestly worth every bit of staying awake. (And if I stopped, I wouldn't have been able to sleep anyway.) I must say, you guys, this is like Princess Bride level funny stuff. perhaps a film adaption is in store The story is amazing and captivating, the characters are lovable, and the lines are memorable. I must draw fanart asap. Anyhoo, I know I've joined right before the end, but I can't wait to see what's next!
I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story, Aurora! I'm quite surprised you read it from beginning to now in a single sitting and went through all 148 pages to read it all!
Thanks again! I can definitely see the Princess Bride level stuff in this story as well. I probably got inspiration from it as well for some parts. You really did made it just in time right before the end. It must've been quite interesting to read from the beginning to the last part and realize there's more to come soon! Awesome, I can't wait to see your fanart.
It was too good to "put down"!! I had so much time too. xD
That's awesome! The Princess Bride is one of my favorite books and movies, so I can say I really enjoyed it. It was pretty interesting, though I actually did not realize you guys were this close to the end when I started reading. I knew it was ongoing, but wow when it ends... I hope there's a sequel. xD I did some fanart (kinda xD) and showed it to Tigress. legomessage.boards.net/post/475198/thread I'll make some real fanart soon, dw.
Don't feel bad lol, it was my choice anyway xD You're quite welcome! Oh fanart, yes hehe. Here we go:
Hope you like it! Okay, okay, I'll do some REAL fanart soon, don't worry. Wow, it's so crazy how well this story turned out! The plot is quite impressive, especially since two different people are writing the story. You and Zach are very talented!! x3
XD Wow! Stupendous! Marvelous! You've captured everything deep and beautiful about our beloved characters! Yay. I'm a little shocked myself, to be honest... I mean, most co-writes get confusing and dwindle into inactivity, but even though we didn't plan out the plot and had no idea what we wanted the end goal to be... wow. 0.0 Thank you!! That's really encouraging. x3
Thank you, thank you xD It's one of my best works. (the real fanart is 2nd in my mental queue of things to draw :3) Yeah I've tried cowrites before, and they just either died or strained the friendship xD You're welcome! This is truly impressive (really I can't stop saying that word xD). I think it's because this story means a lot to both of you and your personalities don't clash when it comes to adding ideas.
I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story, Aurora! I'm quite surprised you read it from beginning to now in a single sitting and went through all 148 pages to read it all!
Thanks again! I can definitely see the Princess Bride level stuff in this story as well. I probably got inspiration from it as well for some parts. You really did made it just in time right before the end. It must've been quite interesting to read from the beginning to the last part and realize there's more to come soon! Awesome, I can't wait to see your fanart.
It was too good to "put down"!! I had so much time too. xD
That's awesome! The Princess Bride is one of my favorite books and movies, so I can say I really enjoyed it. It was pretty interesting, though I actually did not realize you guys were this close to the end when I started reading. I knew it was ongoing, but wow when it ends... I hope there's a sequel. xD I did some fanart (kinda xD) and showed it to Tigress. legomessage.boards.net/post/475198/thread I'll make some real fanart soon, dw.
Awesome. That's good too.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I kind of liked the dynamics of the guy and the girl of The Princess Bride. I see. Despite the story coming to an end, it seems you really started resonating with our characters so quickly too. As for a sequel, we've thought about it, but we are also getting busier IRL, so it'll be hard to write a sequel if we choose to do one. Ah yes, I did see that and it looked brilliant. Hehe, take your time and have fun with it.
BUT I AM FINALLY CAUGHT UP YAY!!! And I am so glad I am up at 1:36am finishing this. ![[lenny]](http://storage.proboards.com/6672327/images/7elNEqtPK2hcSAiIMFNh.png)
The story is amazing and captivating, the characters are lovable, and the lines are memorable. I must draw fanart asap. 
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Thank you so much! 
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BUT I AM FINALLY CAUGHT UP YAY!!! And I am so glad I am up at 1:36am finishing this. 
