Legacy of Gorbav - A Chima Roleplay Prequel

Enacase someone missed it, what your thoughts on the map, and the first battle, would you like more battles, or was it a boring pain to read through?

Map is gud, battles are a bit meh.  

Battles are fun to read, but I suggest that you show detailed accounts of some of the moves, rather than summarizing the basic parts of the battle, because it makes it more exciting and gets us readers more immersed in the scene. For example: 

"The soldiers smashed through the enemy doors with their battering ram, and attacked the villains inside the courtyard. One soldier climbed the wall and dueled some of the villains on top, only for a flaming jet to crash on that exact part of the wall!"

Rather than:

"The soldiers came through into the courtyard and battled the villains inside. Soon though, a jet crashed on the wall and destroyed the soldiers and villains fighting up there."
 
But that's just a suggestion.

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Chapter 17 - The ripples of war



*2 weeks have passed since the victory at Liver stone, and although the war was raging in Gorilla lands, the effects were weirder past the borders*


*In lion lands*

Lysandre: Wow, the que here is massive, like a mile long.


Gaulle: Yeah, this is the first time, coffee is sold in mass scale in foreign lands, outside of the eagles and bears. The government is selling massive amounts of their reserves,
to finance the war.


Lysandre: Wait..? So me buying coffee here, supports the monarchy? That’s terrible


Gaulle: what do you mean? The monarchy is the true government, its those filthy rebels, who started the war, we could have been in peace, all enjoying a better life.


Lysandre: I still feel odd by this.


*During these times, coffee had become a major drink in lion lands, they were served in coffee shops most of which were independent since the monarchists lacked connections in lion lands, ironically the sugar came from Republican sugar plantations*



*In Eagle lands*



King Elrond: This is the legendary fruit of kings, brought to us by our great friends from the republic. *He shouts to the eagles, whilst holding a pineapple*


*Eagles begin to rush to stores to buy pineapples which are considered a delicacy in eagle lands*


King Elrond: Gorbav, promised that if 10,000 pine apples are bought, across the many lands, then he will negotiate for the termination of article 3. *Gorbav promised to
terminate article 3 anyways, but this brought more sales*


*The pineapple was a reflection of eagle consciousness, it was regal and royal, smart, and unusual, much how they viewed themselves, many eagles felt a sense of superiority in intellect and wisdom over the other tribes*




*Meanwhile in bear lands*


Bismarck: This is some delicious palm oil, I would say it can replace honey as an appetizer.


Bear NPC: Yeah, I would agree with you on that one.


*Palm oil is being hoarded in the bear lands, this has launched the price up, but the bears are still paying*




*Finally in rhino lands*


Brassia: *Tastes a chocolate bar* This is incredible. It is so addictive


Reagan VI: I know, its mad, it shows that good things will come out of this war.


Brassia: The only 4 good things to come out of this war for us are: coffee, cocoa, sugar and money. Not much else will come out of this war except that.


Reagan VI: Hey, maybe this democracy thing will work out, you never know.


Brassia: Brother please, you are sounding foolish.


Ruble II: Hmm… perhaps all isn’t what it seems…


Brassia: What do you mean, dad?


Ruble II: I have met that Gorbav, fellow, he is some tough stuff, those are the people, who should be in power


Brassia: Dad… Are you a republican?


Ruble II: Save the king. That’s madness. Im a man of logic, and this gorilla knows what he is saying.


*Chocolate has exploded in the rhino lands, its loved by all rhinos, and chocolate factories are appearing all over rhino lands, they are seen as a rare delicassy, that is highly
addictive*

Chapter - 18 Divided Military staff


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*As if a civil war, military failure, mass mutiny and losing half of their generals wasn't enough the war bureau of the Gorilla Kingdom, was plagued by more bad luck*

*King Gortphiik enters the room, all generals are present*

King Gortphiik: G'day gents.

All generals: Hello, your majesty.

King Gortphiik: Now we have had some... well... rather unfortunate... events... recently... uh. Sato... how do I put this...

Genghis Khan: How about I say it for you

King Gortphiik: Yes, how about you do.

*Khan stares Sato directly in the eyes*

Genghis Khan: General, we have a national tragedy

Sato: yes, I am aware of the civil war

Genghis Khan: No, that's bad. But the tragedy here, is that someone as militarily incompetent as you, is serving as a general. Say what you will about Getain and his loyalty, atleast he was a good tactician.

Sato: *Looks puzzled*

Genghis Khan: Speaking of Getain, we have his commanders. *Shifts his eyes to General Krell* General Krell.

Gong Krell: Yes, Khan?

Genghis Khan: Why have you failed to defeat, the roaming regiments of Getains army, the fact that there are partisans that are just walking around the kingdom, occupying villages and farms, that haven't been crushed yet, is beyond my reasoning,

Gong Krell: Well Khan, we took back most of the farms,

Genghis Khan: Whilst suffering major casualties, whilst not a single partisan commander has been killed or arrested. Your utter failure, is a dissapoitment.

King Gortphiik: Khaaan!!!

*Khan stops talking*

King Gortphiik: Although, you are minister of war, taking over from Gorki that does not give you the privilege to insult the other generals.

Genghis Khan: *Looks rather angry*

King Gortphiik: We need to consider possible war plans, for knocking them out of the war, the farmers are bickering, we lowered their wages, to pay for this war/

Genghis Khan: Wait.. What!?

King Gortphiik: All have to make some sacrifices

Genghis Khan: But food prices are rocketing upwards. What if they revolt?

Sato: We will just ensure that they don't! I propose doing like Gorki, and striking their capital! They will be too demoralized to fight!

Gong Krell: Or they will find another HQ. I propose that we put some trust, we have been centralizing too much, we should let soldiers take initiative, and have them also fight partisan campaigns, you have to fight Fire with Fire!

Genghis Khan: Hmm... *after a long pause* I was recently studying a concept, that's rather new to me, and may work, its called the broken windows idea.

King Gortphiik: And how does it work?

Genghis Khan: Every attack they make, we fight back, we clamp down, and we crush it hard. When one window is broken, more will be broken later. Every time we fully clamp down and eradicate the insurgance, it will weaken their power. 

King Gortphiik: That's an intresting concept

*Meanwhile all this time airforce commander, General Gorring, was carefully listening to all of this.

King Gortphiik: Gorring, what is your plan? Or do you agree with one of the generals?

Gorring: No.

King Gortphiik: Excuse me?

Gorring: I disagree with all.

King Gortphiik: Well, do you have a solution?

Gorring: I do indeed! My solution is simple, we focus on the airforce...

Sato: Here, we go again.

Gorring: We use the airforce, to knock out their farms, a war isn't won by the strongest army, or the most patriotic, or nationalistic, its won by those, with the greater economy, if we knock out what's holding them up, they will crumble, I propose an end, to all other expenditures, but food for the people, and metals for the airforce, all else is not needed! (Like in many things Gorring would turn out correct, but none of the others listened)

King Gortphiik: They would just, steal, what they lack, or their allies, would give them greater, and most likely, they would spin it in some propagandist way, anyways I shall consider all your proposals, the meeting is concluded.

Chapter 20 - Republican recognition

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*The eagle leader King Elrond, arrives at the republican capital*

Gorbav: Greetings, your majesty.

King Elrond: Greetings Mr. President.

Gorbav: Its an honour for you to be our first diplomatic visitor.

King Elrond: Yes, likewise.

Gorbav: Please enter. *Leads him to the governor house*

*They enter Gorbav's main room*

Gorbav: Tea?

King Elrond: Yes, please

*Gorbav pours in the tea*

King Elrond: Bring me the treaty!

King's advisor: *Brings the treaty*

King Elrond: This 3rd treaty is really limiting us, whilst we recognise you.

Gorbav: I see. *Crosses out all of the 3rd treaty, then signs at the bottom*

King Elrond: *Signs also*

Gorbav: *Shakes hands with King Elrond*

*The cameras and news reporters, record this historic meeting*

King Elrond: Also, I have this agreement for you, we, will send you, massive numbers of blasters, and huge amounts of Eagle and Leon pounds, to help you develop your nation.

Gorbav: Ill gladly accept that, *Signs new treaty*

King Elrond: *Signs new treaty*

*Chi also arrives on the same day, allowing the republican army, to continue fighting the war*