OOC: Alright. Also, sorry, I just realized another question; what sort of name do I give her?
(OOC: Prolly a made up name that starts with "Agg". like the name "Aggrathra" as an idea for you to make your name. Also, i just had an idea of this character actually being the rumored Daughter of Agrakai whom is a secret Service agent that was theorized have ended the Royal Aggron lineage by killing off Aggréväte Bössgadoré VI (The last living heir of the House Ferros of the Old Aggron Kingdom, deep lore stuff, i'l explain it later, well, if you had looked at the tribe's bio). She'll slowly reveal herself as being the child of the President later down the line for plot stuff. )
(OOC: Ok, thanks. Hmm. interesting idea, sure, I'll go with that.
LoC Fanon RP Character;
Name; Aggrathra (I tried thinking up another name for seven minutes straight but I stink at these sorts of names ) Age; young adult Gender; female ("Duh," --Master Wu) Species; Aggron Appearance; here's a pic; Personality; Aggrathra is loyal and just as the vice president of her tribe and rraaagh I don't know I haven't developed her character enough I guess we'll find out as we go along. Bio; Aggrathra had a very average childhood and is now the vice president. (Sorry, I just woke and I have no creativity whatsoever currently.)
(OOC: Prolly a made up name that starts with "Agg". like the name "Aggrathra" as an idea for you to make your name. Also, i just had an idea of this character actually being the rumored Daughter of Agrakai whom is a secret Service agent that was theorized have ended the Royal Aggron lineage by killing off Aggréväte Bössgadoré VI (The last living heir of the House Ferros of the Old Aggron Kingdom, deep lore stuff, i'l explain it later, well, if you had looked at the tribe's bio). She'll slowly reveal herself as being the child of the President later down the line for plot stuff. )
(OOC: Ok, thanks. Hmm. interesting idea, sure, I'll go with that.
LoC Fanon RP Character;
Name; Aggrathra (I tried thinking up another name for seven minutes straight but I stink at these sorts of names ) Age; young adult Gender; female ("Duh," --Master Wu) Species; Aggron Appearance; here's a pic;
Personality; Aggrathra is loyal and just as the vice president of her tribe and rraaagh I don't know I haven't developed her character enough I guess we'll find out as we go along. Bio; Aggrathra had a very average childhood and is now the vice president. (Sorry, I just woke and I have no creativity whatsoever currently.)
(OOC: I see you are an artist too, i should really work on Agrakai's ref, really. But it looks good so far, i don't tend to make bios often unless i really want to, but she looks good so far! )
(P.s. i also made the map of the mainland of Fanon chima, i haven't added the Kangaroo Islands and Aggron Isles, but just, uh, have the mainland map of chima, as a reminder. )
(OOC: Ok, thanks. Hmm. interesting idea, sure, I'll go with that.
LoC Fanon RP Character;
Name; Aggrathra (I tried thinking up another name for seven minutes straight but I stink at these sorts of names ) Age; young adult Gender; female ("Duh," --Master Wu) Species; Aggron Appearance; here's a pic;
Personality; Aggrathra is loyal and just as the vice president of her tribe and rraaagh I don't know I haven't developed her character enough I guess we'll find out as we go along. Bio; Aggrathra had a very average childhood and is now the vice president. (Sorry, I just woke and I have no creativity whatsoever currently.)
(OOC: I see you are an artist too, i should really work on Agrakai's ref, really. But it looks good so far, i don't tend to make bios often unless i really want to, but she looks good so far! )
(P.s. i also made the map of the mainland of Fanon chima, i haven't added the Kangaroo Islands and Aggron Isles, but just, uh, have the mainland map of chima, as a reminder. )
(OOC: Great thanks. Okay) (ps. Okay, thanks, I was wondering if there was a map.)
(OOC: I see you are an artist too, i should really work on Agrakai's ref, really. But it looks good so far, i don't tend to make bios often unless i really want to, but she looks good so far! )
(P.s. i also made the map of the mainland of Fanon chima, i haven't added the Kangaroo Islands and Aggron Isles, but just, uh, have the mainland map of chima, as a reminder. )
(OOC: Great thanks. Okay) (ps. Okay, thanks, I was wondering if there was a map.)
(OOC: Like i said, gotta get the Aggron and kangaroo Islands their own maps. Now then, you do your first move in the UMFA, possibly doing some Vice presidential stuff. )
(OOC: Great thanks. Okay) (ps. Okay, thanks, I was wondering if there was a map.)
(OOC: Like i said, gotta get the Aggron and kangaroo Islands their own maps. Now then, you do your first move in the UMFA, possibly doing some Vice presidential stuff. )
(OOC: Yeah. Sorry, I have endless questions, what exactly should I be doing as 'Vice presidential stuff'. Sorry, it's probably frustrating to keep having my questions fired at you, I just don't want to mess up...
(OOC: Like i said, gotta get the Aggron and kangaroo Islands their own maps. Now then, you do your first move in the UMFA, possibly doing some Vice presidential stuff. )
(OOC: Yeah. Sorry, I have endless questions, what exactly should I be doing as 'Vice presidential stuff'. Sorry, it's probably frustrating to keep having my questions fired at you, I just don't want to mess up...
(OOC: You won't mess up, i promise you that! Just google what a Vice President does, you have the INTERNET at yer fingertips. )
(OOC: Yeah. Sorry, I have endless questions, what exactly should I be doing as 'Vice presidential stuff'. Sorry, it's probably frustrating to keep having my questions fired at you, I just don't want to mess up...
(OOC: You won't mess up, i promise you that! Just google what a Vice President does, you have the INTERNET at yer fingertips. )
OOC: Decade has been doing the most action with his tribes, but it isn't really that much Nintendo. Would you like a list of the tribes in the RP so far?
OOC: Okay. Sure, that'd be helpful.
OOC: Alright. So far, Decade owns the Aggrons, Flygons, Snakes, Pygmy Owls, and Kangaroos. Jgread owns the Turtles, Snow Leopards, Aquilans (eagles), Piranhas, and sometime as the rp progresses Dragons. I own the Koopas, Cuccos, Cats, Mice, and a tribe of Ferrets, Stoats, Weasels, and Mink all bundled together. I also have ideas for velociraptor and fennec fox tribes. If you want to join one of any of those tribes, look up the name of the species and read the starter post. It will either help you understand better or (with some tribes that are sorta complicated, such as Cuccos) might change your mind about joining the tribe. In addition to those, once you feel like you understand the RP better, feel free to create any tribe you want. The only limitation is that it can't be in canon chima.
(OOC: Ok, thanks. Hmm. interesting idea, sure, I'll go with that.
LoC Fanon RP Character;
Name; Aggrathra (I tried thinking up another name for seven minutes straight but I stink at these sorts of names ) Age; young adult Gender; female ("Duh," --Master Wu) Species; Appearance; here's a pic;
Personality; Aggrathra is loyal and just as the vice president of her tribe and rraaagh I don't know I haven't developed her character enough I guess we'll find out as we go along. Bio; Aggrathra had a very average childhood and is now the vice president. (Sorry, I just woke and I have no creativity whatsoever currently.)
(OOC: I see you are an artist too, i should really work on Agrakai's ref, really. But it looks good so far, i don't tend to make bios often unless i really want to, but she looks good so far! )
(P.s. i also made the map of the mainland of Fanon chima, i haven't added the Kangaroo Islands and Aggron Isles, but just, uh, have the mainland map of chima, as a reminder. )
OOC: Map looks good, however there are some problems.
1: The location of Kastle Koldheart is way off. Mount Cavora is supposed to be a completely neutral source of chi in this version of Chima, with no inhabitants or buildings around or on it. That's one of the big defining features of this version of Chima that distinguishes this RP from the others. The Queen can build her castle nearby, but having it right at the foot of Cavora would be in violation of an ancient treaty between the tribes to keep Cavora neutral.
2: The Snow Leopard territory is supposed to be a huge mountain range and arctic that takes up most of the north, like the Iron Mountains and the Arctic North in the main RP. As such, the Snow Leopard territory should actually take up what you labeled as the Koopa and Aquilan territories on the map; the Koopa territory can be in what you have labeled as the "Unclaimed junglelands", and the Aquilan territory should consist of just the northern islands. The leader of the Aquilan tribe left, so I don't think it'd be particularly unfair at all for their territory to be smaller than that of the other tribes'. Though if you feel that'd be unfair for the Aquilans in an in-universe sense, their territory can also consist of the land north of Cavora, the top half of what you have labeled as the "Koldheart Arbory" (which also looks ridiculously huge compared to the other tribes' territories, no offense).
Though don't get me wrong; other than those two big problems that needed to be addressed, this map looks great.
OOC: Alright. So far, Decade owns the Aggrons, Flygons, Snakes, Pygmy Owls, and Kangaroos. Jgread owns the Turtles, Snow Leopards, Aquilans (eagles), Piranhas, and sometime as the rp progresses Dragons. I own the Koopas, Cuccos, Cats, Mice, and a tribe of Ferrets, Stoats, Weasels, and Mink all bundled together. I also have ideas for velociraptor and fennec fox tribes. If you want to join one of any of those tribes, look up the name of the species and read the starter post. It will either help you understand better or (with some tribes that are sorta complicated, such as Cuccos) might change your mind about joining the tribe. In addition to those, once you feel like you understand the RP better, feel free to create any tribe you want. The only limitation is that it can't be in canon chima.
Also, side note: the eagles here are golden eagles (I would've preferred hawks, but whatever), so that's how they were able to get in this RP despite being a subspecies of a canon Chima species. Also, I've had ideas for frog/toad and salamander tribes. I've also recently had an idea for a pterodactyl tribe and a pteranodon tribe, who are inter-dimensional rivals, but that one might be a bit out there, even for this RP.
Parakefka: “Hey! Bring me to the Guild leader, this guy ain’t done squealin’ yet! I’m trying my best to make sure the recent terror attack on this tribe wasn’t the Sandstone Council’s fault!! I seen it all, that truck held the FLA’s insignia on top of it’s cab, not the Royal Flygon Seal! Even if they could’ve handle it, the FLA had already overtaken and overthrown them by now!” -she’d grunt, looking serious- “I don’t care if my family helped and were related the plumber boys or not, that’s all in the past, i want focus on the present, and i just want to be a hero for once, to spread my wings of truth and help save a people group whom i’ve been accustomed to thanks to the pre-evolution of the Flygon Before you!” -she’d say with pride and power, she wanted her voice to be heard, to spare her freind’s royal-background from utter destruction, still holding Viokun’s left arms behind his back-
Viokun: “G-good p-points a-and a-all, but CAN YOU LET GO OF MY ARMS?!? I-I c-can s-settle i-it th-thanks t-to you!!” -he’d hissed and struggled, Parakefka Casually toasing him aside, standing up on the hood of the truck, adamantly-
OOC: Another random side note: this is the Joseph from SML (if you know, you know), so he might not actually be from the same original universe as the other koopas. I decided that I needed to address this, since, in the source material, the character Joseph is like 8-10 years old. Obviously, I've had to age him up for his rank to make sense, so in this RP he's in his late teens to early twenties.
IC: Joseph as Viokun was crashing into the car: "Ay bro, watch your wings! Watch your wings bro, WATCH YOUR WINGS—!"*
After the dialogue from Viokun and Parakefka... Joseph: "A'ight, so does this Pokémon dude have a physical message anymore? A letter, or somethin', I dunno...?"
(OOC: I see you are an artist too, i should really work on Agrakai's ref, really. But it looks good so far, i don't tend to make bios often unless i really want to, but she looks good so far! )
(P.s. i also made the map of the mainland of Fanon chima, i haven't added the Kangaroo Islands and Aggron Isles, but just, uh, have the mainland map of chima, as a reminder. )
OOC: Map looks good, however there are some problems.
1: The location of Kastle Koldheart is way off. Mount Cavora is supposed to be a completely neutral source of chi in this version of Chima, with no inhabitants or buildings around or on it. That's one of the big defining features of this version of Chima that distinguishes this RP from the others. The Queen can build her castle nearby, but having it right at the foot of Cavora would be in violation of an ancient treaty between the tribes to keep Cavora neutral.
2: The Snow Leopard territory is supposed to be a huge mountain range and arctic that takes up most of the north, like the Iron Mountains and the Arctic North in the main RP. As such, the Snow Leopard territory should actually take up what you labeled as the Koopa and Aquilan territories on the map; the Koopa territory can be in what you have labeled as the "Unclaimed junglelands", and the Aquilan territory should consist of just the northern islands. The leader of the Aquilan tribe left, so I don't think it'd be particularly unfair at all for their territory to be smaller than that of the other tribes'. Though if you feel that'd be unfair for the Aquilans in an in-universe sense, their territory can also consist of the land north of Cavora, the top half of what you have labeled as the "Koldheart Arbory" (which also looks ridiculously huge compared to the other tribes' territories, no offense).
Though don't get me wrong; other than those two big problems that needed to be addressed, this map looks great.
(OOC: Yeah, you didn't say such problems the first time I showed it off, and edited it first around. Kyuru is supposed to be the self-proclamed mediator of chi, she's supposed to distribute it, that is what i specifically wrote down for her character, her plot, and the castle, to be. It'll look weird to me to see an icy roman-esque aqueduct canal feed from Mt. Cavora into a castle that is like, miles away from the mountain, passing through the vast snow gardens Kastle Koldheart has, and could be an easy target to cut supply off from? Your wanting me to change what i wrote in for Kyuru, that is like Baton's Brian on me when i updated Parakefka's bio.)
(OOC: Otherwise that's all my beef, look at what baton said when i messed with Brian's canon. I can do the other things just fine, i connected the Dragon grave mountains to the Leopard territory easily on the first revision. and i can possibly shrink down the Aquilian territory, and your the leader sooo... hope you don't mind. And the Koldheart Arbory, it's supposed to be the equivalent to The Great Forest in the main RP. I put in a scale for a reason in the map. )
(OOC BTW, it'll look strange to see a snowy mountain biome cut directly into a desert biome all Minecraft-like, but who cares, we have no concern for our environment anyway! )
OOC: Alright. So far, Decade owns the Aggrons, Flygons, Snakes, Pygmy Owls, and Kangaroos. Jgread owns the Turtles, Snow Leopards, Aquilans (eagles), Piranhas, and sometime as the rp progresses Dragons. I own the Koopas, Cuccos, Cats, Mice, and a tribe of Ferrets, Stoats, Weasels, and Mink all bundled together. I also have ideas for velociraptor and fennec fox tribes. If you want to join one of any of those tribes, look up the name of the species and read the starter post. It will either help you understand better or (with some tribes that are sorta complicated, such as Cuccos) might change your mind about joining the tribe. In addition to those, once you feel like you understand the RP better, feel free to create any tribe you want. The only limitation is that it can't be in canon chima.
Also, side note: the eagles here are golden eagles (I would've preferred hawks, but whatever), so that's how they were able to get in this RP despite being a subspecies of a canon Chima species. Also, I've had ideas for frog/toad and salamander tribes. I've also recently had an idea for a pterodactyl tribe and a pteranodon tribe, who are inter-dimensional rivals, but that one might be a bit out there, even for this RP.
(OOC: Do it, make them hawks and falcons and whatnot, Edessa Cubbage is an golden eagle, in the canon rp, so there ARE sub-species in the chima RP, same for Dealthstalker Scorponok. -Distant Captain Falcon noises in the... well, distance- )
Also, i just had an idea of this character actually being the rumored Daughter of Agrakai whom is a secret Service agent that was theorized have ended the Royal Aggron lineage by killing off Aggréväte Bössgadoré VI (The last living heir of the House Ferros of the Old Aggron Kingdom, deep lore stuff, i'l explain it later, well, if you had looked at the tribe's bio). She'll slowly reveal herself as being the child of the President later down the line for plot stuff. 
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Sorry, it's probably frustrating to keep having my questions fired at you, I just don't want to mess up... 
Sure, that'd be helpful.
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Kyuru is supposed to be the self-proclamed mediator of chi, she's supposed to distribute it, that is what i specifically wrote down for her character, her plot, and the castle, to be. It'll look weird to me to see an icy roman-esque aqueduct canal feed from Mt. Cavora into a castle that is like, miles away from the mountain, passing through the vast snow gardens Kastle Koldheart has, and could be an easy target to cut supply off from? 
Your wanting me to change what i wrote in for Kyuru, that is like Baton's Brian on me when i updated Parakefka's bio.)