Editor's note: Luckily, page 71, unlike its predecessor, is visible in its entirety on the archive (I counted a full 15 posts), so there won't be any more missing story segments for a while. After that, though, it's only pages 72-73 that are left.
Only the first two posts of page 74 look to have been screenshotted, neither of which are story posts. Of pages 75-84 there is no sign whatsoever, and page 85 is entirely discussion posts talking about the (clearly completed) story in past tense.
Again, just giving this warning in advance to soften the blow.
Editor's note: Well, it's at this point that the archive site stopped having screenshots of the pages in their entirety, for whatever reason; only the first 9 posts of page 70 are there, with posts 10-15 nowhere in sight. There was at least 1 other story post on page 70 that was luckily quoted by a reader on page 71, but as for the other 4 missing posts on page 70, I can only hope that they were discussion posts, and not story posts. For instances like these, I'll now put a "?" at the top of the post to denote that there may be missing portions of the story between that at the post that preceded it.
We are, however, approaching the "end" of this story; and by that I mean the extent of the story that's available on the archive site, which is definitely not the entirety of it, unfortunately. I'm giving this heads-up in advance, so that anyone reading this later down the line won't feel the jarring confusion of an abrupt stop to the story.
*and
Sorry for interrupting the flow of the story with my ramblings, but I've confirmed that pages 72 and 73 are also screenshotted in their entirety; 15 posts each, which means there won't be any more gaps between available story segments. I guess pages 70 and 73 just got unlucky...
Many of the posts on these "last" pages, however, are discussion posts. In total, across pages 71-73, there are 11 story posts left. I'll probably post them all tomorrow, in one fell swoop.
The small corner of the room in which we stood, lighted by the torch, seemed much emptier without the ravens. But not as empty and hollow as I felt. It was amazing how the weight of responsibility came crashing down, threatening to crumple my paper-thin form. I was now the one Loradus searched for, and fought against. And if he had managed to dispose of Ewar, I had little hope of lasting longer than a day. I bowed my head again. "Cowards," Emilius murmured behind me. "Leaving when we need them most." Slowly, I turned about, wiping tears from my eyes. "Rizzo," said Eris, her voice soft and quavering as mine had been, "How can you be sure Loradus knows that--that Ewar passed his title to you?" A lump formed in my throat. "I can't. But he knows." Emilius clenched his beak. "Well, that's all he'll know. He can't know where you are right now, nor will he find out. We'll stay on the run; to the forest one day, the swamps the next--even to the Outlands if we must!" Out of all these words, I heard but a few, and they struck me with a strange energy. "We?" I said weakly. "Yes, we," said Eris. I almost smiled, but then Emilius' words at last took form in my mind, and I realized the hopelessness of running. I stared at the floor. "He has an army under his control," I said. "He will catch us no matter where we go. Perhaps it is best if I turn myself in. Then you would be safe, at least." "No," said Eris, desperation in her voice. "You can't think like that. You'd be giving Loradus exactly what he wants. And after he has you, who knows what he'll do to us?" Something pulled at the back of my mind. My heart and brain were warring with each other, and I struggled to keep standing. Then my hand found the spyglass at my belt again, and I shuddered. Ghosts swirled in my head. "Come on, out the way we came in," said Eris, as if I had made up my mind. And perhaps I had. The thought somehow filled me with dread.
With many a backwards glance of longing, we passed through the window, one behind the other. Then, spreading our wings, we lifted off into the downpour. I looked back a final time to find the decorative wing blackened and smoking; the flames consuming it had been put out by the rain. I beat my wings swiftly, matching the pace of Eris and Emilius as we strove to leave the castle far behind. We were headed south, towards raven territory; though I doubted we would be stopping at the village. The village. Suddenly I was struck by memories of my house, and the horrible darkness that had fallen over it. That had happened earlier that very day, I realized with a numb sort of surprise. Ewar had still been alive.... I squeezed my eyes shut momentarily. Ewar was gone, long gone. It might not have been fair, but no amount of wishing could change it. Gone. I almost couldn't believe it. But at the same time, I could: all too much.
Days passed in an exhausting fashion, as did nights. We would fly (sometimes walk) from dawn until midnight, then take turns as look-out for the little time we did get to rest. The rain ceased to fall at last, giving way to an even thicker mist, which left us inclined to be jumpy during the nights. Several times I awoke my eagle companions, only to find that nothing lurked in the gloom after all, and they promptly fell asleep again. Soon we came upon the raven village, and, much as I had expected, we merely passed it by without setting down once. Looking down through the mist-shrouded tree-tops with sad eyes, I saw that several platforms and bridges had crumbled, beyond the hope of being used ever again. The platforms that remained were crowded with red-eyed ravens, wandering about with no apparent purpose as if half-dead. The contents of my stomach rising, I forced myself to look up again. Why were we bothering to try to escape Loradus's clutches? It seemed impossible that he could cause our world any more harm.
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Post by The J on Jan 18, 2023 16:41:54 GMT
Past the raven village, we stopped for the night. The sky was already pitch-black, and the clouds, still churning in their wrath, blocked out the stars. On this particular night, I was to be lookout again; and as Emilius and Eris settled down to sleep, I sat nearby and swept my gaze across the white trunks of the surrounding trees. The air was thick and damp (with the mist), and no sounds carried over it whatsoever. But this was to be expected. Previous nights had been exactly the same. Sighing, I altered my position to sit facing northward: the way we had come. High above the trees and in the distance, Mount Cavora, the Temple of Emerotopia, could be seen even through the darkness. In fact, the tops of the dead trees looked like gnarled, bony hands trying to snatch the floating rock out of the sky. I took Ewar's spyglass from my belt and lifted it to my right eye, and through it I saw the Chi Falls, tumbling forth from Mount Cavora. They appeared close enough to touch, but when I pulled the spyglass away, they were barely even visible. Looking up at Mount Cavora, I felt some of the dull ache within me fade. Peace came to the very edges of my mind. At the very least, the Mountain was still there, as whole as ever.
Next morning we started off again through the dead jungle, this time on foot. We were walking away from the raven village, that much was certain; but our actual heading was vague to nonexistent. We simply marched along as if out for a midday stroll, doing our best to keep up a fair pace. At some point, the air became thick and the ground softer; then we found that several trees had fallen across our path, and we climbed over them. My false leg sank with every step I took, and my companions seemed to be having similar troubles. Then the slog of footsteps across the muddy ground could be heard from within the mist to one side: soft and cautious, but there nonetheless. I stopped, sinking up to my ankles, and held up my hand.
I heard Eris and Razar halt behind me, and the other footsteps shortly after. "What is it?" Eris whispered. I turned to face her, then inclined my head towards the spot from which the sound had come. "You hear someth--?" Emilius' words were cut short as he suddenly twitched and crumpled to the ground, a small, glittering projectile in his neck. "Could it be Loradus?" murmured Eris, drawing her sword. Fumbling, I drew mine as well. The silence pressed in around us as we waited, until I felt certain that the beating of my heart would give away our position. Then footsteps could be heard all around, and twelve silhouettes appeared in the mist, encircling us completely. Eris barely had time to whisper, "Not good," before I heard multiple exhalations and felt multiple objects prick my neck.
Next I knew, I was trying to open my eyes, a buildup of crust preventing me from doing so completely. What vision I was allowed seemed dreadfully limited and terribly blurred, but when I turned my head to either side, my neck pulsed with a dull ache. Regaining more of my senses, I realized I was lying on my back in mud. I was vaguely surprised to find that neither my arms nor my legs were tied. But when I tried to sit up, a dark figure loomed over me and forced me back down. "Lor--adus," I choked; for whatever reason, my throat felt swollen and I had difficulty getting the words out. The figure let out a rasping chuckle. Then it reached down towards my face, and I squeezed my eyes shut. Soon after, however, I felt a warm, damp cloth rub delicate circles over my closed eyes, clearing them. Once it had moved away, I opened my eyes fully, blinking away any moisture that remained. Then I found myself looking into the eyes of a wiry crocodile with light green scales and an exceptionally large number of teeth. Tattered scarlet cloths hung about his waist and shoulders, and he wore a necklace of fangs. His squinted yellow eyes reminded me very much of Rawzom.
"Is that better, Rizzo?" he asked. He sounded as though he had swallowed a bone the wrong way. "Hhh--hyess," I returned, the inside of my throat throbbing uncomfortably. How had he known my name? "I'm sorry about your throat," the crocodile rasped on, "But we thought you were one of Loradus's followers. The potion on the end of the dart that hit you was meant to damage your speech--but we can whip something up to fix that, don't worry. Can you stand up?" I suddenly wondered if this was a trick. However, since I hadn't many other choices right then, I shakily rose to my feet, the knee-joint on my false leg rattling and creaking. The crocodile then curled a bony arm about my shoulders and began to lead me towards a small shelter, which looked to be made of white logs and branches. Steam was pouring out of a single crude window. As we stepped through the low doorway, I glanced around the rather spartan interior. A table was tucked away in one corner, and near the window an enormous black cooking pot swung slightly, suspended by a chain over glowing embers. "Have a seat," said the crocodile, stepping over to the cooking pot without a look back. I complied, slowly sitting on the mud that was the floor. I noticed that there were many footprints, as if many crocodiles had come and gone quite recently. Soon I looked back up, and the crocodile was fussing over whatever was in the cooking pot. He would sniff at it, his large nostrils flaring, then toss in a handful of strange powder or pine needles or something of the sort, then stir it all together with a long, thick branch. Narrowing my eyes, I ran my hands along my belt. Evidently, despite his scheming eyes, this crocodile was no raven: everything was in its place, even the Katar, which I felt certain I had dropped. "All ready," rasped the crocodile, hurriedly dipping a bowl into the cooking pot and bringing it over to me.
I looked into the bowl and found it full to the brim with a thick, maroon fluid. Taking a painful breath, I lifted it and dipped my beak in. But the instant the first drops touched my tongue, I choked. The taste was horrendous, and I felt the inside of my beak burn. Hot needles jabbed at my tongue, and it coated the inside of my throat as it went down. Eyes welling with moisture, I opened my beak to let out a cry, and a puff of smoke belched forth. "Poison," I gasped, trying to retch. Then I realized my throat was open again. "Oh," I said, getting to my feet (I had fallen on hands and knees after swallowing). "Well?" said the crocodile dryly. I looked guiltily at the bowl: it was lying upside down on the ground, a stain spreading on the mud underneath it. "It worked like a charm," I said, quickly looking up to meet his raven's eyes (and wiping tears from my own). "I--I just--" "That's fine," the crocodile rasped tiredly. "I know how suspicious I must seem. "Now I'll have to call all the crocs together--" "All--all--?" I cut him off. "There-- How many of you are there?" The crocodile blinked. "Um--the rest of the tribe. I'm not sure how many exactly...." "But--does Loradus not control all the tribes?" "Well--" "What have you done with Eris? Emilius? How do you know my name? Have we met?" Now that I could speak again, questions spilled forth, and the crocodile looked increasingly bothered. "Enough!" he said, and I stopped, shutting my beak with a smack. "No, we haven't met formally, and we don't know each other personally; but everyone knows your name. You're the one Loradus calls his 'only worthy adversary'. It used to be just 'the ruler of Emerotopia'"--I felt my heart sink to my toes--"But then your name got added to the title."
"But how did you know it was me?" I asked quietly. "It could have been any other raven--" "You really know so little about what's going on?" The crocodile shook his head. "If you are Rizzo, and I'm certain you are.... "Well, I thought you'd know more." I swallowed. Not meeting his expectations seemed to be a very bad thing. "What did you expect of me?" I asked. The crocodile shrugged. "I don't know. But I thought you'd be able to save us, somehow. "For days, we've been wandering the swamp, hiding from Loradus, waiting for the right moment to strike. But that moment never comes. We're hopeless without a leader." I opened my beak to ask what had happened to Cragger, then quickly shut it again. Then I realized, far too late, the implications of his words. Whilst my poor mind raced, I changed the subject slightly. "How is it that you have escaped Loradus for this long?" The crocodile smiled sadly. "You might say we're adversaries of his, too. Well, we had a head start. "About six moons ago, after King Cragger disappeared, Crooler stepped in to take his place. At first she seemed very happy being Queen, but then...she disappeared too. The rest of us got scared, and we scattered across the swamp." He shuddered. "That's when we learned about Loradus. We'd gotten away just in time." I looked around at the ridged walls of the shelter. Why had Loradus named me his only worthy adversary? Surely the crocodiles had caused him much more trouble--after all, I was here because I had led Eris (and Emilius) into the swamps and into a trap, and I hadn't been able to protect even myself. I had done nothing but watch as Ewar died for me, and now, I felt, I was disappointing this crocodile after he'd said, "I thought you'd be able to help us, somehow." On top of it all, now that I gave it thought, I knew next to nothing of the changes in our world, of the forces of Loradus, or any happenings since departing the crocodile swamp six moons ago with Cragger.
I closed my eyes and sat on the ground again. "What have you done with Eris and Emilius?" I asked for the second time, this being a matter I deemed of immediate importance. The crocodile looked as though he was about to respond, but in that instant a raven's face appeared in the window (upside down). His eyes were the natural color, but strangely eager, and the feathers about those eyes, and crowning his head, were scarlet. The crocodile and I stared. "Do I--know you?" I asked, for his face was somehow familiar. His smile widened as he nodded. "Of course!" said he. "Rawzom introduced me personally!" Somewhere in my darkened and confused mind, I found his name: Radom. "And you're Rizzo," he went on, before taking a tumble and landing on his head outside the window. He quickly popped back up, however, and stepped inside (through the doorway). The crocodile backed against a wall and bared his teeth (rather unnecessary, as all of his many teeth were visible even when he closed his mouth). Noting this nervously, I asked Radom, "How did you find me?" "I tracked you all the way from the Castle. It was tough; and Rawzom'd probably be angry if he knew...." I raised my eyebrows incredulously. "You mean to say that he doesn't know?" At this Radom looked suddenly uncertain. "Well, he might know now...I mean, it would be pretty easy to see that I'm gone...." "Hey, Crawley," said a deep voice, making me jump. A crocodile with muddy brown scales and a lower jaw made entirely of metal stepped through the doorway, supporting the weak form of Eris. "This one just came to--no thanks to the darts." "And--Emilius?" I asked before I could stop myself. The brown-scaled crocodile lowered his eyebrows. "The other eagle?" "Er--yes." "He's still out...could be some time before he wakes up. Poor old soul...." "Potion's in the pot," said the crocodile with many teeth. "I need to deal with these two."
Radom looked at him with interest. "Crawley, did he say?" Crawley nodded as his metal-jawed companion led Eris carefully over to the cooking pot. "And he is...?" said Radom. "Crug," rasped Crawley; then he inhaled and squinted, as if afraid of what Radom would say next. The raven stepped to the doorway, looked out, and then turned back. "You're Cragger's jesters," he said at last, sounding faintly impressed. Crawley's tight expression eased. "Loradus is after you, too," muttered Radom. "He seemed awfully annoyed with the whole crocodile tribe...." A sudden coughing fit exploded out from a corner as Eris drank the fluid from the cooking pot, and we all jumped. Sputtering, she swiped moisture from her wide eyes and stepped towards the center of the room. "Better?" said Crug from the corner, his metal jaw inhibiting his speech slightly. Eris spoke several words at different pitches (none of which I understood), then nodded. "Yeah, that woke me up, thanks." She acknowledged my presence with a smile and a nod, then turned to Radom and asked, at the same time as Crawley (though with emphasis on different words), "Why are you here?" Radom looked keenly back at both of them. "That's an interesting story. See, I thought Rizzo'd need my help, so I tracked him--and you," he added, nodding to Eris. "Then he led me right to others who needed help. So--" "I've heard enough," said Crawley, his eyes slanting in suspicion. "You now know something Loradus doesn't: our whereabouts. And you'd better not sell that information to anyone, because we're the last obstacle that stands between Loradus and control--or destruction--of our world." "Now, now, now!" Radom almost squeaked. "I wasn't planning to sell any information to Loradus--or anyone else!" "Mentioning him specifically isn't helping," Eris murmured. Crawley glared at Radom one last time. "If you found us here, Loradus will, too."
He looked to Crug. "We need to call together everyone and discuss the situation...maybe move our hideout again..." "Or maybe start an attack on his forces?" said Crug. Crawley glanced at me, and I realized just how little I knew about the current situation. "Well, come on," said Crug, striding towards the doorway and beckoning to Crawley. "Let's bring 'em all together."
Eris, Radom, and I were led to another, larger shelter shortly thereafter; this one was circular, and a ring of wide, flat stones dominated the interior. Still there was no sign of Emilius. "Wait here," said Crug as he turned to leave with Crawley. "Crocs'll be coming in soon enough." I nodded politely, then sat on the ground and stared around at the walls miserably. I felt that my lack of a grasp on the situation would catch up to me all too soon. How would the crocodiles react once they knew who I was? Would they ask me to join them? Would they imprison me? Hand me over to Loradus? Or was all of this nothing more than a well-laid trap? Waiting five moons in my own house had not improved my reason, and I was practically panicking right then because of it. "Rizzo--what's wrong?" said Radom. "You look almost as worried as me." I turned to him and found that he did indeed look worried: even his feathers seemed paler than usual. He blinked his yellow eyes. "Well?" I clenched my beak, realizing vaguely that he knew how to make one somehow uncomfortable. "Well," I began, "It may seem plain to you, but--but--" "You don't know what to expect from your own world," said Eris softly. I stared at the ground. "How did you--?" "It was easy, really," she said. "Your eyes spun every time one of us brought up Loradus' army. You really don't know what happened here, do you?" "I never did," I whispered, thinking of the torn, desolate landscape that had once been so beautiful. "That might be a good thing," said Radom unexpectedly. "If he did know, he'd be too depressed to go on, right?"
Soon crocodiles began to trickle in, taking seats on the stones. Apparently noticing this, Eris took a seat on a stone herself, then motioned for me to do so as well. At length, every stone became occupied, and some crocodiles were forced to stand by the walls or hunker down near the stones. The last to arrive were Crawley and Crug, who looked terribly weary of a sudden. "Alright," said Crug as they stepped to the center of the ring of stones. "Everyone's attention, please?" But he'd hardly needed to ask for it; everyone present had his or her eyes on the two crocodiles. I felt my stomach churn. "You're probably wondering," said Crawley, "or worrying: why did we call you together? There are two reasons, actually--" He paused for breath, and it seemed to me that he was the only one breathing at all right then. "First, a raven has found us--not stumbled in on us, as some have before--but found us." "It wasn't like that," I heard Radom mumble from across the room. This earned a few suspicious glares. "What makes this strange, though," said Crug, picking up where Crawley left off, "is that the raven is a friend." Puzzled mutters came from the darkest corners of the shelter, but for the most part, the room kept its unnerving silence. I swallowed with difficulty. "But," Crug went on, "even if he is a friend, he found us. And if he could find us, Loradus can too. "But what we'll do about this has to do with our second reason." I swallowed again, realizing vaguely that my throat was dry. "Now, this might be a bit of a surprise," said Crawley, his rasp sounding drier than usual. "You all know about Rizzo, the ruler of Emerotopia, the one Loradus calls his greatest adversary, yes?" There was a collective, "Yes!" The crocodiles sounded very hopeful, and some began to shout excitedly: "Has he come at last?" "Where is he?" "Did he finish Loradus?" "Will he lead us to victory?"
And that's as much of this story as the archive site has. A shame it's not there in its entirety, but hey, at least it was something like 80% of the story, unlike my story "The Heroic Sacrifice", of which only the first four or so chapters are there.
Maybe someday Z-Whales or Epic himself will return to this topic and complete the story, but it seems my work here is done.
Editor's note: Well, it's at this point that the archive site stopped having screenshots of the pages in their entirety, for whatever reason; only the first 9 posts of page 70 are there, with posts 10-15 nowhere in sight. There was at least 1 other story post on page 70 that was luckily quoted by a reader on page 71, but as for the other 4 missing posts on page 70, I can only hope that they were discussion posts, and not story posts. For instances like these, I'll now put a "?" at the top of the post to denote that there may be missing portions of the story between that at the post that preceded it.
We are, however, approaching the "end" of this story; and by that I mean the extent of the story that's available on the archive site, which is definitely not the entirety of it, unfortunately. I'm giving this heads-up in advance, so that anyone reading this later down the line won't feel the jarring confusion of an abrupt stop to the story.
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Sorry for interrupting the flow of the story with my ramblings, but I've confirmed that pages 72 and 73 are also screenshotted in their entirety; 15 posts each, which means there won't be any more gaps between available story segments. I guess pages 70 and 73 just got unlucky...
Many of the posts on these "last" pages, however, are discussion posts. In total, across pages 71-73, there are 11 story posts left. I'll probably post them all tomorrow, in one fell swoop.