Second, it is good grammar to start a new paragraph whenever someone starts talking.
Third, I liked the concepts you adopted from TDK, but you only used it for the flashbacks. That Two-Face was serious, deadly, and awesome. But you dropped all of that in modern-time. Also, why would he want all that money when he just wanted revenge on the Joker?
Fourth, I wanted to see Cesar Romero talk more. As well as how Two-Face captured him.
Fifth, That ending was, as you said, anti-climactic. I do not forgive you.
Sixth, I enjoyed all the aspects and references you adopted from the TV show. I watch it often, and I can confirm there is no Two-Face in that series. Is that what inspired you to write this? Also, I liked the part where Batman and Robin connected the miles-apart dots and solved the mystery. Yours was a bit of a stretch, but then again, they always are.
Seventh, you must do a crossover with the 1940's Superman.
1. Oh no.
2. WELL I’M SORRY!
3. Time and injuries and a bunch of half-useless cronies made him go a bit mental. To fund his activities.
4. May be revealed with time.
5. Sorry.
6. I once heard of a plan to introduce Two-Face with a similar origin, but it was scrapped due to the whole child-friendly thing. I wanted to see what that might be like.
Second, it is good grammar to start a new paragraph whenever someone starts talking.
Third, I liked the concepts you adopted from TDK, but you only used it for the flashbacks. That Two-Face was serious, deadly, and awesome. But you dropped all of that in modern-time. Also, why would he want all that money when he just wanted revenge on the Joker?
Fourth, I wanted to see Cesar Romero talk more. As well as how Two-Face captured him.
Fifth, That ending was, as you said, anti-climactic. I do not forgive you.
Sixth, I enjoyed all the aspects and references you adopted from the TV show. I watch it often, and I can confirm there is no Two-Face in that series. Is that what inspired you to write this? Also, I liked the part where Batman and Robin connected the miles-apart dots and solved the mystery. Yours was a bit of a stretch, but then again, they always are.
Seventh, you must do a crossover with the 1940's Superman.
1. Oh no.
2. WELL I’M SORRY!
3. Time and injuries and a bunch of half-useless cronies made him go a bit mental. To fund his activities.
4. May be revealed with time.
5. Sorry.
6. I once heard of a plan to introduce Two-Face with a similar origin, but it was scrapped due to the whole child-friendly thing. I wanted to see what that might be like.
