This was great, looking forward to the next part. After finishing all the stories on here I really wish I could go back and reread the whole thing. Reading in large chunks help me piece things together better. Maybe one day I'll fulfill that dream.
Indeed its over, but this is only the beginning in a sense.
I HAD TO!!!
Thanks! I want to post the next one soon, but I'm not sure how soon I can with me packing and moving.
That's the best kind of story. I think it is debatable whether or not you, in fact, had to.
I'd like to post some extra stuff on here such as maybe a character list, a finished version of the table of contents and maybe more. I have a lot of deleted sences, so maybe you guys would be interested in seeing some of those?
Also thank you all so much for reading, commenting on and liking this story. It really means a lot to me and I probably wouldn't have written this much without you. So again, thank you!
Now I don't know when I'll get the second one posted, but hopefully soon enough. I might consider making a trailer to post before I make the story topic. ( or I'll just post it and make a trailer after that. ) But I bet you wondering what I'm going to call this second book. Well it's not set in stone yet, but what I was thinking of calling it is...
I'd like to post some extra stuff on here such as maybe a character list, a finished version of the table of contents and maybe more. I have a lot of deleted sences, so maybe you guys would be interested in seeing some of those?
Also thank you all so much for reading, commenting on and liking this story. It really means a lot to me and I probably wouldn't have written this much without you. So again, thank you!
Now I don't know when I'll get the second one posted, but hopefully soon enough. I might consider making a trailer to post before I make the story topic. ( or I'll just post it and make a trailer after that. ) But I bet you wondering what I'm going to call this second book. Well it's not set in stone yet, but what I was thinking of calling it is...
... " Gravitation: The Fire Fox ".
Oooh, yes, I'd like that a lot! o3o Deleted scenes can be interesting. :3
ok i guess this is where my little review comes in You're welcome! Honestly, this is one of my favorite stories here. I love it to pieces. This new generation concept brought on by the point of view of a new young ninja who's unfamiliar with Ninjago's world is a really intriguing way of introducing the story, especially with the vague and often mysterious references to the canon characters in their older years. Ninjago's changed in this age, and you illustrate that by showing how the canon characters have changed throughout the years, what the lifestyle and attitude of future-Ninjago is like such as the controversies and discussions that pop up about the Serpentine living above ground with the humans and people having a darker mindset concerning the ninja. The main characters are interesting, diverse, and have such fun dynamics, and they're made doubly fun when interacting with characters like Sensei Lloyd. The villains are cool and compelling. There are obviously so many mysteries hidden here and there, like Jadyn's scar, Zephyr's dreams, the identity of Azelela, Zechariah's story, what happened to the original ninja and what missions they've been working on, and so much more. I want to know more about Jadyn and Azelela so badly. --OK, I'll stop now. XD This is such a great story, NFM. I'm very excited to see what Book 2 (or "The Fire Fox", what a cool title, I'm grinning already ) has in store for us. 10/10 Ninjago fan-fiction.
I'll have to see which ones I can find.
Thank you so much!! A wonderful review if I can say so. ( Ok good, you like it, I was afraid the title was to simple for some reason. ) 10/10?! Really? Wow! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :3
Yep, the Skygrazer, and an elder of sorts. Well, the original Spirit Forest was the home of the wolf people before it was destroyed when The First Spinjizu Master split Ninjago in two.
Indeed. 3:
"Fascinating.." ~ Gene-the-kid-with-the-most-annoying-voice-ever from Darkly's Boarding School
Glad you seem to like. :3 I kinda feel like I rushed the ending a little, but at the same time when I look at proluge for the next one it seems to fit.
It can be surprisingly helpful and interesting.
I think it worked out well.
Neat, I'll have to try doing that if ever remember sometime.
Oh yeah that's right. I've only seen two X-Men movies, and it it's been awhile since I've seen either. However I do plan to write a sence about Moe in the future that will be directly inspired by a sence in X-Men: Apocalypse.
Oh, wow, lol, I'd only seen two at that point. I've since rewatched one and seen half of another.
Don't kill off any of my favorite characters. I CON't take it.
Well yeah, no one likes their favorite characters killed off. Which are your favorites? Maybe I can make mental list to consider avoiding when I need to get rid of somebody.
They kinda stop doing that after awhile. True potential for the ninja usually involves the following: Saving someone or someones. Learning a lesson right before that. Being glowing, transparent, colorful, powerful and invincible for about a minute. ( In some cases ) Defeating a large boss-like enemy or creature.
Is it kind of cliche that there's a formula?
Maybe, it's not an official formula and there are some exceptions and differences.
I'd like to post some extra stuff on here such as maybe a character list, a finished version of the table of contents and maybe more. I have a lot of deleted sences, so maybe you guys would be interested in seeing some of those?
Also thank you all so much for reading, commenting on and liking this story. It really means a lot to me and I probably wouldn't have written this much without you. So again, thank you!
Now I don't know when I'll get the second one posted, but hopefully soon enough. I might consider making a trailer to post before I make the story topic. ( or I'll just post it and make a trailer after that. ) But I bet you wondering what I'm going to call this second book. Well it's not set in stone yet, but what I was thinking of calling it is...
Oooh, yes, I'd like that a lot! o3o Deleted scenes can be interesting. :3
ok i guess this is where my little review comes in You're welcome! Honestly, this is one of my favorite stories here. I love it to pieces. This new generation concept brought on by the point of view of a new young ninja who's unfamiliar with Ninjago's world is a really intriguing way of introducing the story, especially with the vague and often mysterious references to the canon characters in their older years. Ninjago's changed in this age, and you illustrate that by showing how the canon characters have changed throughout the years, what the lifestyle and attitude of future-Ninjago is like such as the controversies and discussions that pop up about the Serpentine living above ground with the humans and people having a darker mindset concerning the ninja. The main characters are interesting, diverse, and have such fun dynamics, and they're made doubly fun when interacting with characters like Sensei Lloyd. The villains are cool and compelling. There are obviously so many mysteries hidden here and there, like Jadyn's scar, Zephyr's dreams, the identity of Azelela, Zechariah's story, what happened to the original ninja and what missions they've been working on, and so much more. I want to know more about Jadyn and Azelela so badly. --OK, I'll stop now. XD This is such a great story, NFM. I'm very excited to see what Book 2 (or "The Fire Fox", what a cool title, I'm grinning already ) has in store for us. 10/10 Ninjago fan-fiction.
I'll have to see which ones I can find.
Thank you so much!! A wonderful review if I can say so. ( Ok good, you like it, I was afraid the title was to simple for some reason. ) 10/10?! Really? Wow! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :3
You're very welcome!! Oh, why thank you. UwU :3 (Well, judging from the title, I'm guessing this story will have a big point circulating around Jadyn, so maybe...? ) Yes! ^v^