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Post by LordTigress on Jan 10, 2019 11:40:39 GMT
Arc-1Chapter-9
"I was walking through the valley, when an Oni showed up. It's shriek was the most horrid, sickening noise that have ever come across my, or most likely anyone's, ears. My fear reached it's limits, then went beyond my imagination. I don't know what happened. I... was unconscious. It...it-" At this point, the boy started losing his breath. He was the most miserable being in the realm. Firstbourne jumped in. "Calm yourself. I will help in whatever way I can. Just finish your story." "Oh-oh... right. My fear... was beyond imagination. This resulted in something I can't explain. Something... awful. There was an explosion-o-or... something. When I awoke from my slumber crowded by fear... the mountains were collapsing. The Oni was... I-well... It's gone. It's my fault. I destroyed it. You were right to call me a monster. It's what I am... It's all I'll ever be. Now that I think about it, don't even bother with me. I just... wish I wasn't so powerful. My power. It hurts everyone around me. It hurts me. I wanted you to come... because I though you would be of some help... but you'd end up getting hurt. I wouldn't be able to live with myself." Firstbourne paid close attention to the boy's story. She paid attention to the tears rolling down his cheeks. Then she replied. "No. You're not a monster. You're my child, I shall raise you. You will not destroy me. What you did... you didn't mean to destroy the Oni. Besides, in destroying the being that was before you, you honored me, your creator." This created a great impact upon the boy, and it would soon create a great impact upon the realm, as well as realms yet to come. After some thought, the boy accompanied the Firstbourne to her nest, where he found pure beauty for the first time. He also witnessed the Flower of Light for the first time. Firstbourne commented. "This is the Flower of Light. You are the first being to witness the Flower of Light. Any Oni who has witnessed the Flower of Light, has vanished from existence. Do you see it's beauty? Do you see why we want the whole realm to represent this flower?" "I do. But I believe that without the Oni, the realm would burn from it's light..."
Arc-1chapter-9: End Poor boy. Atta girl, Firstborne. ^.^
Hmm, I see the yin-and-yang, "one cannot be without the other", concept of Ninjago being born. . .
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Post by TheGreatCon on Jan 12, 2019 1:49:58 GMT
I don't need sympathy, I need all the shows CONdensed into a pocket-size novel. Maybe you could read the Wikipedia pages about each episode. Oh sure. I've got a bunch of time to burn.
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Post by LordTigress on Jan 12, 2019 12:24:22 GMT
Maybe you could read the Wikipedia pages about each episode. Oh sure. I've got a bunch of time to burn. Or you could continue living in ignorance of the details and major history of the fictional world you continue immersing yourself in.
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Post by ninjagofanmam on Jan 13, 2019 2:38:35 GMT
Arc-1Chapter-9
"I was walking through the valley, when an Oni showed up. It's shriek was the most horrid, sickening noise that have ever come across my, or most likely anyone's, ears. My fear reached it's limits, then went beyond my imagination. I don't know what happened. I... was unconscious. It...it-" At this point, the boy started losing his breath. He was the most miserable being in the realm. Firstbourne jumped in. "Calm yourself. I will help in whatever way I can. Just finish your story." "Oh-oh... right. My fear... was beyond imagination. This resulted in something I can't explain. Something... awful. There was an explosion-o-or... something. When I awoke from my slumber crowded by fear... the mountains were collapsing. The Oni was... I-well... It's gone. It's my fault. I destroyed it. You were right to call me a monster. It's what I am... It's all I'll ever be. Now that I think about it, don't even bother with me. I just... wish I wasn't so powerful. My power. It hurts everyone around me. It hurts me. I wanted you to come... because I though you would be of some help... but you'd end up getting hurt. I wouldn't be able to live with myself." Firstbourne paid close attention to the boy's story. She paid attention to the tears rolling down his cheeks. Then she replied. "No. You're not a monster. You're my child, I shall raise you. You will not destroy me. What you did... you didn't mean to destroy the Oni. Besides, in destroying the being that was before you, you honored me, your creator." This created a great impact upon the boy, and it would soon create a great impact upon the realm, as well as realms yet to come. After some thought, the boy accompanied the Firstbourne to her nest, where he found pure beauty for the first time. He also witnessed the Flower of Light for the first time. Firstbourne commented. "This is the Flower of Light. You are the first being to witness the Flower of Light. Any Oni who has witnessed the Flower of Light, has vanished from existence. Do you see it's beauty? Do you see why we want the whole realm to represent this flower?" "I do. But I believe that without the Oni, the realm would burn from it's light..."
Arc-1chapter-9: End I love the interesting dialogue, beautiful!
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Post by Epl317 on Jan 13, 2019 6:18:45 GMT
Arc-1Chapter-9
"I was walking through the valley, when an Oni showed up. It's shriek was the most horrid, sickening noise that have ever come across my, or most likely anyone's, ears. My fear reached it's limits, then went beyond my imagination. I don't know what happened. I... was unconscious. It...it-" At this point, the boy started losing his breath. He was the most miserable being in the realm. Firstbourne jumped in. "Calm yourself. I will help in whatever way I can. Just finish your story." "Oh-oh... right. My fear... was beyond imagination. This resulted in something I can't explain. Something... awful. There was an explosion-o-or... something. When I awoke from my slumber crowded by fear... the mountains were collapsing. The Oni was... I-well... It's gone. It's my fault. I destroyed it. You were right to call me a monster. It's what I am... It's all I'll ever be. Now that I think about it, don't even bother with me. I just... wish I wasn't so powerful. My power. It hurts everyone around me. It hurts me. I wanted you to come... because I though you would be of some help... but you'd end up getting hurt. I wouldn't be able to live with myself." Firstbourne paid close attention to the boy's story. She paid attention to the tears rolling down his cheeks. Then she replied. "No. You're not a monster. You're my child, I shall raise you. You will not destroy me. What you did... you didn't mean to destroy the Oni. Besides, in destroying the being that was before you, you honored me, your creator." This created a great impact upon the boy, and it would soon create a great impact upon the realm, as well as realms yet to come. After some thought, the boy accompanied the Firstbourne to her nest, where he found pure beauty for the first time. He also witnessed the Flower of Light for the first time. Firstbourne commented. "This is the Flower of Light. You are the first being to witness the Flower of Light. Any Oni who has witnessed the Flower of Light, has vanished from existence. Do you see it's beauty? Do you see why we want the whole realm to represent this flower?" "I do. But I believe that without the Oni, the realm would burn from it's light..."
Arc-1chapter-9: End I love the interesting dialogue, beautiful! Thanks! I'm trying to write a nice mix of narration and dialogue that everyone can enjoy. And just so everyone knows, my schedule is getting a bit unpredictable, so I won't be able to maintain my normal schedule on LMBE. In other words, I'll try to post chapters as often as possible, but I might not be able to post more than two chapters a week.
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Post by LordTigress on Jan 13, 2019 13:45:22 GMT
I love the interesting dialogue, beautiful! Thanks! I'm trying to write a nice mix of narration and dialogue that everyone can enjoy. And just so everyone knows, my schedule is getting a bit unpredictable, so I won't be able to maintain my normal schedule on LMBE. In other words, I'll try to post chapters as often as possible, but I might not be able to post more than two chapters a week. Oof, that's too bad. But we'll definitely be looking forward to your posts when you can get to them.
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Post by TheGreatCon on Jan 18, 2019 0:06:26 GMT
I love the interesting dialogue, beautiful! Thanks! I'm trying to write a nice mix of narration and dialogue that everyone can enjoy. And just so everyone knows, my schedule is getting a bit unpredictable, so I won't be able to maintain my normal schedule on LMBE. In other words, I'll try to post chapters as often as possible, but I might not be able to post more than two chapters a week. I will look forward to whatever parts you CON get to us.
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Post by ninjagofanmam on Jan 20, 2019 4:23:18 GMT
I love the interesting dialogue, beautiful! Thanks! I'm trying to write a nice mix of narration and dialogue that everyone can enjoy. And just so everyone knows, my schedule is getting a bit unpredictable, so I won't be able to maintain my normal schedule on LMBE. In other words, I'll try to post chapters as often as possible, but I might not be able to post more than two chapters a week. You're welcome! You're doing a wonderful job with that. That's alright, we'll be glad to read them whenever you post them.
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Post by Epl317 on Jan 20, 2019 22:53:18 GMT
Arc-1Chapter10
After these events came to pass, The First Spinjitzu Master stayed with the Firstbourne for thirty-seven days. During this time, the chief Oni, Shigaraiham, made plans for a disastrous event that would traumatize the Realm of Oni and Dragons. This would be the biggest event to ever be witnessed by the realm in which Oni and Dragons thrived. However, the boy and his mother had no way of knowing the horrid event beginning to take place.
The boy and the mother of all dragons had become very close to each other. She showed her child how the Dragons lived, as well as basic moral lessons. She showed him what it means to be kind and to have a family. However, the boy disagreed about one thing. He was still, no matter how hard he tried to convince his mother, the only one who saw the need for the darkness.
One night, the boy left the Dragons' land while most were asleep. Firstbourne knew the boy was leaving, but chose not to act until he was a far distance away. When the boy had reached the valley opposite to the site of his last emotions, the Firstbourne left her nest. She arrived and said this:
"My child. Why do you leave me? Have we not become close? Is this not what you wanted?"
"No one understands the need for both sides. Tell me, Firstbourne, what would happen if gravity didn't exist?"
"Well, we would be able to leave the ground, but we could never come back. We would starve due to the lack of food, most likely."
"Yes. Now tell me, what would happen if we didn't have darkness, if we didn't have shadow?"
"We would burn. However, it's better to burn of beauty than to live with chaos."
"No. You're wrong. If we didn't have gravity, we could discover new worlds, but we would starve. We would escape from chaos in this manner, but would it be worth it?"
"I-I... I don't know."
"Please. Admit your fault. You've lied to me. You don't believe we would burn from light. You think I'm crazy, so you come up with excuses of self sacrifice to escape from telling me what you really think of me."
During this conversation, the two were blind to the chaos erupting within Firstbourne's nest. They were unaware that the Oni had already began to make their attack...
Ch. 10: END
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Post by TheGreatCon on Jan 22, 2019 3:25:15 GMT
Oh sure. I've got a bunch of time to burn. Or you could continue living in ignorance of the details and major history of the fictional world you continue immersing yourself in. Yep, that sounds exactly like what's gonna happen.
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Post by LordTigress on Jan 22, 2019 9:55:12 GMT
Or you could continue living in ignorance of the details and major history of the fictional world you continue immersing yourself in. Yep, that sounds exactly like what's gonna happen. Cool, good plan.
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Post by LordTigress on Jan 22, 2019 9:56:38 GMT
Arc-1Chapter10
*snip* "No. You're wrong. If we didn't have gravity, we could discover new worlds, but we would starve. We would escape from chaos in this manner, but would it be worth it?" "I-I... I don't know." "Please. Admit your fault. You've lied to me. You don't believe we would burn from light. You think I'm crazy, so you come up with excuses of self sacrifice to escape from telling me what you really think of me." During this conversation, the two were blind to the chaos erupting within Firstbourne's nest. They were unaware that the Oni had already began to make their attack...
Ch. 10: END Heads up, you two, there's trouble brewing. o.o
Great chapter! I liked the conversation between the boy and Firstborne.
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Post by ninjagofanmam on Jan 22, 2019 21:12:42 GMT
Arc-1Chapter10
After these events came to pass, The First Spinjitzu Master stayed with the Firstbourne for thirty-seven days. During this time, the chief Oni, Shigaraiham, made plans for a disastrous event that would traumatize the Realm of Oni and Dragons. This would be the biggest event to ever be witnessed by the realm in which Oni and Dragons thrived. However, the boy and his mother had no way of knowing the horrid event beginning to take place. The boy and the mother of all dragons had become very close to each other. She showed her child how the Dragons lived, as well as basic moral lessons. She showed him what it means to be kind and to have a family. However, the boy disagreed about one thing. He was still, no matter how hard he tried to convince his mother, the only one who saw the need for the darkness. One night, the boy left the Dragons' land while most were asleep. Firstbourne knew the boy was leaving, but chose not to act until he was a far distance away. When the boy had reached the valley opposite to the site of his last emotions, the Firstbourne left her nest. She arrived and said this: "My child. Why do you leave me? Have we not become close? Is this not what you wanted?" "No one understands the need for both sides. Tell me, Firstbourne, what would happen if gravity didn't exist?" "Well, we would be able to leave the ground, but we could never come back. We would starve due to the lack of food, most likely." "Yes. Now tell me, what would happen if we didn't have darkness, if we didn't have shadow?" "We would burn. However, it's better to burn of beauty than to live with chaos." "No. You're wrong. If we didn't have gravity, we could discover new worlds, but we would starve. We would escape from chaos in this manner, but would it be worth it?" "I-I... I don't know." "Please. Admit your fault. You've lied to me. You don't believe we would burn from light. You think I'm crazy, so you come up with excuses of self sacrifice to escape from telling me what you really think of me." During this conversation, the two were blind to the chaos erupting within Firstbourne's nest. They were unaware that the Oni had already began to make their attack...
Ch. 10: END Again, love the dialogue! Uh oh... O.O
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Post by TheGreatCon on Jan 31, 2019 17:41:28 GMT
Yep, that sounds exactly like what's gonna happen. Cool, good plan. No, actually, it's a pretty awful plan.
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Post by Epl317 on Jun 22, 2019 1:17:36 GMT
This story was going so many good places, then I ran out of time. ):
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