soooo,what would you want? i am working on a updated bio for Owen if that is what you are "after"or i could throw one up for anaconda, as a reference.
What a bio for younger Owen?
Coming right up Name Owen Devis Age 12 Species human Race Mandalorian Hair Brown,padawon learner braid,without the bun at the back Eyes Brown Weapon a blaster(similar to hera syndula's) Identifying marks a birth Mark under right ear Personality Kind,caring, touchy about his past,after only being here for a few months and not getting to know anyone really,inquisitive(I ask a lot of questions) Clothing light tan Jedi robes,a pair of brown boots,sometimes a mando helmet
Need anything else? Also I meant updated as in with more facts,I could just subtract what didn't happen yet.
Coming right up Name Owen Devis Age 12 Species human Race Mandalorian Hair Brown,padawon learner braid,without the bun at the back Eyes Brown Weapon a blaster(similar to hera syndula's) Identifying marks a birth Mark under right ear Personality Kind,caring, touchy about his past,after only being here for a few months and not getting to know anyone really,inquisitive(I ask a lot of questions) Clothing light tan Jedi robes,a pair of brown boots,sometimes a mando helmet
Need anything else? Also I meant updated as in with more facts,I could just subtract what didn't happen yet.
Awesome!! I have writers black right now though so it'll be a while.
Post by Darth Venomir on Jun 26, 2017 14:16:18 GMT
Name: Mandrake (or if you want it sith, then darth venomir, but I'm changing my backstory in books so I've always chose jedi) Age: 13 Species: Ashtoro (think reaaaaally hot groot) Homeworld: Caecerion Hair: green Eyes: green Skin (smooth bark): grayish-brown Weapon: two small blaster pistols, Identifying Marks: long scar in his bark, going past his eye Personality: A bit cocky, kind, extroverted, jumpy, has been a jedi for six months Clothing: white jedi robes over a gray jumpsuit, and a sometimes white helmet the type of which the guard wear
Name: Mandrake (or if you want it sith, then darth venomir, but I'm changing my backstory in books so I've always chose jedi) Age: 13 Species: Ashtoro (think reaaaaally hot groot) Homeworld: Caecerion Hair: green Eyes: green Skin (smooth bark): grayish-brown Weapon: two small blaster pistols, Identifying Marks: long scar in his bark, going past his eye Personality: A bit cocky, kind, extroverted, jumpy, has been a jedi for six months Clothing: white jedi robes over a gray jumpsuit, and a sometimes white helmet the type of which the guard wear
Oh wow I really need to start working on more for this story...
Here is some MOAR!!!
.. I wake up and walk out of my room into the hallway and run into a boy who is around my age, he has brown hair and brown eyes. "Oh, sorry!!" I apologize.
"No, I'm sorry I should have been looking where I was going." He apologizes.
" I'm Emily, you?" I ask.
"I'm Owen, it's nice to meet you Emily. " He replies.
" Nice to meet you as well , Owen. I best get going now though." I reply
"Yeah, see you around." He says as he starts walking down the hall.
I start walking back down the hall now full of Jedi, making it hard to find my way around the temple. Until I see Master Techna talking on her comlink in the corner. I decide to wait until she stops talking. While I wait the crowd of Jedi slowly subsides to the occasional Jedi and padawan. when it seems like hours have passed Master Techna finally stops the conversation and walks over to me. " Are you ready to start? " She asks.
" Yes!!!! I mean yeah I'm ready. " I answer.
We walk into the training room where a few other masters and their padawans are training... TBC!!!!!
..."We'll start by reciting the Jedi and Sith codes." She tells me.
" Er.. Okay.. The Jedi one is... There is no Emotion, There is peace. There is no ignorance, There is knowledge. The is no passion, There is serenity. There is no chaos, There is harmony. There is no death, There is the Force.
And the Sith one is... Peace is a lie, There is only passion. Through passion I gain strength, Through strength I gain power, Through power, I gain victory, Through victory, My chains are broken The Force shall free me." I recite, Though after saying the Sith Code I feel lightheaded and dizzy. " Good, I'm impressed" She tells me after I finish, " now sit on the ground and we'll meditate." She sits on the ground and motions for me to do the same. I sit down the floor is cold, but what do you expect it's Winter. She tells me to clear my mind of all thoughts and I clear my mind and start meditating.... TBC!!!!!
Here is the next part!!! Not that anyone is reading it other than the moderator who moderated it.
...When I start meditating a vision pops into my head. It's dark and I can't see a thing but I hear voices... " You, imbecile!" A voice yells louder than the rest, " You were supposed to bring your sister to the darkside! Not let her escape and become a Jedi!"
"B..but!" A second voice younger and quieter objects, "I tried! She refused to join me!" Anger was creeping into the younger boys tone...
"Emily?Emily? Are you okay?" A voice calls from outside of the vision. I snap out of the vision and stop meditating to find Master Techna Shaking me.
" Are you okay?" She asks anxiously. I blink trying to remember what the vision had been about about, but having no luck gave up and looked at my master's worried expression. " Uh.. yeah I'm fine, What made you think I wasn't?" I ask confused.
"Maybe we should start again tomorrow and start using the Force to lift rocks tomorrow" She says obviously to change the subject. She stands up and glances at me. I stand up realizing immediately how cold it is in here. I look around seeing some more padawans and their masters had come and others had left.
" Maybe you should walk around and try to make some friends," She tells me.
"Okay..." I tell her as I walk out the door.... TBC!!!
Here is MOAR!!! The mods are probably getting annoyed. As no no one is reading it , but who cares!! I'm writing a story!
...As I walk out the door I bite back a comment Not like I'm going to make any friends. But I walk down the hall anyways I pass some older Jedi and one younger boy but still older than me with brown hair and green eyes. I keep walking not knowing that one Jedi would someday complete my training. I walk into a seemingly empty room it's covered in dust and cobwebs from top to bottom there are a few chairs scattered around but as I keep looking I see a girl slightly older than me with black hair . She's reading a book I couldn't see what it was called. I walked up to her, " Hi I'm Emily!" She jumps and drops her book seeing that I'm not a danger she picks her book back up and sets it on a table. "S...Sorry I didn't mean to scare you." I apologize. "No it's fine I was just to engrossed in the book I was reading to notice you walking in." She tells me, smiling almost looking amused," By the way,I'm Kareena,Master Lensherr's padawan." She stands up and holds out her hand, I shake her hand. "I'm Emily, Master Techna's Padawan." I tell her, " Wanna be friends?" "Sure!" She tells me.... TBC!!!
I'm now out og ideas on where to take this next, ideas?
