Ninja would be alright. Samurai would be better. Knight would be best tho
You're already had Samurai Warrior, and you can't go back to Knight.
What about Aztec Warrior, Conquistador, Jester, Royal Guard, Musketeer, Pirate, Revolutionary Soldier, Cowboy, Detective, Bandit, Pilot, Hippie, Disco Dude, Rapper, Spaceman, Galaxy Patrol, or Alien?
I wanted to go down this list and make jokes about each of the ranks.
Apparently they were too 'offensive', which is a just nonsense given that most of the kinds of people in these ranks no longer exist. I'm gonna have to try and get a second opinion on them at some point, but know that what I would've said was funny if I do say so myself
You're already had Samurai Warrior, and you can't go back to Knight.
What about Aztec Warrior, Conquistador, Jester, Royal Guard, Musketeer, Pirate, Revolutionary Soldier, Cowboy, Detective, Bandit, Pilot, Hippie, Disco Dude, Rapper, Spaceman, Galaxy Patrol, or Alien?
I wanted to go down this list and make jokes about each of the ranks.
Apparently they were too 'offensive', which is a just nonsense given that most of the kinds of people in these ranks no longer exist. I'm gonna have to try and get a second opinion on them at some point, but know that what I would've said was funny if I do say so myself
[ Is this first person or third person? I'm comfortable in either writing form. ]
Mock, upon hearing the news, glances around wearily with fear. Seeing LordTigress standing idly, having just heard the news, he runs to her. "What're we gonna do now?!" He asks urgently. "I'll be honest, I found this room of comics and wasn't paying an ounce of attention to what was going on."
[Oh, so we're doing it like this now?]
Tigress blinks when she realizes someone is addressing her, then relaxes when she sees it's her brother. She gives as shrug, but replies. "I dunno about you and the rest of the gang, but I wanna check out those tunnels." At this a mischievous glint comes to her eyes. "If I were a smasher, I'd totally use those tunnels as a way to get around to my victims and escape quickly. Maybe the culprit left a clue." She pauses, then adds. "Plus, I want to find out where my stuff has gone. Some of it is missing from my suitcase. I was reading one of those Ranger's Apprentice books, and I was totally left at a cliffhanger when I lost it!"
HEY FOLKS. Remember when I said, "I won't disappear again."? Well shoot, it happened again.
There was a bit of an emergency but it's all good now.
Before we begin, I wanted to change things up a bit. Emarcee suggested that instead of butchering your characters both literally and figuratively, I could give you situations and environmental changes and you guys could control your own dialogue. Which is a fantabulous idea if I do say so myself. If you're not happy with the changes please let me know. :3
Your little group is becoming tense and nervous.
Items have been going missing from everyones rooms. Halen's satchel disappeared along with various items from Tigress's suitcase.
Someone's tampered with the security cameras.
Someone's been using the tunnels.
Someone is not who they seem.
Where will you go?
Yaaay so dramatic and spooky
Oh, well, I'm glad everything's better now.
Tigress, after discovering the loss of a few items from her suitcase, grabs a flashlight, her pocketknife, and a length of rope and goes off to find the entrance to the tunnels and explore -- she hopes she can find a clue to who the smasher is.
HEY FOLKS. Remember when I said, "I won't disappear again."? Well shoot, it happened again.
There was a bit of an emergency but it's all good now.
Before we begin, I wanted to change things up a bit. Emarcee suggested that instead of butchering your characters both literally and figuratively, I could give you situations and environmental changes and you guys could control your own dialogue. Which is a fantabulous idea if I do say so myself. If you're not happy with the changes please let me know. :3
Your little group is becoming tense and nervous.
Items have been going missing from everyones rooms. Halen's satchel disappeared along with various items from Tigress's suitcase.
[ Is this first person or third person? I'm comfortable in either writing form. ]
Mock, upon hearing the news, glances around wearily with fear. Seeing LordTigress standing idly, having just heard the news, he runs to her. "What're we gonna do now?!" He asks urgently. "I'll be honest, I found this room of comics and wasn't paying an ounce of attention to what was going on."
[Oh, so we're doing it like this now?]
Tigress blinks when she realizes someone is addressing her, then relaxes when she sees it's her brother. She gives as shrug, but replies. "I dunno about you and the rest of the gang, but I wanna check out those tunnels." At this a mischievous glint comes to her eyes. "If I were a smasher, I'd totally use those tunnels as a way to get around to my victims and escape quickly. Maybe the culprit left a clue." She pauses, then adds. "Plus, I want to find out where my stuff has gone. Some of it is missing from my suitcase. I was reading one of those Ranger's Apprentice books, and I was totally left at a cliffhanger when I lost it!"
*Busts into your conversation like a huge dork* GASHP OMEHGOODNESS. You read Ranger's Apprentice? WHO'S YOUR FAVORITE CHARACTER? WHAT'S YOUR FAVORITE BOOK? *Grabs you by the shoulders and violently shakes you* TELL MEEEEEE.
[ Is this first person or third person? I'm comfortable in either writing form. ]
Mock, upon hearing the news, glances around wearily with fear. Seeing LordTigress standing idly, having just heard the news, he runs to her. "What're we gonna do now?!" He asks urgently. "I'll be honest, I found this room of comics and wasn't paying an ounce of attention to what was going on."
[Oh, so we're doing it like this now?]
Tigress blinks when she realizes someone is addressing her, then relaxes when she sees it's her brother. She gives as shrug, but replies. "I dunno about you and the rest of the gang, but I wanna check out those tunnels." At this a mischievous glint comes to her eyes. "If I were a smasher, I'd totally use those tunnels as a way to get around to my victims and escape quickly. Maybe the culprit left a clue." She pauses, then adds. "Plus, I want to find out where my stuff has gone. Some of it is missing from my suitcase. I was reading one of those Ranger's Apprentice books, and I was totally left at a cliffhanger when I lost it!"
HEY FOLKS. Remember when I said, "I won't disappear again."? Well shoot, it happened again.
There was a bit of an emergency but it's all good now.
Before we begin, I wanted to change things up a bit. Emarcee suggested that instead of butchering your characters both literally and figuratively, I could give you situations and environmental changes and you guys could control your own dialogue. Which is a fantabulous idea if I do say so myself. If you're not happy with the changes please let me know. :3
Your little group is becoming tense and nervous.
Items have been going missing from everyones rooms. Halen's satchel disappeared along with various items from Tigress's suitcase.
Tigress blinks when she realizes someone is addressing her, then relaxes when she sees it's her brother. She gives as shrug, but replies. "I dunno about you and the rest of the gang, but I wanna check out those tunnels." At this a mischievous glint comes to her eyes. "If I were a smasher, I'd totally use those tunnels as a way to get around to my victims and escape quickly. Maybe the culprit left a clue." She pauses, then adds. "Plus, I want to find out where my stuff has gone. Some of it is missing from my suitcase. I was reading one of those Ranger's Apprentice books, and I was totally left at a cliffhanger when I lost it!"
*Busts into your conversation like a huge dork* GASHP OMEHGOODNESS. You read Ranger's Apprentice? WHO'S YOUR FAVORITE CHARACTER? WHAT'S YOUR FAVORITE BOOK? *Grabs you by the shoulders and violently shakes you* TELL MEEEEEE.
She's just beginning; I think she's only read The Ruins of Gorlan, although she might have started The Burning Bridge.
HEY FOLKS. Remember when I said, "I won't disappear again."? Well shoot, it happened again.
There was a bit of an emergency but it's all good now.
Before we begin, I wanted to change things up a bit. Emarcee suggested that instead of butchering your characters both literally and figuratively, I could give you situations and environmental changes and you guys could control your own dialogue. Which is a fantabulous idea if I do say so myself. If you're not happy with the changes please let me know. :3
Your little group is becoming tense and nervous.
Items have been going missing from everyones rooms. Halen's satchel disappeared along with various items from Tigress's suitcase.
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If you're not happy with the changes please let me know. :3
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