-last edited on Mar 5, 2018 7:53:10 GMT by Gnuehchcaz
Post by Gnuehchcaz on Mar 5, 2018 7:47:22 GMT
Great part, K66!! This story is coming together very nicely and I can't wait to read on! That last bit where you throw a snowball at LordTigress is pretty funny. Looks like the snow is perfect for the idea of a park.
Great part, K66!! This story is coming together very nicely and I can't wait to read on! That last bit where you throw a snowball at LordTigress is pretty funny. Looks like the snow is perfect for the idea of a park.
Thank you! That is so good to hear read from you.
I would have put more on that, but alas: I had a taste of the character limit. Actually, with that as short as it is, I can probably post what I have with the LWaP story.
"Well. Our idea is a park! Just think about it! People could have great exercise, play games, uh, have picnics!" I smile at Tigress's enthusiasm. I look off to the left at the City. I try to remember my life back at home. My mother's smile; my dad's eyes. These thing have been fading as time passes. I don't want them to. I want to suppress them in my memory forever. I give a small sigh, a frown falling on my face.
***
"Snowflakes, K66. It's snowing." My eyes go big with wonder and awe. Snow! I think. It's been so long since I have seen snow! I turn back to look at Tigress. She and Shamrock are still talking about the park. I may have imagined him giving me a sideways glance, but I can't tell because it lasts so short. I turn back at the street. The snow is starting to stick in places. A mischievous thought runs trough my head. I hurry past Sam and grab some snow where it's starting to stick. It feels cold in my hands. I quickly form it into a ball and hurl it at Tigress.
New chapter born!!
And we could throw Frisbees at each others' faces! @k66 missing home: Aw, poor thing. . . How dare you. You're gonna pay. SNOWBALL FIGHT!!!
"Well. Our idea is a park! Just think about it! People could have great exercise, play games, uh, have picnics!" I smile at Tigress's enthusiasm. I look off to the left at the City. I try to remember my life back at home. My mother's smile; my dad's eyes. These thing have been fading as time passes. I don't want them to. I want to suppress them in my memory forever. I give a small sigh, a frown falling on my face.
***
"Snowflakes, K66. It's snowing." My eyes go big with wonder and awe. Snow! I think. It's been so long since I have seen snow! I turn back to look at Tigress. She and Shamrock are still talking about the park. I may have imagined him giving me a sideways glance, but I can't tell because it lasts so short. I turn back at the street. The snow is starting to stick in places. A mischievous thought runs trough my head. I hurry past Sam and grab some snow where it's starting to stick. It feels cold in my hands. I quickly form it into a ball and hurl it at Tigress.
New chapter born!!
And we could throw Frisbees at each others' faces! @k66 missing home: Aw, poor thing. . . How dare you. You're gonna pay. SNOWBALL FIGHT!!!
Actually, it’s a continuation of the last Chapter.
That was the idea. Thankfully this world isn’t real. I meant the City.... not the LMBEs.
LordTigress looks up at me, her faced surprised at the fact the cold ball hit her arm. I laugh, looking immediately looking guilty. Snowflakes fall in my hair and on my clothes.
"Did you just? Oh it's on!" She rushes onto the sidewalk, forgetting about the conversation she was having with Shamrock. She easily finds and scoops up some snow. She forms it into a ball and hurls it at me. I shriek with laughter as the ball hits me, hurting only a little. I grab another thing of snow and hurl it at Shamrock , forgetting where I am. Tigress stops laughing and covers her mouth with her hand. I stop laughing and smiling. I don't even look at Sam8432 . Shamrock looks at me with a smirk on his face. He simply walks down the steps, grabs a thing of snow, and throws it at Sam. We all burst into laughter.
I wake up on a cold stone pavement. What happened? I wonder as I try waking up. I open my eyes and blink a few times, trying to rid my eyes of sleep. I was with.... Zach... and Rome... we were.... we were going to walk into the... the...
"The cave!" I say aloud, my head jerking up. I look around trying to get a good image of my surroundings. I can't see anything other than myself, and the stone that is in a tiny circle of light on the the floor. I look up; there is no sign of where the light source comes from. I stand up, trying to peer into the darkness that stretches all around me outside of the circle of light.
"Hello?" I call into the nothingness. My voice echos, almost I'm surrounded by a bunch of walls. I take a single step, the light moves with me, surrounding me. I try to relax and start walking in a random direction. "Zach? Rome? Anyone? Heeelllloooo!"
Great part, K66!! This story is coming together very nicely and I can't wait to read on! That last bit where you throw a snowball at LordTigress is pretty funny. Looks like the snow is perfect for the idea of a park.
Thank you! That is so good to hear read from you.
I would have put more on that, but alas: I had a taste of the character limit. Actually, with that as short as it is, I can probably post what I have with the LWaP story.
You're welcome! Yay! Looking forward to it!
Makes sense. That character limit can be quite annoying. Nice! I'll be reading LWaP as well!
I would have put more on that, but alas: I had a taste of the character limit. Actually, with that as short as it is, I can probably post what I have with the LWaP story.
You're welcome! Yay! Looking forward to it!
Makes sense. That character limit can be quite annoying. Nice! I'll be reading LWaP as well!
I posted another part today in class, but alas, we are awaiting moderation at the moment. Woohoo.
Eh. It can go either way with me. Depends on the flow of movement. I need to write a few more 1,000 words. Then I can post it.
LordTigress looks up at me, her faced surprised at the fact the cold ball hit her arm. I laugh, looking immediately looking guilty. Snowflakes fall in my hair and on my clothes.
"Did you just? Oh it's on!" She rushes onto the sidewalk, forgetting about the conversation she was having with Shamrock.
***
"Hello?" I call into the nothingness. My voice echos, almost I'm surrounded by a bunch of walls. I take a single step, the light moves with me, surrounding me. I try to relax and start walking in a random direction. "Zach? Rome? Anyone? Heeelllloooo!"
"Bun?" I jump at the voice.
For some reason I first read that as "Oh, it's a son!" That weirded me out until I read it properly.
That last bit where you throw a snowball at LordTigress is pretty funny. Looks like the snow is perfect for the idea of a park. 
That last bit where you throw a snowball at LordTigress is pretty funny. Looks like the snow is perfect for the idea of a park. 
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