Post by auroramay on Dec 29, 2019 4:05:28 GMT
(Before I begin, let me just say, this is a rewrite of a story I did on the LMB like 3-4 years ago---one that lasted 2 chapters---, so bear with me. Also, I have no idea what I'm doing, so any suggestions/feedback is appreciated! Here is the prologue, to test the waters of your guys' minds 
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It is a time of crisis in the Galactic Republic. Political fire rises between the Separatists and the Republic. Zam Wessel, a Clawdite changeling bounty hunter in league with the infamous Jango Fett, is hired to assassinate the senator of Naboo, Padme Amidala. Meanwhile, Jurek and Urana, Wessel’s adopted children, are left behind on the soon to be war-torn planet of Ryloth, where they are to be raised by peace-loving Twi’leks…
Prologue:
“Here, take these.”
Zam looked at the cylinder in Jango’s hands and took it, flipping it in her hands.
Kouhuns… great.
She turned to walk back to her speeder.
“Be careful,” Jango added, making her turn back around. “They're very poisonous... Zam, there can be no mistakes this time.”
She pulled her mask back over her face and turned back to her speeder. No mistakes….
All she needed was to kill this one fancy senator lady, and she was done. Done with the assassinations. Done with the money. She had never thought she would be done with the money… not until she had found them.
Jurek and Urana, the two abandoned Clawdite infants she had found during her last solo job. Jango would understand why she would leave her job. He had a son after all.
No mistakes…, she repeated in her head.
Twenty-four hours later, the two Clawdite infants she had entrusted in the care of some Twi’lek farmers were orphans for the second time of their very short lives.
)It is a time of crisis in the Galactic Republic. Political fire rises between the Separatists and the Republic. Zam Wessel, a Clawdite changeling bounty hunter in league with the infamous Jango Fett, is hired to assassinate the senator of Naboo, Padme Amidala. Meanwhile, Jurek and Urana, Wessel’s adopted children, are left behind on the soon to be war-torn planet of Ryloth, where they are to be raised by peace-loving Twi’leks…
Prologue:
“Here, take these.”
Zam looked at the cylinder in Jango’s hands and took it, flipping it in her hands.
Kouhuns… great.
She turned to walk back to her speeder.
“Be careful,” Jango added, making her turn back around. “They're very poisonous... Zam, there can be no mistakes this time.”
She pulled her mask back over her face and turned back to her speeder. No mistakes….
All she needed was to kill this one fancy senator lady, and she was done. Done with the assassinations. Done with the money. She had never thought she would be done with the money… not until she had found them.
Jurek and Urana, the two abandoned Clawdite infants she had found during her last solo job. Jango would understand why she would leave her job. He had a son after all.
No mistakes…, she repeated in her head.
Twenty-four hours later, the two Clawdite infants she had entrusted in the care of some Twi’lek farmers were orphans for the second time of their very short lives.
