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Post by Essa Kryze on Jun 26, 2018 0:23:58 GMT
We're are the proverbially blind leading the blind here. All our master lore…..ers, left with the RP. So with no Kobalters we pretty much have the books and internet to rely on. XD
It is very workable. I think some of the main elements will remain with only a few revamping/tweaks. At least that's what I'm seeing the feedback as so far. Well, I guess Lols is our loremaster now, seeing as he knows so much.
OK. Mmm, I guess. Though I'm going to re-read the Silmarillon sometime. That might help.
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Jun 30, 2018 19:13:44 GMT
-last edited on Jun 30, 2018 19:14:13 GMT by Essa Kryze
Post by Essa Kryze on Jun 30, 2018 19:13:44 GMT
Qui got anything to add to the melding pot yet while it's slow rn?
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Post by Qui on Jul 1, 2018 13:23:13 GMT
Qui got anything to add to the melding pot yet while it's slow rn? I'm going to go get my ROTK appendix.
I haz my MB sig!
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Post by Qui on Jul 1, 2018 13:26:35 GMT
we could try to write somewhat in the style of tolkien.
I haz my MB sig!
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Post by Qui on Jul 1, 2018 13:38:06 GMT
I don't see why not. Awesome! Now we have another recruit!
Qui Show us whatcha got! so we're doing a fourth age story with a mix of OCs and tolkien characters. Do we have anything else established?
I haz my MB sig!
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Post by Essa Kryze on Jul 1, 2018 16:21:52 GMT
Qui got anything to add to the melding pot yet while it's slow rn? I'm going to go get my ROTK appendix. YAY!
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Post by Essa Kryze on Jul 1, 2018 16:22:59 GMT
we could try to write somewhat in the style of tolkien. Ooooo we need a cool font…..but it wont let me use any other then the five or so it already has. D: I agree though.
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Jul 1, 2018 16:34:10 GMT
-last edited on Jul 1, 2018 16:36:32 GMT by Essa Kryze
Post by Essa Kryze on Jul 1, 2018 16:34:10 GMT
Awesome! Now we have another recruit!
Qui Show us whatcha got! so we're doing a fourth age story with a mix of OCs and tolkien characters. Do we have anything else established? Yes. I have my OC character's posted and the others should be whenever they can, if you have any (I should hope you have at least one as we will be writing from your characters POV most of the story) I would suggest you put them up, then later I will create a master list of what characters are in the story and who has each on. There has also been a plot line being tossed around for a while and since I have time on my hands I'm going to make a draft of the surrent outline. Everything is still in the adjusting age though. I think alongside the plot, we have definitely decided that we want to include, oliphaunts, balrogs, I think seeing stones, and lots and LOTS of magic!!!! Make sense?
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Post by Essa Kryze on Jul 1, 2018 17:33:53 GMT
General Plot Outline (sir! )
I. Melkor gains control of the Nazgul thanks to a new loyal servant A. this loyal servent person awakens when Sauron falls but it takes till now to gather and create evil armies B. the evil army spreads poison through the land while the Nazgul (and or the loyal servent of Melkor (THAT NEEDS A NAME!!)) spread evil magic that emulates a poison in the elves and also causes them to age normally.
II. The Blue Wizards A. one of them is corrupted 1. he convinces the other that the Spellbook of Aganduar, which is super powerful, should remain in "good hands" i.e his 2. backed up by disturbing dreams they both had/have(?) B. he actually takes the Book for personal gain 1. disarming the other maiar is made easy 2. he is comsumed with the power
III. Blue wizard has something that is the catalyst to turn him good (works as a great side plot to decoy the reader into thinking he is the ancient evil thingamy) A. so in attempting to redeem himself he leads part of the heroes to seek the help of an easterdragon (Not The Easterdragon ;p) B. The other Blue Wizard leads the other part of the group on a rescue mission 1. (perhaps part way there they receive a message about the elves being attacked and have a quandery then send for the Rohirrim?)
IV. Heroes catch up to the baddies A. Baddie has enchanted gaurds that are hard foes 1. A fierce battle ensues 2. heroes barely win B. Baddie escapes with half of his army C. some heroes are badly injured
V. Meanwhile A. the other guys are with the easterdragon 1. one brave hero is gifted with a tooth from the skeleton from a venomous wyrm that they had worked as a team to defeat as a test 2. venom has no known cure being the most lethal substance known B. in a final attempt to destroy the otherwise indestructible Book, the afor mentioned brave hero drives the tooth into it.
Okay. Feel free to pick apart as outlines are most definitely NOT my forte. XD There are some gaps I feel should be sewn up, fluffing around the bones of this outline. It's not as long as I would like yet as it's not final or finished but it's an excellent start I think. There are some elements not here yet.
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Post by Qui on Jul 2, 2018 15:51:35 GMT
we could try to write somewhat in the style of tolkien. Ooooo we need a cool font…..but it wont let me use any other then the five or so it already has. D: I agree though. Copy and paste from microsoft word.
I haz my MB sig!
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Post by Qui on Jul 2, 2018 15:52:25 GMT
so we're doing a fourth age story with a mix of OCs and tolkien characters. Do we have anything else established? Yes. I have my OC character's posted and the others should be whenever they can, if you have any (I should hope you have at least one as we will be writing from your characters POV most of the story) I would suggest you put them up, then later I will create a master list of what characters are in the story and who has each on. There has also been a plot line being tossed around for a while and since I have time on my hands I'm going to make a draft of the surrent outline. Everything is still in the adjusting age though. I think alongside the plot, we have definitely decided that we want to include, oliphaunts, balrogs, I think seeing stones, and lots and LOTS of magic!!!! Make sense?
Yeah. So tolkien, but a lego message board story.
I haz my MB sig!
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Post by Qui on Jul 2, 2018 15:55:23 GMT
General Plot Outline (sir! )
I. Melkor gains control of the Nazgul thanks to a new loyal servant A. this loyal servent person awakens when Sauron falls but it takes till now to gather and create evil armies B. the evil army spreads poison through the land while the Nazgul (and or the loyal servent of Melkor (THAT NEEDS A NAME!!)) spread evil magic that emulates a poison in the elves and also causes them to age normally.
II. The Blue Wizards A. one of them is corrupted 1. he convinces the other that the Spellbook of Aganduar, which is super powerful, should remain in "good hands" i.e his 2. backed up by disturbing dreams they both had/have(?) B. he actually takes the Book for personal gain 1. disarming the other maiar is made easy 2. he is comsumed with the power
III. Blue wizard has something that is the catalyst to turn him good (works as a great side plot to decoy the reader into thinking he is the ancient evil thingamy) A. so in attempting to redeem himself he leads part of the heroes to seek the help of an easterdragon (Not The Easterdragon ;p) B. The other Blue Wizard leads the other part of the group on a rescue mission 1. (perhaps part way there they receive a message about the elves being attacked and have a quandery then send for the Rohirrim?)
IV. Heroes catch up to the baddies A. Baddie has enchanted gaurds that are hard foes 1. A fierce battle ensues 2. heroes barely win B. Baddie escapes with half of his army C. some heroes are badly injured
V. Meanwhile A. the other guys are with the easterdragon 1. one brave hero is gifted with a tooth from the skeleton from a venomous wyrm that they had worked as a team to defeat as a test 2. venom has no known cure being the most lethal substance known B. in a final attempt to destroy the otherwise indestructible Book, the afor mentioned brave hero drives the tooth into it.
Okay. Feel free to pick apart as outlines are most definitely NOT my forte. XD There are some gaps I feel should be sewn up, fluffing around the bones of this outline. It's not as long as I would like yet as it's not final or finished but it's an excellent start I think. There are some elements not here yet. the last part sounds too much like harry potter and the chamber of secrets.
I haz my MB sig!
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Post by Essa Kryze on Jul 2, 2018 21:43:46 GMT
Ooooo we need a cool font…..but it wont let me use any other then the five or so it already has. D: I agree though. Copy and paste from microsoft word. I doesn't know if I haz dat. I'm on a mac with google docs. D:
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Post by Essa Kryze on Jul 2, 2018 21:44:39 GMT
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