-last edited on Jan 30, 2018 23:05:27 GMT by BlueberryJayPie: Imma perfectionist yo
Post by BlueberryJayPie on Jan 30, 2018 23:01:05 GMT
So... Um. Hi there! It is I JayPIE! I like Ninjago, so I'm writing a Ninjago story. Because that's what you do on the Ninjago stories board.
...
Yee.
I'm kinda nervous about writing a FANTABULOUS ACTION PACKED STORY. Because... Weeeell
I kinda stink at writing. I've had a story idea for a long time now, but I never did anything with it because I was afraid it wasn't good enough.
BUT TODAY IS A NEW DAY! I MAY DOUBT MY ABILITIES, BUT I HAVE A DREAM! A DREAM TO ACTUALLY FINISH A DARN PROJECT AND BE PROUD OF IT. YES FELLOW NINJAGO FANS. TODAY I, JAYPIE PRESENT TO YOU A STORY. A STORY THAT I PROBABLY SHOULD HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT MORE BUT WHATEVER.
Friends lets begin. Shall we?
(PS ask a doctor before reading, for you might go blind because of lameness. )
Chapter 1
Skye had been walking for some time now.
His footsteps echoed through the empty streets and alleyways of the darkening city of Ninjago as he hurried along. He would have been home by now, had he kept to his usual route. But today was different. Today he was avoiding someone, a certain person who he had no intention of running into. Someone who enjoyed making his life miserable.
Of course that someone was Connor Godfrey. A tall skinny (and not very bright) ninth-grader who went to the same school that Skye attended. That afternoon he and his three cronies were busy teasing the unfortunate smaller boy.
"That backpack of yours looks like a piece of junk." Connor had snorted. "We should clean it up for you-"
"You're not touching my backpack." Skye interrupted irritably. He was becoming sick of the older boy and his stupid bunch of friends, and their constant barrage of insults and names. He clenched his fists.
"You guys are really getting on my nerves. So if you wouldn't mind, I would appreciate it if you left now-"
"Or what?" Connor snapped suddenly. "You'll go crying to your older sister?" The boys around him snickered. "Speaking of which, she still can't afford to pack you a lunch for school can she?"
What? No! You just... Never see me with it. That's all. Now PLEASE get lost." Skye said. It was far from the truth and he knew it. So did Connor.
"I bet the witch is always lazing around. Can't keep a job for a week." He sneered. Skye stiffened. Calling him names and messing with his stuff was infuriating. But calling his older sister Lynn a lazy witch, was a different matter altogether. Connor seemed to notice the smaller boy's anger and continued to speak more confidently.
"Or she's a selfish pig who keeps it all to herself. Isn't she?"
Something inside Skye snapped. He knew in the past, that if he picked a fight with the bigger boys, he would fail miserably. So he had never raised a finger to defend himself in any way ever. But now. Now was different. This... This lousy jerk had crossed a line. He had insulted Lynn. Hard working, kind, patient, and caring Lynn.
Without thinking he swung a clumsy, but still powerful punch at the bully, nearly shattering his oversized nose and sending him sprawling. The teens around him all gasped in surprise. Small wimpy kids had never punched Connor before.
Trembling slightly, Skye stared at Connor for a second or two. The bigger boy groaned slightly and gingerly tapped his bleeding nose. His eyes widened as he tried to staunch the flow of blood coming from his injured nose.
"You little punk! You broke my nose! He broke my nose!" He screeched, his voice rising in pitch.
That's when they had hit him.
He stopped walking now, and fixed his dusty ballcap, trying desperately to obscure the oversized bruise on the side of his head. When one of the bullies had socked him in the jaw, he had stumbled sideways and hit his head painfully on one of the school lockers. Hense the bruise. He hid it now so his sister wouldn't see it. He knew that it was a frugal attempt, but he didn't want her to worry. If she didn't see it she wouldn't worry. And worrying about her goofy little brother would add to the stress of her day to day life of caring for her orphaned siblings. That was the last thing she needed.
He also knew that coming home late would drive her nuts as well, but Skye would rather face an angry sister, then to run into Connor and his gang. He had a good idea of what would happen if he did, and it wasn't pretty.
As Skye neared the old apartment building that he had learned to call home, he fumbled in his jean pockets for his key to the front door, found it and stepped onto the front porch. He tested the doorknob and sighed as he found it was unlocked. It was never supposed to be unlocked.
"Lynn must be more stressed out than usual." He muttered underneath his breath as he entered the shabby little apartment. He was immediately greeted enthusiastically by his younger brother Benny.
"Skye's home! You're home! Me and Lynn were just about to go looking for you, she said she was going to give you a piece of her mind when we found you. Where have you been? Did you make the wrong friends? Did you guys vandalize a bench? What's wrong with your head-"
Benny's barrage of meaningess questions was suddenly interupted by a loud screech.
"SKYE, WHERE IN THE BLITHERING BLUE BLAZES HAVE YOU BEEN?" The hard-working, kind, patient, and caring Lynn demanded.
So yee! That's it for now. Bye.
PS yes I am aware that Benny said "Me and Lynn" instead of "Lynn and me " ETC. It was intentional because he's like 10. So yee. o3o
Post by BlueberryJayPie on Jan 31, 2018 21:30:00 GMT
Part two ya'll.
"SKYE WHERE IN THE BLITHERING BLUE BLAZES HAVE YOU BEEN?" the hard-working, kind, patient and caring Lynn demanded
Skye flinched.
"Calm down Lynn, I can explain-" "Do you have any idea how worried I was? It's six o clock for Pete's sake! You were supposed to be home three hours ago!" She interrupted her voice rising in pitch as she continued to rant. "You could have been hurt! Or lost! Were you lost? or run over by a car, or kidnapped, or hurt, or worse!"
As she continued to scold him about the possible outcomes of his irresponsibility, he inwardly sighed. So much for keeping her stress level low, he thought. He knew that Lynn was just looking out for him, but sometimes she was just too overprotective. Skye was perfectly capable of taking care of himself. He just wished that Lynn would figure that out.
"Lynn please stop talking. I'm fine! Really I am, I just wanted to take a different route, to ya know... Spice things up a bit! That's all." He smiled reassuringly at her. "And it took you three whole hours?" She asked skeptically. "Oh err..." Skye had forgotten about that. Lynn glared at him for a few moments and sighed. Her expression softening.
I'm too tired to argue with you." She mumbled. Skye shuffled his feet. "You're safe and that's all that matters." She raised her arms to pull him into an awkward hug, hesitated and resorted to patting him on the head. Whatever he had done that afternoon, and wherever he had been, she knew that she would squeeze it out of him sooner or later.
"Now help me set the table before supper burns." Erm. So yee! Part two. :0 Hope you lieks it and stuff
So... Um. Hi there! It is I JayPIE! I like Ninjago, so I'm writing a Ninjago story. Because that's what you do on the Ninjago stories board.
...
Yee.
I'm kinda nervous about writing a FANTABULOUS ACTION PACKED STORY. Because... Weeeell
I kinda stink at writing. I've had a story idea for a long time now, but I never did anything with it because I was afraid it wasn't good enough.
BUT TODAY IS A NEW DAY! I MAY DOUBT MY ABILITIES, BUT I HAVE A DREAM! A DREAM TO ACTUALLY FINISH A DARN PROJECT AND BE PROUD OF IT. YES FELLOW NINJAGO FANS. TODAY I, JAYPIE PRESENT TO YOU A STORY. A STORY THAT I PROBABLY SHOULD HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT MORE BUT WHATEVER.
Friends lets begin. Shall we?
(PS ask a doctor before reading, for you might go blind because of lameness. )
Chapter 1
Skye had been walking for some time now.
His footsteps echoed through the empty streets and alleyways of the darkening city of Ninjago as he hurried along. He would have been home by now, had he kept to his usual route. But today was different. Today he was avoiding someone, a certain person who he had no intention of running into. Someone who enjoyed making his life miserable.
Of course that someone was Connor Godfrey. A tall skinny (and not very bright) ninth-grader who went to the same school that Skye attended. That afternoon he and his three cronies were busy teasing the unfortunate smaller boy.
"That backpack of yours looks like a piece of junk." Connor had snorted. "We should clean it up for you-"
"You're not touching my backpack." Skye interrupted irritably. He was becoming sick of the older boy and his stupid bunch of friends, and their constant barrage of insults and names. He clenched his fists.
"You guys are really getting on my nerves. So if you wouldn't mind, I would appreciate it if you left now-"
"Or what?" Connor snapped suddenly. "You'll go crying to your older sister?" The boys around him snickered. "Speaking of which, she still can't afford to pack you a lunch for school can she?"
What? No! You just... Never see me with it. That's all. Now PLEASE get lost." Skye said. It was far from the truth and he knew it. So did Connor.
"I bet the witch is always lazing around. Can't keep a job for a week." He sneered. Skye stiffened. Calling him names and messing with his stuff was infuriating. But calling his older sister Lynn a lazy witch, was a different matter altogether. Connor seemed to notice the smaller boy's anger and continued to speak more confidently.
"Or she's a selfish pig who keeps it all to herself. Isn't she?"
Something inside Skye snapped. He knew in the past, that if he picked a fight with the bigger boys, he would fail miserably. So he had never raised a finger to defend himself in any way ever. But now. Now was different. This... This lousy jerk had crossed a line. He had insulted Lynn. Hard working, kind, patient, and caring Lynn.
Without thinking he swung a clumsy, but still powerful punch at the bully, nearly shattering his oversized nose and sending him sprawling. The teens around him all gasped in surprise. Small wimpy kids had never punched Connor before.
Trembling slightly, Skye stared at Connor for a second or two. The bigger boy groaned slightly and gingerly tapped his bleeding nose. His eyes widened as he tried to staunch the flow of blood coming from his injured nose.
"You little punk! You broke my nose! He broke my nose!" He screeched, his voice rising in pitch.
That's when they had hit him.
He stopped walking now, and fixed his dusty ballcap, trying desperately to obscure the oversized bruise on the side of his head. When one of the bullies had socked him in the jaw, he had stumbled sideways and hit his head painfully on one of the school lockers. Hense the bruise. He hid it now so his sister wouldn't see it. He knew that it was a frugal attempt, but he didn't want her to worry. If she didn't see it she wouldn't worry. And worrying about her goofy little brother would add to the stress of her day to day life of caring for her orphaned siblings. That was the last thing she needed.
He also knew that coming home late would drive her nuts as well, but Skye would rather face an angry sister, then to run into Connor and his gang. He had a good idea of what would happen if he did, and it wasn't pretty.
As Skye neared the old apartment building that he had learned to call home, he fumbled in his jean pockets for his key to the front door, found it and stepped onto the front porch. He tested the doorknob and sighed as he found it was unlocked. It was never supposed to be unlocked.
"Lynn must be more stressed out than usual." He muttered underneath his breath as he entered the shabby little apartment. He was immediately greeted enthusiastically by his younger brother Benny.
"Skye's home! You're home! Me and Lynn were just about to go looking for you, she said she was going to give you a piece of her mind when we found you. Where have you been? Did you make the wrong friends? Did you guys vandalize a bench? What's wrong with your head-"
Benny's barrage of meaningess questions was suddenly interupted by a loud screech.
"SKYE, WHERE IN THE BLITHERING BLUE BLAZES HAVE YOU BEEN?" The hard-working, kind, patient, and caring Lynn demanded.
So yee! That's it for now. Bye.
PS yes I am aware that Benny said "Me and Lynn" instead of "Lynn and me " ETC. It was intentional because he's like 10. So yee. o3o
So... Um. Hi there! It is I JayPIE! I like Ninjago, so I'm writing a Ninjago story. Because that's what you do on the Ninjago stories board.
...
Yee.
I'm kinda nervous about writing a FANTABULOUS ACTION PACKED STORY. Because... Weeeell
I kinda stink at writing. I've had a story idea for a long time now, but I never did anything with it because I was afraid it wasn't good enough.
BUT TODAY IS A NEW DAY! I MAY DOUBT MY ABILITIES, BUT I HAVE A DREAM! A DREAM TO ACTUALLY FINISH A DARN PROJECT AND BE PROUD OF IT. YES FELLOW NINJAGO FANS. TODAY I, JAYPIE PRESENT TO YOU A STORY. A STORY THAT I PROBABLY SHOULD HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT MORE BUT WHATEVER.
Friends lets begin. Shall we?
(PS ask a doctor before reading, for you might go blind because of lameness. )
Chapter 1
Skye had been walking for some time now.
His footsteps echoed through the empty streets and alleyways of the darkening city of Ninjago as he hurried along. He would have been home by now, had he kept to his usual route. But today was different. Today he was avoiding someone, a certain person who he had no intention of running into. Someone who enjoyed making his life miserable.
Of course that someone was Connor Godfrey. A tall skinny (and not very bright) ninth-grader who went to the same school that Skye attended. That afternoon he and his three cronies were busy teasing the unfortunate smaller boy.
"That backpack of yours looks like a piece of junk." Connor had snorted. "We should clean it up for you-"
"You're not touching my backpack." Skye interrupted irritably. He was becoming sick of the older boy and his stupid bunch of friends, and their constant barrage of insults and names. He clenched his fists.
"You guys are really getting on my nerves. So if you wouldn't mind, I would appreciate it if you left now-"
"Or what?" Connor snapped suddenly. "You'll go crying to your older sister?" The boys around him snickered. "Speaking of which, she still can't afford to pack you a lunch for school can she?"
What? No! You just... Never see me with it. That's all. Now PLEASE get lost." Skye said. It was far from the truth and he knew it. So did Connor.
"I bet the witch is always lazing around. Can't keep a job for a week." He sneered. Skye stiffened. Calling him names and messing with his stuff was infuriating. But calling his older sister Lynn a lazy witch, was a different matter altogether. Connor seemed to notice the smaller boy's anger and continued to speak more confidently.
"Or she's a selfish pig who keeps it all to herself. Isn't she?"
Something inside Skye snapped. He knew in the past, that if he picked a fight with the bigger boys, he would fail miserably. So he had never raised a finger to defend himself in any way ever. But now. Now was different. This... This lousy jerk had crossed a line. He had insulted Lynn. Hard working, kind, patient, and caring Lynn.
Without thinking he swung a clumsy, but still powerful punch at the bully, nearly shattering his oversized nose and sending him sprawling. The teens around him all gasped in surprise. Small wimpy kids had never punched Connor before.
Trembling slightly, Skye stared at Connor for a second or two. The bigger boy groaned slightly and gingerly tapped his bleeding nose. His eyes widened as he tried to staunch the flow of blood coming from his injured nose.
"You little punk! You broke my nose! He broke my nose!" He screeched, his voice rising in pitch.
That's when they had hit him.
He stopped walking now, and fixed his dusty ballcap, trying desperately to obscure the oversized bruise on the side of his head. When one of the bullies had socked him in the jaw, he had stumbled sideways and hit his head painfully on one of the school lockers. Hense the bruise. He hid it now so his sister wouldn't see it. He knew that it was a frugal attempt, but he didn't want her to worry. If she didn't see it she wouldn't worry. And worrying about her goofy little brother would add to the stress of her day to day life of caring for her orphaned siblings. That was the last thing she needed.
He also knew that coming home late would drive her nuts as well, but Skye would rather face an angry sister, then to run into Connor and his gang. He had a good idea of what would happen if he did, and it wasn't pretty.
As Skye neared the old apartment building that he had learned to call home, he fumbled in his jean pockets for his key to the front door, found it and stepped onto the front porch. He tested the doorknob and sighed as he found it was unlocked. It was never supposed to be unlocked.
"Lynn must be more stressed out than usual." He muttered underneath his breath as he entered the shabby little apartment. He was immediately greeted enthusiastically by his younger brother Benny.
"Skye's home! You're home! Me and Lynn were just about to go looking for you, she said she was going to give you a piece of her mind when we found you. Where have you been? Did you make the wrong friends? Did you guys vandalize a bench? What's wrong with your head-"
Benny's barrage of meaningess questions was suddenly interupted by a loud screech.
"SKYE, WHERE IN THE BLITHERING BLUE BLAZES HAVE YOU BEEN?" The hard-working, kind, patient, and caring Lynn demanded.
So yee! That's it for now. Bye.
PS yes I am aware that Benny said "Me and Lynn" instead of "Lynn and me " ETC. It was intentional because he's like 10. So yee. o3o
Tell me whut you think about it and stuff.
*claps* prEACH-!
Nice start! I'm loving the characters already!
GASP! A comment! And a really nice comment at that!
So... Um. Hi there! It is I JayPIE! I like Ninjago, so I'm writing a Ninjago story. Because that's what you do on the Ninjago stories board.
...
Yee.
I'm kinda nervous about writing a FANTABULOUS ACTION PACKED STORY. Because... Weeeell
I kinda stink at writing. I've had a story idea for a long time now, but I never did anything with it because I was afraid it wasn't good enough.
BUT TODAY IS A NEW DAY! I MAY DOUBT MY ABILITIES, BUT I HAVE A DREAM! A DREAM TO ACTUALLY FINISH A DARN PROJECT AND BE PROUD OF IT. YES FELLOW NINJAGO FANS. TODAY I, JAYPIE PRESENT TO YOU A STORY. A STORY THAT I PROBABLY SHOULD HAVE THOUGHT ABOUT MORE BUT WHATEVER.
Friends lets begin. Shall we?
(PS ask a doctor before reading, for you might go blind because of lameness. )
Chapter 1
Skye had been walking for some time now.
* * *
So yee! That's it for now. Bye.
PS yes I am aware that Benny said "Me and Lynn" instead of "Lynn and me " ETC. It was intentional because he's like 10. So yee. o3o
Tell me whut you think about it and stuff.
*gasps* Jayfeatherpie!! You've come to the Eternals!! Whoa, I'm glad to see someone from the Galleries come here!!
OoooOOOoooh, you're an artist and a writer -- even if you don't think your writing is particularly good. *reads story parts* Oh, wow! Niiiccceee. Well, I for one think your writing is quite wonderful and is very vivid in view of the characters' emotions. I like this so far, I'm interested to see who these kids are, and I look forward to seeing more!
*gasps* Jayfeatherpie!! You've come to the Eternals!! Whoa, I'm glad to see someone from the Galleries come here!!
OoooOOOoooh, you're an artist and a writer -- even if you don't think your writing is particularly good. *reads story parts* Oh, wow! Niiiccceee. Well, I for one think your writing is quite wonderful and is very vivid in view of the characters' emotions. I like this so far, I'm interested to see who these kids are, and I look forward to seeing more!
GASP Howdy hey there frien!
OHMEHGOODNESS! Thank you thank you. I'm SO STINKING happy that you like it. Haha thanks again!
*gasps* Jayfeatherpie!! You've come to the Eternals!! Whoa, I'm glad to see someone from the Galleries come here!!
OoooOOOoooh, you're an artist and a writer -- even if you don't think your writing is particularly good. *reads story parts* Oh, wow! Niiiccceee. Well, I for one think your writing is quite wonderful and is very vivid in view of the characters' emotions. I like this so far, I'm interested to see who these kids are, and I look forward to seeing more!
GASP Howdy hey there frien!
OHMEHGOODNESS! Thank you thank you. I'm SO STINKING happy that you like it. Haha thanks again!
Of course, you're very welcome! Have you been keeping in touch with some of the Gallery gang, like your old pal HT? Hey, if you want, you could advertise your story in @electricsunset1217 's "Story Advertising" topic, so other writers and readers could get a glimpse of your story and feel inclined to check it out. It's not far, it's here in the Ninjago Stories forum.
OHMEHGOODNESS! Thank you thank you. I'm SO STINKING happy that you like it. Haha thanks again!
Of course, you're very welcome! Have you been keeping in touch with some of the Gallery gang, like your old pal HT? Hey, if you want, you could advertise your story in @electricsunset1217 's "Story Advertising" topic, so other writers and readers could get a glimpse of your story and feel inclined to check it out. It's not far, it's here in the Ninjago Stories forum.
I've been trying to. Unfortunately, HT hasn't been on in awhile. D: That's really cool! I'll be sure to check it out. :3 Thanks for telling me about it!
Of course, you're very welcome! Have you been keeping in touch with some of the Gallery gang, like your old pal HT? Hey, if you want, you could advertise your story in @electricsunset1217 's "Story Advertising" topic, so other writers and readers could get a glimpse of your story and feel inclined to check it out. It's not far, it's here in the Ninjago Stories forum.
I've been trying to. Unfortunately, HT hasn't been on in awhile. D: That's really cool! I'll be sure to check it out. :3 Thanks for telling me about it!
Aw, that's too bad -- I recall you two were quite close. You're welcome!
I've been trying to. Unfortunately, HT hasn't been on in awhile. D: That's really cool! I'll be sure to check it out. :3 Thanks for telling me about it!
Aw, that's too bad -- I recall you two were quite close. You're welcome!
Yeee we were.
Pfttt but I'm fine. It's fineeee. I don't miss my friendo at all. Whaaa? Nahhh.
I've been thinking about moving this story to a different forum. I haven't watched Ninjago in ages and the events happening in the story wouldn't make sense if it was supposed to take place in the Ninjago universe.
Why post it on the Ninjago forum then?
Haha, well, I guess it's because I wrote a version of this story a long time ago on my moms old computer years ago, that was meant for the Ninjago forum. Back then I was a huge Ninjago fan, I thought I knew the characters and the universe well enough to create a fan fiction.
I did not.
So, because I'm bad at thinking things through and would much rather wing it, I posted this here because the original story was set in Ninjago. *Facedesks*
I would like to eventually rewrite this on the MB stories forum, sometime in the future. ^_^
Hope that makes sense. I'm really bad at explaining things, haha. x3
I've been thinking about moving this story to a different forum. I haven't watched Ninjago in ages and the events happening in the story wouldn't make sense if it was supposed to take place in the Ninjago universe.
Why post it on the Ninjago forum then?
Haha, well, I guess it's because I wrote a version of this story a long time ago on my moms old computer years ago, that was meant for the Ninjago forum. Back then I was a huge Ninjago fan, I thought I knew the characters and the universe well enough to create a fan fiction.
I did not.
So, because I'm bad at thinking things through and would much rather wing it, I posted this here because the original story was set in Ninjago. *Facedesks*
I would like to eventually rewrite this on the MB stories forum, sometime in the future. ^_^
Hope that makes sense. I'm really bad at explaining things, haha. x3
Aw. That's alright.
If you wanna keep posting it on this topic, I'd be happy to move the topic to a different form for you. All you have to do is ask.
I like Ninjago, so I'm writing a Ninjago story. Because that's what you do on the Ninjago stories board.
I've had a story idea for a long time now, but I never did anything with it because I was afraid it wasn't good enough.
I like Ninjago, so I'm writing a Ninjago story. Because that's what you do on the Ninjago stories board.
I've had a story idea for a long time now, but I never did anything with it because I was afraid it wasn't good enough.
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Well, I for one think your writing is quite wonderful and is very vivid in view of the characters' emotions. I like this so far, I'm interested to see who these kids are, and I look forward to seeing more! 
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Well, I for one think your writing is quite wonderful and is very vivid in view of the characters' emotions. I like this so far, I'm interested to see who these kids are, and I look forward to seeing more! 
Hey, if you want, you could advertise your story in @electricsunset1217 's "Story Advertising" topic, so other writers and readers could get a glimpse of your story and feel inclined to check it out. It's not far, it's here in the Ninjago Stories forum. 
You're welcome! 
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