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May 23, 2018 12:05:41 GMT
Post by K66 on May 23, 2018 12:05:41 GMT
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May 24, 2018 0:43:52 GMT
-last edited on May 24, 2018 0:46:44 GMT by Gnuehchcaz
Post by Gnuehchcaz on May 24, 2018 0:43:52 GMT
 Indeed. I figured you'd like a good twist/unfortunate circumstance. Lol. I suppose part of it was inspired from your Character Development topic to make a conflict in a relationship. Glad you like it.  Maybe. You would still probably get into your fight with Mordo at the beginning and end up in the room with weeping angels, and I would still have my job working with the Millennium Falcon. Hmm, maybe Lila and Zach would be the only two beings in the universe to remember that branch of time. I've thought about a few ways it could end, maybe with them getting close to getting back together. We could end it there, or if we want to explore more stories, we could continue. I guess we can decide once we finish this one.
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Post by Gnuehchcaz on May 24, 2018 0:44:29 GMT
Looks great!! Yeah, this will help to describe her. Pretty good for making it out of Star Wars parts.  Indeed you do. 
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Post by K66 on May 27, 2018 2:34:15 GMT
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Post by Gnuehchcaz on May 27, 2018 7:21:16 GMT
Indeed it is. Isn't there this thing about authors trying to hurt their characters in their stories? Lol. Is that a good thing? Hehe. I still need to work on that. I've been quite busy lately. I've thought of one way for the ending. Let me know what you think: Zach would wake up from bed at home after time had reset to before they met, and he would be saddened that Lila doesn't exist in his universe anymore. It's hard for him to explain to his mom how he feels since it's so complicated. Then his mom says that when she was in the Jedi Academy, a guy and a girl (Zach and Lila), helped to explain her complicated feelings for Zach's father, but then Zach realizes that Lila had actually existed in his mom's memory from when they went back in time. Then Zach realizes that his adventure with Lila had created a Fixed Point in time. Zach becomes excited and goes about his day fixing the Millennium Falcon, fleeing from Stormtroopers, landing in Ninjago, helping Ronin, and going through the realm crystal's portal all just to meet Lila again. Meanwhile, Lila would end up in the room with Weeping Angels and miss being with Zach now that she's alone in that room. Then all of a sudden a portal opens and Zach appears just like the first time they met, then our characters come together in a hug after seeing that both of them still exist in each other's universes. Maybe for a short period before we post the final chapter, but with a deeper suffering for our readers. Maybe before Zach and Lila destroy the object, they try to prepare for never seeing each other again. Then they get attacked one more time, and Zach sacrifices himself to protect Lila while she destroys the object by herself. Yeah.
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Post by K66 on May 28, 2018 0:22:47 GMT
Indeed it is. Isn't there this thing about authors trying to hurt their characters in their stories? Lol. Is that a good thing? Hehe. I still need to work on that. I've been quite busy lately. I've thought of one way for the ending. Let me know what you think: Zach would wake up from bed at home after time had reset to before they met, and he would be saddened that Lila doesn't exist in his universe anymore. It's hard for him to explain to his mom how he feels since it's so complicated. Then his mom says that when she was in the Jedi Academy, a guy and a girl (Zach and Lila), helped to explain her complicated feelings for Zach's father, but then Zach realizes that Lila had actually existed in his mom's memory from when they went back in time. Then Zach realizes that his adventure with Lila had created a Fixed Point in time. Zach becomes excited and goes about his day fixing the Millennium Falcon, fleeing from Stormtroopers, landing in Ninjago, helping Ronin, and going through the realm crystal's portal all just to meet Lila again. Meanwhile, Lila would end up in the room with Weeping Angels and miss being with Zach now that she's alone in that room. Then all of a sudden a portal opens and Zach appears just like the first time they met, then our characters come together in a hug after seeing that both of them still exist in each other's universes. Maybe for a short period before we post the final chapter, but with a deeper suffering for our readers. Maybe before Zach and Lila destroy the object, they try to prepare for never seeing each other again. Then they get attacked one more time, and Zach sacrifices himself to protect Lila while she destroys the object by herself. Yeah.
I'm only teasing. Take your time. 
I'm not sure.
Ok.
That is awesome, but doesn't that mean they're caught in a time loop that way?
Oh my gosh! 
I love that so much!
I think my heart stopped when I read that last sentence and remembered this was coming from you. XD
I love it.
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Post by Gnuehchcaz on May 28, 2018 2:24:43 GMT
Indeed it is. Isn't there this thing about authors trying to hurt their characters in their stories? Lol. Is that a good thing? Hehe. I still need to work on that. I've been quite busy lately. I've thought of one way for the ending. Let me know what you think: Zach would wake up from bed at home after time had reset to before they met, and he would be saddened that Lila doesn't exist in his universe anymore. It's hard for him to explain to his mom how he feels since it's so complicated. Then his mom says that when she was in the Jedi Academy, a guy and a girl (Zach and Lila), helped to explain her complicated feelings for Zach's father, but then Zach realizes that Lila had actually existed in his mom's memory from when they went back in time. Then Zach realizes that his adventure with Lila had created a Fixed Point in time. Zach becomes excited and goes about his day fixing the Millennium Falcon, fleeing from Stormtroopers, landing in Ninjago, helping Ronin, and going through the realm crystal's portal all just to meet Lila again. Meanwhile, Lila would end up in the room with Weeping Angels and miss being with Zach now that she's alone in that room. Then all of a sudden a portal opens and Zach appears just like the first time they met, then our characters come together in a hug after seeing that both of them still exist in each other's universes. Maybe for a short period before we post the final chapter, but with a deeper suffering for our readers. Maybe before Zach and Lila destroy the object, they try to prepare for never seeing each other again. Then they get attacked one more time, and Zach sacrifices himself to protect Lila while she destroys the object by herself. Yeah.
I'm only teasing. Take your time.
I'm not sure.
Ok.
That is awesome, but doesn't that mean they're caught in a time loop that way?
Oh my gosh!
I love that so much!
I think my heart stopped when I read that last sentence and remembered this was coming from you. XD
I love it.
i guess that's what the directors of Infinity War are trying to do. Lol. That's my line. Ah well. I was thinking about that. Perhaps there could be something different that happens in this timeline besides them knowing that an alternate timeline happened. I'm not sure what though. I suppose that ending is kind of sweet. Lol. It is quite an unexpected thing to hear from me. You love that I'm going to sacrifice myself? Well, if it's to protect you so you can save the universe, then I guess it's a pretty honorable sacrifice.
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May 28, 2018 2:46:19 GMT
-last edited on May 28, 2018 2:47:35 GMT by K66: Last sentence...
Post by K66 on May 28, 2018 2:46:19 GMT
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Post by Gnuehchcaz on May 28, 2018 3:05:22 GMT
Lol, sorry. I guess it's still a little early to talk about Infinity War. Hehe. Yeah. Hmm, what kind of emotion do we want our readers to feel? That's always a tough question to ask. Lol. I suppose I've learned a few things about story writing from you pretty quickly. That's alright. Yep, I think that's exactly what I was going for. Smashing a loved character, despite it being myself. Almost a sign of true love. Exactly. I guess Zach knew he didn't have much to lose anyway.
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Post by K66 on May 28, 2018 3:14:41 GMT
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Post by Gnuehchcaz on May 28, 2018 3:35:13 GMT
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Post by K66 on May 28, 2018 3:39:18 GMT
I guess I can agree. That worked out quite nicely. I guess we'll see if I learn more from you. Like, who will end of writing that part? Maybe Zach senses something in the Force that tells him that it's going to be alright. Speaking of The Force, they say that it binds the universe together, but the Infinity Stones also do that, and if there's something in Doctor Who or Ninjago that also do that, then which one is more dominant? or do all of them hold the universe together at the same time?
Lol.
Prehaps. If I can get to actually writing and typing things.
We shall see, I suppose.
Good idea.
Next, will they have an emotional moment before hand, or will it be a "hit and run" type?
That is another good question. What if they all four had something, and then break one of the items, then the entire connection is compromised? 
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May 28, 2018 3:45:29 GMT
-last edited on May 28, 2018 3:47:55 GMT by Gnuehchcaz
Post by Gnuehchcaz on May 28, 2018 3:45:29 GMT
I guess I can agree. That worked out quite nicely. I guess we'll see if I learn more from you. Like, who will end of writing that part? Maybe Zach senses something in the Force that tells him that it's going to be alright. Speaking of The Force, they say that it binds the universe together, but the Infinity Stones also do that, and if there's something in Doctor Who or Ninjago that also do that, then which one is more dominant? or do all of them hold the universe together at the same time?
Lol.
Prehaps. If I can get to actually writing and typing things.
We shall see, I suppose.
Good idea.
Next, will they have an emotional moment before hand, or will it be a "hit and run" type?
That is another good question. What if they all four had something, and then break one of the items, then the entire connection is compromised? Hopefully that won't be too hard since you're on vacation. Yep. With the emotional moment, Zach can share his last words and reveal true feelings for Lila, or is that a little cheesy? Maybe. Perhaps if a Star Wars Kyber Saber crystal, the six Infinty Stones, Ninjago's Realm Crystal, and whatever source powers the TARDIS (maybe there's something in your encyclopedia about it) are united, then anyone holding them can control all universes, and then going off of your idea, if one of them breaks the universe resets. It definitely looks like a big rock collection.
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Post by K66 on May 30, 2018 4:02:48 GMT
Hopefully that won't be too hard since you're on vacation. Yep. With the emotional moment, Zach can share his last words and reveal true feelings for Lila, or is that a little cheesy? Maybe. Perhaps if a Star Wars Kyber Saber crystal, the six Infinty Stones, Ninjago's Realm Crystal, and whatever source powers the TARDIS (maybe there's something in your encyclopedia about it) are united, then anyone holding them can control all universes, and then going off of your idea, if one of them breaks the universe resets. It definitely looks like a big rock collection.
I mean, if we do that, then yeah. It'll be cheesy.
I kinda like the idea of not having one a little more, but it's your call.
That is good.
So, the Infinity Stones control the Marvel universe, the special Kyber Crystal (let me try to do some research on that. I think I remember something about one in the Clone Wars series.) can control the Star Wars universe, the Realm Crystal can control the Ninjago universe (maybe through a special treatment or something like that.), and the Heart of the TARDIS can control anything in the Doctor Who universe (yes, I will be sure to do that. Rewatching the last episode of Doctor Who where christopher eccleston becomes David Tennant at the end might also be useful. The Game show episodes.).
Brought together, they can control all of them.
Around about right?
Ooh! Since we're doing Infinity Stones, what if Mordor is working for Thanos? We may have to change our main villains for some of the books of that is the case.
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May 30, 2018 8:12:34 GMT
-last edited on May 30, 2018 8:12:56 GMT by Gnuehchcaz
Post by Gnuehchcaz on May 30, 2018 8:12:34 GMT
Hopefully that won't be too hard since you're on vacation. Yep. With the emotional moment, Zach can share his last words and reveal true feelings for Lila, or is that a little cheesy? Maybe. Perhaps if a Star Wars Kyber Saber crystal, the six Infinty Stones, Ninjago's Realm Crystal, and whatever source powers the TARDIS (maybe there's something in your encyclopedia about it) are united, then anyone holding them can control all universes, and then going off of your idea, if one of them breaks the universe resets. It definitely looks like a big rock collection.
I mean, if we do that, then yeah. It'll be cheesy.
I kinda like the idea of not having one a little more, but it's your call.
That is good.
So, the Infinity Stones control the Marvel universe, the special Kyber Crystal (let me try to do some research on that. I think I remember something about one in the Clone Wars series.) can control the Star Wars universe, the Realm Crystal can control the Ninjago universe (maybe through a special treatment or something like that.), and the Heart of the TARDIS can control anything in the Doctor Who universe (yes, I will be sure to do that. Rewatching the last episode of Doctor Who where christopher eccleston becomes David Tennant at the end might also be useful. The Game show episodes.).
Brought together, they can control all of them.
Around about right?
Ooh! Since we're doing Infinity Stones, what if Mordor is working for Thanos? We may have to change our main villains for some of the books of that is the case. True. As I always say... I think you know what I'm going to say. Hmm. What if Zach sacrificed himself and the villains offer Lila the tempting choice of either her giving the stones back to the villains who say they'll revive Zach, or she destroy the stones and reset the universe? While she's thinking on that, Zach would be begging her to not give it to the villains as he gasps his last few breaths? Nice. Pretty much. Looks like we got a lot of research to do. I still have to watch The Clone Wars, and I probably should rewatch the last episode from 9th Doctor. The last time I watched it was a few years ago. Yep. Sounds about right. Would they remain as a collection that is linked together, or would they combine into one ultimate all-powerful stone? Maybe. Are we going off of the end of Infinity War where Thanos already has all the Infinity Stones, or are we going our own direction with them? Yeah, we might have to make a few changes if Thanos is to be our main villain. Oh, I just got an idea for some of the story. Maybe in book 1, Thanos retrieves the Infinity Stones, in book 2, Lila and Zach prevent Thanos from getting the Kyber Saber Crystal, in Book 3, Lila and Zach lose the Kyber Crystal and Ninjago's realm crystal as a result of their break-up and Zach takes the TARDIS back home to Tatooine. Then in book 4, Lila attempts to battle Mordo or Thanos but gets captured, and Thanos will only give her freedom if Zach trades the TARDIS for her.
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