Considering I've been used as a scapegoat on more than one occasion, I am not ammused by your comical persistance to blame your fictional goat.
Would you rather I used a legitimate user?
I came out here, to this place, to this point, hoping against all hope and despite signs and portends suggesting otherwise that I might, somehow, find myself having a pleasant experience, and yet here I stand, alone against the world, feeling assaulted, attacked on all fronts, knowing not my enemy's face, nor his name, nor whether our battle is done.
"Wise words by wise men write wise deeds in wise pen." —Lollimon the Wise
I came out here, to this place, to this point, hoping against all hope and despite signs and portends suggesting otherwise that I might, somehow, find myself having a pleasant experience, and yet here I stand, alone against the world, feeling assaulted, attacked on all fronts, knowing not my enemy's face, nor his name, nor whether our battle is done.
"I came out to have a good time and I'm honestly feeling so attacked right now" xD
I came out here, to this place, to this point, hoping against all hope and despite signs and portends suggesting otherwise that I might, somehow, find myself having a pleasant experience, and yet here I stand, alone against the world, feeling assaulted, attacked on all fronts, knowing not my enemy's face, nor his name, nor whether our battle is done.
I'm googling this right now to figure out if this is a quote, meme, of if I've actually offended you.
-last edited on Dec 29, 2018 3:48:19 GMT by TheGreatCon
Post by TheGreatCon on Dec 29, 2018 3:47:27 GMT
Okay, first off, an update. I am working on a sequel. There are words on paper the word document. It's been an incredibly slow process, and at this point I keep changing stuff, so I basically get on one day, rewrite two-thirds of what I wrote the last time, and then that just keeps repeating over and over. Don't give up yet, though, there's still hope.
Meanwhile, here's a deleted scene from BASICS. This is right after Alejandro has apologized to Celeste (as you CON probably gather), and was deleted because it was CONplete garbage. It'll take me a couple posts to get it out, so that gives me a good excuse to put off posting the sequel stay tuned.
I found Mateo upstairs, tossing paper clips at passing pedestrians from the window. “Yo, what’s Celeste’s contact info?”
“Just message her on LMB.” He said, then doubled over laughing as if he had just said the most hilarious thing ever.
I was not amused. “No, really.” “First off, I saw her yesterday, and she seems to be in some sort of dream state about you. She’s back in ‘Alejandro is an amazing person’ mode, and I’m just kind of wondering how the bricks she’s back to that, right after you lock yourself in your room like some sociopath.” Mateo straightened back out. “Explain, and it better be good.” “I said I was sorry.” “Uh-huh.” Mateo said. “I bet that part went over well.” “Of course.” I said, trying to ignore the sarcasm. “And then she hit you?” He ventured a guess. “No, that was it.” I tried. “All that happened.” “Uh-huh. Like that would work.” Mateo gave me a bored look. “Man, you might not know girls, but I’ve got sisters.” I threw up my hands. “Oh, alright, I got vulnerable and I cried and somehow she liked that.” “They relate with emotions. They don’t relate with high scores.” Mateo pulled out his phone. “What do you need?”
Okay, first off, an update. I am working on a sequel. There are words on paper the word document. It's been an incredibly slow process, and at this point I keep changing stuff, so I basically get on one day, rewrite two-thirds of what I wrote the last time, and then that just keeps repeating over and over. Don't give up yet, though, there's still hope.
Meanwhile, here's a deleted scene from BASICS. This is right after Alejandro has apologized to Celeste (as you CON probably gather), and was deleted because it was CONplete garbage. It'll take me a couple posts to get it out, so that gives me a good excuse to put off posting the sequel stay tuned.
I found Mateo upstairs, tossing paper clips at passing pedestrians from the window. “Yo, what’s Celeste’s contact info?”
“Just message her on LMB.” He said, then doubled over laughing as if he had just said the most hilarious thing ever.
I was not amused. “No, really.” “First off, I saw her yesterday, and she seems to be in some sort of dream state about you. She’s back in ‘Alejandro is an amazing person’ mode, and I’m just kind of wondering how the bricks she’s back to that, right after you lock yourself in your room like some sociopath.” Mateo straightened back out. “Explain, and it better be good.” “I said I was sorry.” “Uh-huh.” Mateo said. “I bet that part went over well.” “Of course.” I said, trying to ignore the sarcasm. “And then she hit you?” He ventured a guess. “No, that was it.” I tried. “All that happened.” “Uh-huh. Like that would work.” Mateo gave me a bored look. “Man, you might not know girls, but I’ve got sisters.” I threw up my hands. “Oh, alright, I got vulnerable and I cried and somehow she liked that.” “They relate with emotions. They don’t relate with high scores.” Mateo pulled out his phone. “What do you need?”
Who told you it was garbage?? It was funny and accurate. Moar? : D
You are most welcome, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Well, to be honest most of the time I spend on here is looking for new stories to read, so when I saw this one with so many pages I was like, Bring it on.
That is a unique mindset.
Why thank you. I want to be a writer, so it's super inspiring to find people who can commit and make an amazing story like you did.
I don't care! We aren't losing you to life again!!
I don't know how you propose to do that.
I could. . . *thinks frantically* . . . I could fly over there and kidnap you, and then you wouldn't have to worry about college and life-stuff anymore.
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I agree, it kind of continues the theme. : D
Sometimes these growth pains take a little longer. 
Well, to be honest most of the time I spend on here is looking for new stories to read, so when I saw this one with so many pages I was like, Bring it on. 
