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Post by The J on Oct 28, 2017 1:06:14 GMT
Thanks, did you see the first post on the page, will you write, Razsom's response to the civil war? I feel like i would Taint Torah’s character if i were to ever play as him! Rawzome is an official LEGO character, so neither of you made him. Also, you briefly wrote Rawlin in the RP, remember?
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 28, 2017 7:12:14 GMT
Chapter - 14 The Rock (Also sorry I didn't colour the previous post) The J TheFirstDecade batonmaster500*Che Gurrira, and his 15 men platoon, decided to team up with 9 other platoons, forming an army battalion, 7 of the platoons they teamed up with were state trooper platoons like theirs, 2 were farmers, and 1 platoon of hard core female socialist* *The troops began to move up North of the North Delta region, walking through the forest besides the mountain on the western border* Che Gurrira: *radios platoon captains* Our spies, have confronted, that a large battalion is headed, our way, I suggest we spread out as far as possible, to cover more land, and if we encounter retreat, and notify the rest. FPC-1 (Farmer Platoon Captain)- Roger That! *The other captains also voice their support* *The large battalion, walking together, splits up into 10 groups* Che Gurrira: Lets get a move on, boys! *They begin to go further up a head* *After an hour of rather speedy walking they, enter a small open circle, with a large rock in the middle, they stop* Random soldier: what is this, if you don't mind me asking? Captain? Che Gurrira: I'm not very familiar with this... Rico: I know what this is, my cousin is from around here, I remember going here Random soldier: Whatever it is, it gives me the creeps. Why would someone move a rock to the middle of the forest then clear the area around it, and put these stone tiles. Che Gurrira: Lieutenant, the grass here was cut recently theres a village nearby. Rico: I know its just West, but this rock, its of holy importance to the tribe, and the people of here. Random soldier: What do you mean, Lieutenant? Rico: This rock is the infamous Rock Of Gilgamesh. Che Gurrira: I don't believe it, theres no way. Random soldier: But sir, what is the rock of Gilgamesh. Rico: Many hundreads of years ago, there was a king named Gilgamesh, he was the King of the lands, and he was said to be more than 7 feet tall, and full of muscle, they say he was so strong, he was able to split rivers in too, and break rhino walls, with 1 fist. He was once challenged to move a rock that was said to be immovable a raven merchant told him, if you can move this rock, without putting it down, from the desert through the jungle to within 2 miles of the forest mountain, then I will give you all my treasure. That's the day that the ravens went broke. Random soldier: Wow! That's amazing. Che Gurrira: That seems like a great story. Rico: Perhaps its a sign for our good luck. *Gets on his knees and prays to the rock* *The other soldiers follow* *Che Gurrira does the same, mostly to keep morale high* Rico: *Gets up* I suggest we go further. *The rest get up* Che Gurrira: *Recieves message* WPC: This is Women Platoon, we believe to have spotted them, they are about a mile away from us at the base of the mountain, coordinates are (coords here) Che Gurrira: Lets go, boys.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2017 15:38:29 GMT
I feel like i would Taint Torah’s character if i were to ever play as him! Rawzome is an official LEGO character, so neither of you made him. Also, you briefly wrote Rawlin in the RP, remember? No, I don’t.
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Post by The J on Oct 28, 2017 18:22:51 GMT
Rawzome is an official LEGO character, so neither of you made him. Also, you briefly wrote Rawlin in the RP, remember? No, I don’t. It was you who had Rawlin shoot the eagle leader Eeran. Shortly afterward, I played as Rawlin for 3 posts for the final battle between him and Bliston.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2017 21:21:26 GMT
No, I don’t. It was you who had Rawlin shoot the eagle leader Eeran. Shortly afterward, I played as Rawlin for 3 posts for the final battle between him and Bliston. Ooooh, okay then, i forgot.
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 29, 2017 7:32:29 GMT
Chapter - 15 The First Major battle of the war The J batonmaster500 TheFirstDecade*Its been exactly 11 days since the start of the war*
*After getting the transmission from the WPC, about the enemy battalion Che Gurrira and the 1st SP (State "trooper" Platoon) rushed to the action*
Che Gurrira: What is the plan? Also I suspect arrival in about 40 minutes to an hour and 20.
WPC: Well as of now, we have headed back, we have taken up positions at the side of the mountain, whilst 2nd and 3rd SP, are in the small town of Liverstone.
Che Gurrira: Do you have any idea, on what to do?
WPC: Well yeah, the 4th and 5th SP, will be opposite the mountain hiding out in the tree branches of the forest for a sneak attack, you will round them up from behind,
Che Gurrira: What about the farmer platoons, and the 6th SP.
WPC: They will arrive last, and by that time a fire fight would have started and possibly ended, it would be best, if they were used as round up
Che Gurrira: I hope your right about this, Ghana
WPC: I hope this will work to.
*After a long while of running the exhausted 1st State Platoon arrives on the battle field, they see a large battalion of about 105 troops, heading forwards in an orderly formation, in the front is the recently promoted General Sato, a replacement general for Getain, in the middle are the tallest gorillas*
WPC: *Quitely* 4th and 5th on your marks you will fire with me, ready, set, Fire!
*Chi blasts fling from both directions, up north from the mountain as well as from the forest**The enemy battalion is at first caught off guard* Sato: Initiate the great wall defence! *Through the blasts and fire, the enemy quickly forms a wide, tight circle, (the circle is wide but the people stand tighly together) In the middle are the tallest gorillas* Sato: Fire! *The rapid shot of chi blasts comes from the circle shooting in all directions, the tall gorillas shoot up into the mountains, since they can see the WP, better* *The 2nd and 3rd platoon, rush up from the village and begin firing*
Che Gurrira: Go now! *Che Gurrira's forces rush up from behind, and begin to shoot at the circle, however they are exposed**Whenever a gorilla in the circle gets hit, the other gorillas form a smaller circle, filling in the gaps* 4th SPC: Farmer platoons, we are being overwhelmed, we lack the numbers advantage, we need your forces here as soon as possible.
1st FPC: We are running as fast as possible!
2nd SPC *One of the 2 in the village*: We need to hold out for as long as possible.
5th SPC *One of the 2 in the forest*: We need to retreat!
Rico: We are too exposed retreat!
*Che Gurrira hastily follows*
2nd SPC: Hide behind the houses!General Sato: Do not stop firing! Do not chase them! 5th SPC: My men retreat! *He attempts to retreat by jumping down with his men, but his platoon is shot down*
3rd SPC: Run! Run! Whilst we still can! Abandon the town!
WPC: Keep shooting!General Sato: They are fleeing! The Back front has fled! U-formation! *The battalion turns into a U-formation, allowing them to shoot more on the sides, giving them a superior advantage* 4th SPC: Stop hiring and hide! Hide! Deeper into the forest!
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 29, 2017 7:34:11 GMT
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 29, 2017 8:24:41 GMT
Noo... Just finished Chapter 16 and it got deleted! Gah, why is there no autosave. Infuriating.
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 29, 2017 15:15:14 GMT
Chapter - 16 - Miracle of Gilgamesh The J TheFirstDecade *with the 1st and 3rd State Platoons, fleeing, the 5th being shot down, the 4th retreating, only the 2nd and Women’s platoon are left*
General Sato: Face right angle towards Liverstone. *The troops form a right angle facing the mountain, and the village, and begin to non-stop shoot* 2nd SPC: In 20 minutes there will be no village or villagers here.
WPC: Yeah, this is bad, our only hope is that the farmers arrive soon. How many casualties have you sustained. I have 5
*State trooper gets shot*
2nd SPC: well now its 7 down.
*And then after what seemed like ages, a miracle happened, the farmer platoons arrived, taking the positions previously held by the 4th and 5th platoon*
1st FPC: Fire! Non-stop!
4th SPC: What took you so long. *The 4th Platoon returns and begins shooting with the farmers at the exposed flank of the royalists*
2nd FPC: Imagine running miles to get to here and then immdeitaely entering action. General Sato: Reform U-position towards Liverstone *The enemy do as they are told* 2nd SPC: Where is the 6th and 7th Platoon?
1st FPC: They are on their way for round up
WPC: I have bad news
2nd FPC: Say it!
WPC: It appears royalist state guard patrols are coming towards me.
4th SPC: Just as it seemed betterRSPC (royal state patrol captain): *calls Sato* General Sato: I am in a battle. RSPC: There are troops behind you, im clearing away on the mountains. General Sato: Wonderful! Troops U position towards forest *The troops do as they are told* 6th SPC: They’ve spotted us.
WPC: Run! Run towards the village.*4 jeeps pull up with the RSP, they are all armed with chi machine guns, they look down and begin to fire at the battalion* General Sato: What the? Flee! Flee! All troops flee! *some troops flee towards the village and surrender, most towards the forest, where Che Gurrira the 7th SPC, and the other forces capture and arrest most of them, and some went back dodging the 6th State Platoon* *Of the 105 Royalist soldiers, only 46 survived and of those only 7 succesfully escaped* *Of the 150 republican troops, only 72 survived* *The republicans re arm and wait at the open field*
*The jeeps pull down, and the captain jumps out*
Che Gurrira: Why did you save us?
RSPC: I feel for your cause, for I am also one of you Che Gurrira.
Che Gurrira: Who are you, oh masked one?
RSPC: *Takes off mask*
Rico: No way!
RSPC: I am Garistotle II Govenor of Athenia. Pleasure to be at your service.
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 29, 2017 15:24:55 GMT
The current positions, of the republican and royalist positions 11 days into the war, the weird disconnected part is Athenia, where Garistotle II is governor.
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 29, 2017 17:36:39 GMT
The current positions, of the republican and royalist positions 11 days into the war, the weird disconnected part is Athenia, where Garistotle II is governor. Oh yeah the black lines in the west, those are the original borders what after the black lines is what they conquered.
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 29, 2017 17:40:05 GMT
Wut, batonmaster500's name just dissaperead, did you see both 2 chapters?
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Post by batonmaster500 on Oct 29, 2017 20:47:42 GMT
Wut, batonmaster500 's name just dissaperead, did you see both 2 chapters? OOC: I'm confused about that too. It says i was tagged there but it's not there.
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 30, 2017 14:39:03 GMT
Wut, batonmaster500 's name just dissaperead, did you see both 2 chapters? OOC: I'm confused about that too. It says i was tagged there but it's not there. OOC: Yeah I tagged you twice
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 30, 2017 14:40:47 GMT
I wont be posting any new chapters, although I am worried not anyone has caught up, if you haven't I suggest reading the new chapters, they have a fairly large impact, on the story, also if you have any ideas, I would love to hear them, please post them, to me in jammers, I would love to hear your opinions aswell as ideas.
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