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ninjagofanmam

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Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Nov 7, 2017 5:24:08 GMT

Post by ninjagofanmam on Nov 7, 2017 5:24:08 GMT

Nov 4, 2017 21:27:07 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja
Chapter 7

Nice!

🦎🎨📚

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ninjagozanefan14

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Dec 3, 2017 21:50:46 GMT

Post by ninjagozanefan14 on Dec 3, 2017 21:50:46 GMT

Nov 5, 2017 16:06:45 GMT LordTigress said:

Nov 4, 2017 21:27:07 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

* * *

"Um, dad, I was going to tell you-" Cole started to say, looking away.

"-What on earth happened?" Lou asked, petting the dent.

"I, uh… Wasn't being careful?" Cole explained sheepishly, a bit ashamed. "I was kind of… Being stupid."

COLE.

(For some reason, ninjagozanefan14, I really like this part. Maybe it's because of the way you portrayed the relationship between Cole and his dad in a light, teasing moment that many sons and fathers have probably shared, and it somehow made your story more vivid. I'm not quite sure why I like this part of the story so much, but all I can say is well done!

)

(Thank you!!!

Glad you like it! ^_^)

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ninjagozanefan14

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Dec 3, 2017 21:51:57 GMT

Post by ninjagozanefan14 on Dec 3, 2017 21:51:57 GMT

Nov 5, 2017 12:52:52 GMT Jonmbost said:

Nov 4, 2017 21:27:07 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja
Chapter 7

"Not a scratch do you hear me!?" Lou proclaimed as Cole started the car and backed it up.

Turning up the radio, Cole nodded and drove away.

He glanced at the rearview window showing him his house sadly but then focused on the road. "Don't worry guys, I'm on my way."

Not a scratch, Cole, not a scratch.

I'm sure it definitely won't get scratched ():)

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ninjagozanefan14

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Dec 3, 2017 21:52:53 GMT

Post by ninjagozanefan14 on Dec 3, 2017 21:52:53 GMT

Nov 5, 2017 12:51:55 GMT Jonmbost said:

Nov 4, 2017 21:18:10 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

I'm sure it's fineeeee! ^^'

It wasn't.

*cough* Welp

It could have been worse though!

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ninjagozanefan14

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Dec 3, 2017 21:56:21 GMT

Post by ninjagozanefan14 on Dec 3, 2017 21:56:21 GMT

I'll write the next chapter soon! However a Ninjago holiday story I'm writing will be a bit more of a priority for me right now, I should be posting the first chapters of that pretty soon!!

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ninjagozanefan14

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Dec 3, 2017 21:56:38 GMT

Post by ninjagozanefan14 on Dec 3, 2017 21:56:38 GMT

Nov 7, 2017 5:24:08 GMT ninjagofanmam said:

Nov 4, 2017 21:27:07 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja
Chapter 7

Nice!

Thanks!

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Jonmbost

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Dec 5, 2017 22:07:29 GMT

Post by Jonmbost on Dec 5, 2017 22:07:29 GMT

Dec 3, 2017 21:51:57 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

Nov 5, 2017 12:52:52 GMT Jonmbost said:

Not a scratch, Cole, not a scratch.

I'm sure it definitely won't get scratched ():)

Not. A. Scratch.

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Jonmbost

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Dec 5, 2017 22:10:37 GMT

Post by Jonmbost on Dec 5, 2017 22:10:37 GMT

Dec 3, 2017 21:52:53 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

Nov 5, 2017 12:51:55 GMT Jonmbost said:

It wasn't.

*cough* Welp

It could have been worse though!

It was pretty bad.

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Jonmbost

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Dec 5, 2017 22:11:01 GMT

Post by Jonmbost on Dec 5, 2017 22:11:01 GMT

Dec 3, 2017 21:56:21 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

I'll write the next chapter soon! However a Ninjago holiday story I'm writing will be a bit more of a priority for me right now, I should be posting the first chapters of that pretty soon!!

Ooh! Sounds exciting!

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ninjagozanefan14

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Jan 3, 2018 0:58:41 GMT

Post by ninjagozanefan14 on Jan 3, 2018 0:58:41 GMT

Dec 5, 2017 22:10:37 GMT Jonmbost said:

Dec 3, 2017 21:52:53 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

*cough* Welp

It could have been worse though!

It was pretty bad.

Pretty bad, yes, of course. But it still could have been worse!

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ninjagozanefan14

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Jan 3, 2018 0:59:13 GMT

Post by ninjagozanefan14 on Jan 3, 2018 0:59:13 GMT

Dec 5, 2017 22:11:01 GMT Jonmbost said:

Dec 3, 2017 21:56:21 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

I'll write the next chapter soon! However a Ninjago holiday story I'm writing will be a bit more of a priority for me right now, I should be posting the first chapters of that pretty soon!!

Ooh! Sounds exciting!

I've posted those chapters! ^_^

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Jonmbost

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Jan 3, 2018 1:17:45 GMT

Post by Jonmbost on Jan 3, 2018 1:17:45 GMT

Jan 3, 2018 0:58:41 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

Dec 5, 2017 22:10:37 GMT Jonmbost said:

It was pretty bad.

Pretty bad, yes, of course. But it still could have been worse!

Yes, it could have.

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Jonmbost

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Re: Human & Serpentine ~ The Story of Cole and The Time Ninja

Jan 3, 2018 1:18:08 GMT

Post by Jonmbost on Jan 3, 2018 1:18:08 GMT

Jan 3, 2018 0:59:13 GMT ninjagozanefan14 said:

Dec 5, 2017 22:11:01 GMT Jonmbost said:

Ooh! Sounds exciting!

I've posted those chapters! ^_^

Cool! I'll go check it out!

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