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Post by Deleted on Mar 11, 2018 18:41:03 GMT
If you want to read this story read this first, this. Yeah so the story begins. Chapter 1: Saving the boards and trying not to die. I saw the erasing of LegoMyEggo before my own eyes. The darkness spread. I ran and ran. I focused on Mod Tower. The darkness would delete me too. I looked on the top floor of the tower. I saw a giant red button. I focused harder snd noticed it said delete. An evil, slender man, long and thin, leaned on it. He seemed to pride on the deleting. He grinned. Keplers , astrokid12 and their guard, MockingbirdInc ran towards the land called Proboards. They hoped to start anew. The LMBE. We were almost consisted, by the darkness of being deleted. Then I saw LegoMyEggo was running after us too. Then he was snagged in a trap, and a laser beam took him to Mod Tower. The others who would create a safe haven had to be saved. I yelled to Shamrock to summon his helicopter. "It's empty on fuel!" He exclaimed. "But fine." The others got in. "How do we move it?" asked Ninjazane7474 . "You run that way. Leave and don't go anywhere yet. If the LMBE doesn't work one of us needs to survive. You need to renew the boards! Do it for me." I said encouragingly. "You make it sound like you're not coming." Said Sham with melancholy. I ignored the question, thinking it would be better. I turned to ninjazane. "I only have enough energy to send you guys away." I used one third of my energy to send ninjazane away. I hoped he'd be safe. "How did you?" Asked Keplers. "I used my Guru magic. I use it for emergencies." I grinned. "Ready to help the users?" "Yes." Astro said formally. "If you need to stay here for the boards to live. So be it. And thank you, Guru. Thank you." "You're welcome." And with that I used my energy to send them all off in the helicopter. I tapped into my energy. I had barely managed a weak smile. I was about to collapse and get swallowed by the darkness. Then, the thin, small man. Pulled me into mod tower. "We need to talk. You need survival? I need you to make sure users don't go to the LMBE. I will pay you. I need you too...." My vision went black. It sounded like I was underwater. I got nausea. And I collapsed. |
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I woke up with fuzzy vision. Once it cleared, I saw I was a top Mod Tower. The mods were trapped, as was I. That fellow who took me in, he was in front of me.
"You are under my control! Do what I say!" The scrawny man leaned in angrily.
"Who are you, kid?"
"Don't call me kid, cowboy! I'm MadPurpleKangaroo! Founder of Lego Life."
"That stupid thing?"
"Not stupid." He hissed. "I have everyone I need. All the mods! They won't speak to Lego fans. Just moderate the posts in their new office."
"First. This is the same place they were when they moderated. Second. I'm not a mod."
"Guru stop." WhiteAlligator warned. "He's evil scum. He will destroy anyone who gets in his way. We are going to be trapped. In a building. Right next to that."
WA pointed to a lot of cranes and helicopters surrounding something and lowering it onto the beams. I didn't need to ask what it was.
Lego Life had arrived.
"And now. Since you helped with the "LMBE". I will get my revenge! Prepare to lose your friend."
He pushed a button and the laser beam with LegoMyEggo arrived.
"MPK stop!" Cicada pleased.
"No. I will delete one of these 'heroes'. Now. Who's first?"
"You are mad!" Growled CatWizard."
"Oh I am mad. MadPurpleKangaroo in fact." MPK said.
LegoMyEggo was dropped into the big black void of darkness. He had been deleted.
We sobbed.
"Boo Who!" Said MPK, a hint of delight in his voice. "Get a grip moderators. Now go!"
They were taken to a small miserable building next to Lego Life. No exits in the building. The mods would never leave.
"And you, Guru! I will have you delete anyone who tries to take people to LMBE."
He handed me an assortment of deleting weapons that could be stored behind my back.
"You will delete users in exchange for your life. And everyone and everything you need. And I will have someone help you."
The doors opened. A tall man in a button up shirt and gray hair walked in.
"I'm here to help you delete users. Keeping an eye on you. Call me Ezekiel."
"You're no longer Ezekiel! You're FluffyDangerLizard." Said MPK.
Ezekiel winced when he heard that name.
"I'm Ezekiel end of story!" He snapped back.
"Come on, Guru. We have hunting to do."
We all went to Lego Life. MPK went to his own corner of Lego Life.
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We walked around Lego Life when we sought our first target. A user spreading the word.
"I'll corner that user, and you delete that person." Ezekiel whispered. "You wait in that house. The house where you're gonna live kid. Ready?"
"Definitely."
Ezekiel chased this user and I ran to the house waiting inside at the door.
The user ran and ran, he saw the door open of thr house and ran in, where I waited with my deleting gun. Then I realized it wasn't a "he", it was a she!
@maggie85 was who I had to delete. She looked frightened. My hands shook.
"Run." I said softly. "Don't come back."
"The users need to learn of LMBE."
"Gathered!" I pleaded, "I don't want to delete you, but I have to."
Just as she was leaving, another voice said,
"Where ya going?" Ezekiel stood at the door, ready to delete Maggie. "Hands up!"
Maggie sweated waitinng, scared for Ezekiel to delete her. A deleting gun flew out the window. Ezekiel's gun.
"You're the newbie you delete her."
Maggie turned pale and faced me. I lowered my gun.
"Ezekiel. Why?"
"MPK wants us to do it. We have to."
An expression washed over me: shock. Ezekiel didn't want this even more than I did.
"You're scared." I said.
"Get on with it!" His voice cracked. I realized Maggie was his friend too. But if we didn't delete her. MPK would delete us.
"Don't worry. MPK won't be deleting us today, but that will mean...."
His eyes widened with horror.
"No. No! No. Maybe if we escape Lego Life. Why do we have to do this?"
"Because it's our only choice my friend."
"Can't we erase MPK, instead?"
"Not today. We are not ready. We have to gain his trust. But for now."
I pointed my deleting gun at Maggie, ready to pull the trigger.
"I'm sorry @maggie85. I'll never forget you. I cocked it, aimed, and spoke.
"I'm sorry. But we would be deleted."
I pulled the trigger. A darkness shot out. It was deleting Maggie. She was swallowed by the darkness. When the darkness was gone, she was too.
"No." I cried. Ezekiel's knees buckled.
"Come on. We need a word with MPK, Ezekiel."
We reloaded and stocked up on deleting weapons.
"Is it this sad each time? Even if you don't know them?"
Ezekiel's eyes answered for him. "I don't want to have to do this for MPK!" I complained.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 14, 2018 18:01:24 GMT
Who wants more?!  What have you guys thought on my story? |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 16, 2018 2:51:22 GMT
''Is every deleting this hard?" I asked Ezekiel.
He didn't say anything. But his eyes spoke like canaries.
"Let's go talk to our boss, Ezekiel. I think it's time HE goes down. Stock up on weapons!"
We did so.
As we walked along Ezekiel gritted his teeth every time he saw a sign of MPK. He was disgusted with MPK, as was I.
"Maggie was my friend." He said as if someone hsd opened his throat. It had been the first time he spoke since the Maggie incident.
"What?" I asked
"She saved me from MPK several times. And now I deleted her!"
"She was my friend too, Ezekiel." I tried to reassure him.
When we got to where MPK and the other evil staff were, it was dark. The guards were heavily armed. They almost mistaked us for an enemy. But they let us in. The secretary was at her desk. She seemed to be able to read our minds.
"We-" Ezekiel started.
"Seventeenth floor, room A29."
When we got up there we meddled during the meeting pressing our ear on the door.
When we overhead the plan we were frightened. We heard it muffled. But three words were clear:
Original. Mods. Deleted.
"We have to save them." I whispered.
"What was that noise?" MPK asked.
We hid behind a potted tree.
MPK came out. "Security!" He yelled.
A robot with a ban hammer came in.
"Find the.intruder. Ban the intruder. So he will go to Mod Tower dungeon. He'll be tried. Then deleted." He smiled snd went back in.
I instinctively shot it with my deleting gun. The darkness was absorbed as if the bot were a sponge.
"They have armor that captures the blast of deleting. The next thing they touch will be deleted." Ezekiel warned.
"Maybe he can give MPK a high five." I said. We laughed and headed downstairs. The robot swung his arm towards us but we moved back. The robot's arm whiplashed at him and he got deleted. I got a stick and lit it with fire.
"Do you know how to get to Mod Tower?" I asked.
"Yes. To the garage."
I picked a Ram Longhorn. But MPK then stepped into view. With a deleting gun.
"Any last words?'
"Look out for the light."
I got some of the garage oil and bathed him in it. I threw the fire at him, then exploded back.
We raced off in the truck towards Mod Tower.
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Post by TheNewIceNinja on Mar 17, 2018 20:41:39 GMT
Apparently, I was tagged in a chapter, but I do not know where I'm tagged. BTW, cool story. I like the whole thing so far and hope to see more.
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Post by ninjalegoboy9389 on Mar 17, 2018 21:32:00 GMT
Why was I tagged?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 17, 2018 21:54:09 GMT
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Post by gurnechnaz on Mar 17, 2018 22:29:46 GMT
I think it’s good. I read it after Stephanie featured it.
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Post by TheNewIceNinja on Mar 18, 2018 1:37:17 GMT
I like it. Please continue, the story is good. Also, could you maybe add me? That'd be cool. Not that you have to, it's your choice. I will still follow this story in the future either way. But yeah, this story is definitely worth continuing. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2018 1:41:59 GMT
It's a good story, that I'll definitely continue reading (if I have time). Almost makes me want to write an LMB story again. Been around 2 years since I wrote my last one... |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2018 2:34:24 GMT
I think it’s good. I read it after Stephanie featured it. Thanks. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2018 3:06:29 GMT
Ban bots zipped all around. Ezekiel didn't seem to know where he was going.
"Do you have a GPS?" He asked.
"You don't know where you're going? Of course not you have a goatee and some slick black hair! They can find you anywhere! It's like you have a...."
"What?"
"I have a tracking chip. If I put it in my gun. And the banbots..."
"Ban YOU!"
"Fine. But you'll give me that awesome gun."
He sighed, "Deal." He said reluctantly.
I jumped out of the truck, my gun in its holster with the chip.
"Hey ugly robot!" I got its attention. It came and swung its ban hammer.
"BAN!"
How to describe being banned? Imagine not having an arm. Not having anything. All you can see is black. I felt that. Then I woke.
"Where?"
"Mod tower." A familiar voice said. That person pulled me out of a prison. "The dungeon is where those banned are kept. Then they face trial. If they pass, they go back. Lose? They're deleted."
It was Cicada. She went and pulled out an unconscious Ezekiel. As soon as he left, he woke. I explained everything to Cicada.
"Yeah. The bots found me and banned me. You're still innocent to MPK. If he sees me. He deletes me, kid. After...." His eyesight wandered off. "After torture."
"I'll admit it was me. Don't worry."
Ezekiel studied me like I was something great. "You're our last hope, son. If MPK deletes me, don't sorry."
Cicada nodded. "I'm thinking it's time you went to the mod chamber. Where we moderate. Come on."
We followed Cicada through a network of halls snd stairs. Each time a decision had to be made, she hesitated. We reached a door stenciled, "Moderators".
"In we go." Cicada said sadly.
Cicada looked like she walked through a war site. Ezekiel looked like he swallowed peanut butter.
It was the most miserable place in the world.
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Post by RomeNZ on Mar 18, 2018 4:34:21 GMT
Haven't read it sorry, but I've modded a couple o' chapters and it looks good. Keep up the good work! ![[y]](http://storage.proboards.com/6672327/images/WYWPH2VRo26pOFDid7QZ.png)
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