I can definitely see why the Gallery mods would never let those pass. xD
This is fantastic! I feel like I'm reading something that was published, professional editors and all! The action plays out vividly, and I like the dialogue!
OvO
Yeah, I'd love to see what they'd say if I tried. xD
Ohh, thank you! Wow, really? Thanks, I am so glad you like it, because you're writing's awesome, so that means a lot from you. ^.^
Awesome! Well, I love writing any kind of fantasy, and I recently finished my book! I’m working on querying agents right now, in the hopes of getting it published soon! I also love historical-based fantasy.
Great, this chat could always use more activity! What kind of stuff do you like to write?
Oh that's so awesome!! What's your book about?
Well I've got my Ninjago fan fiction which I'm currently working on the second book of on here. And I've got a book written that's about a knight and a ninja that needs a little more editing and a better cover ( I've got a placeholder) before it's finished. And then I have ideas for several fantasy series and additional books to my fan fiction. As well as some comic ideas.
“I can’t let her get away!” He protested. Soren still fought to free himself, though his struggling grew weaker as his pain intensified. “Not after all we’ve gone through to find them. Master Tesheik will be furious.” Talyn shook his head, “We’ll find them again, but you’re more important, we can’t have you die.” As the adrenaline and intense anger wore off, Soren’s already agonizing wounds burned with a far stronger pain. He stopped fighting as he felt himself nearing unconsciousness, much to his frustration. “Indeed,” He murmured weakly. * * *
OK, I hope that all gets through moderation alright. Oh, also, quick descriptions for the characters: Embur has violet eyes and dark brown hair, which she wears in a braid, and slightly tanned skin. I posted a picture of her a couple weeks ago. Soren Crow has snow-white hair, violet eyes and a light skin-tone. He wears black and dark gray armor, tunic, pants and tall boots. Kaike (Keyh-kay) Grimblade, Soren's mother, has long white hair, violet eyes and light skin. She dresses in a military uniform of one kind or another that I have to decide on still. Rowan Kael has amber eyes, crimson (Kai) hair and a dark brown skin-tone. He wears dark pants and a dark gray pilot's jacket of some kind. Mrrur Hrisk (nicknamed Edge) is a werecat* with cobalt blue fur, green eyes and more sass than all my other characters combined. He wears a jacket like Rowan as well as dark blue pants and a long, cloak-like bright blue scarf
*werecat is a nickname for a species of aliens from the planets Tandalire and Ateria, they are called the Aterians or the Tandairians, depending on their home-planet, but are often nicknamed werecats. They are generally about half as tall as humans and look like cats with human proportians who walk on two legs.
Ooh very cool! This is very well written! I would for sure read the rest. Does this take place in the middle of the book or the beginning?
I can definitely see why the Gallery mods would never let those pass. xD
This is fantastic! I feel like I'm reading something that was published, professional editors and all! The action plays out vividly, and I like the dialogue!
OvO
Yeah, I'd love to see what they'd say if I tried. xD
Ohh, thank you! Wow, really? Thanks, I am so glad you like it, because you're writing's awesome, so that means a lot from you. ^.^
They didn't even let me use the word bloodline if I remember correctly. XD
“I can’t let her get away!” He protested. Soren still fought to free himself, though his struggling grew weaker as his pain intensified. “Not after all we’ve gone through to find them. Master Tesheik will be furious.” Talyn shook his head, “We’ll find them again, but you’re more important, we can’t have you die.” As the adrenaline and intense anger wore off, Soren’s already agonizing wounds burned with a far stronger pain. He stopped fighting as he felt himself nearing unconsciousness, much to his frustration. “Indeed,” He murmured weakly. * * *
OK, I hope that all gets through moderation alright. Oh, also, quick descriptions for the characters: Embur has violet eyes and dark brown hair, which she wears in a braid, and slightly tanned skin. I posted a picture of her a couple weeks ago. Soren Crow has snow-white hair, violet eyes and a light skin-tone. He wears black and dark gray armor, tunic, pants and tall boots. Kaike (Keyh-kay) Grimblade, Soren's mother, has long white hair, violet eyes and light skin. She dresses in a military uniform of one kind or another that I have to decide on still. Rowan Kael has amber eyes, crimson (Kai) hair and a dark brown skin-tone. He wears dark pants and a dark gray pilot's jacket of some kind. Mrrur Hrisk (nicknamed Edge) is a werecat* with cobalt blue fur, green eyes and more sass than all my other characters combined. He wears a jacket like Rowan as well as dark blue pants and a long, cloak-like bright blue scarf
*werecat is a nickname for a species of aliens from the planets Tandalire and Ateria, they are called the Aterians or the Tandairians, depending on their home-planet, but are often nicknamed werecats. They are generally about half as tall as humans and look like cats with human proportians who walk on two legs.
Ooh very cool! This is very well written! I would for sure read the rest. Does this take place in the middle of the book or the beginning?
Thank you, thank you! ^v^ I'll tell you if I ever decide to post the full story. A little ways past the middle of the book.
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Well, I love writing any kind of fantasy, and I recently finished my book! I’m working on querying agents right now, in the hopes of getting it published soon! I also love historical-based fantasy. 
What kind of stuff do you like to write? 
