What specifically is confusing you? Is there anything I can change to make things clearer?
A bio sheet with a couple sentences about each would help. Just something I CON look at to remind me who is who.
Alright! Coming up!
Fair note, all characters came from the BIONICLE RPs of the LMBs and LMBE
Kratark: the titular One-Punch Makuta. Strongest of them all. Emotionally deep and complex. Loves only two things in this world: his pet, and his cape. If either are so much as hurt he goes nuts. So far he has been able to one-shot anything, hence his title. Struggles to feel anything and has been used on occasion for other people's goals.
Emarcee: Great Being. Creator of Kratark. Saw Mata Nui create the Makuta and couldn't resist trying to make one himself. Pried the information out of the Great Spirit and managed to create Kratark. Kratark was intended to be an anti-hero embodiment of Emarcee's will within the Great Spirit. Kratark alone would be clandestinely responsible for the destruction of anyone or anything that threatened the peace of the Matoran Universe. Unfortunately he gave Kratark very vague instructions and didn't give him enough capacity to care about much less come up with personal goals, which led to Kratark going along with what the other Makuta around him were doing rather than doing what Emarcee intended. Emarcee secretly can't stand the thought of harming Kratark but does so out of necessity. Suffers from mild arrogance and vanity, but can afford it due to his sheer strength, power, speed, and cool factor.
Waffles: Pet to Kratark. A terrifying but charming beast who served as the only thing Kratark ever created. Had a robust and unique physiology which would have allowed it to infinitely rebirth itself had it lived past its juvenile state.
Karunax: Current leader of the Brotherhood of Makuta. Formerly a Toa known as Karun. Was turned into a Makuta following his entire team being wiped out. Possesses armor that can't be broken by protosteel, and is apparently infinitely strong. Formerly roleplayed by Nicholas something rather... I don't remember username numbers, okay? XD Karunax follows a twisted version of the three virtues which has been adapted to justify the Brotherhood's conquest of the Matoran Universe. He particularly believes that unity is the key to the Brotherhood's success.
These are all the major players so far. Any further questions? XD
A bio sheet with a couple sentences about each would help. Just something I CON look at to remind me who is who.
Alright! Coming up!
Fair note, all characters came from the BIONICLE RPs of the LMBs and LMBE
Kratark: the titular One-Punch Makuta. Strongest of them all. Emotionally deep and complex. Loves only two things in this world: his pet, and his cape. If either are so much as hurt he goes nuts. So far he has been able to one-shot anything, hence his title. Struggles to feel anything and has been used on occasion for other people's goals.
Emarcee: Great Being. Creator of Kratark. Saw Mata Nui create the Makuta and couldn't resist trying to make one himself. Pried the information out of the Great Spirit and managed to create Kratark. Kratark was intended to be an anti-hero embodiment of Emarcee's will within the Great Spirit. Kratark alone would be clandestinely responsible for the destruction of anyone or anything that threatened the peace of the Matoran Universe. Unfortunately he gave Kratark very vague instructions and didn't give him enough capacity to care about much less come up with personal goals, which led to Kratark going along with what the other Makuta around him were doing rather than doing what Emarcee intended. Emarcee secretly can't stand the thought of harming Kratark but does so out of necessity. Suffers from mild arrogance and vanity, but can afford it due to his sheer strength, power, speed, and cool factor.
Waffles: Pet to Kratark. A terrifying but charming beast who served as the only thing Kratark ever created. Had a robust and unique physiology which would have allowed it to infinitely rebirth itself had it lived past its juvenile state.
Karunax: Current leader of the Brotherhood of Makuta. Formerly a Toa known as Karun. Was turned into a Makuta following his entire team being wiped out. Possesses armor that can't be broken by protosteel, and is apparently infinitely strong. Formerly roleplayed by Nicholas something rather... I don't remember username numbers, okay? XD Karunax follows a twisted version of the three virtues which has been adapted to justify the Brotherhood's conquest of the Matoran Universe. He particularly believes that unity is the key to the Brotherhood's success.
These are all the major players so far. Any further questions? XD
Fair note, all characters came from the BIONICLE RPs of the LMBs and LMBE
Kratark: the titular One-Punch Makuta. Strongest of them all. Emotionally deep and complex. Loves only two things in this world: his pet, and his cape. If either are so much as hurt he goes nuts. So far he has been able to one-shot anything, hence his title. Struggles to feel anything and has been used on occasion for other people's goals.
Emarcee: Great Being. Creator of Kratark. Saw Mata Nui create the Makuta and couldn't resist trying to make one himself. Pried the information out of the Great Spirit and managed to create Kratark. Kratark was intended to be an anti-hero embodiment of Emarcee's will within the Great Spirit. Kratark alone would be clandestinely responsible for the destruction of anyone or anything that threatened the peace of the Matoran Universe. Unfortunately he gave Kratark very vague instructions and didn't give him enough capacity to care about much less come up with personal goals, which led to Kratark going along with what the other Makuta around him were doing rather than doing what Emarcee intended. Emarcee secretly can't stand the thought of harming Kratark but does so out of necessity. Suffers from mild arrogance and vanity, but can afford it due to his sheer strength, power, speed, and cool factor.
Waffles: Pet to Kratark. A terrifying but charming beast who served as the only thing Kratark ever created. Had a robust and unique physiology which would have allowed it to infinitely rebirth itself had it lived past its juvenile state.
Karunax: Current leader of the Brotherhood of Makuta. Formerly a Toa known as Karun. Was turned into a Makuta following his entire team being wiped out. Possesses armor that can't be broken by protosteel, and is apparently infinitely strong. Formerly roleplayed by Nicholas something rather... I don't remember username numbers, okay? XD Karunax follows a twisted version of the three virtues which has been adapted to justify the Brotherhood's conquest of the Matoran Universe. He particularly believes that unity is the key to the Brotherhood's success.
These are all the major players so far. Any further questions? XD
This will help gallons, thanks!
No problem! A time skip of this nature kinda ended up requiring this, honestly.
Notice: I will be inactive from tonight until ~09/16/2018. I could've been more consistent with releasing what I've written (which, all of it is complete on a text file XD) but I just haven't been paying attention to it on some days... my apologies XD
-last edited on Sept 8, 2018 5:20:51 GMT by Emarcee
Post by Emarcee on Sept 8, 2018 5:15:54 GMT
Emarcee eventually awoke, only to see Waffles slain in a corner, and a massive storm of black and violet erupting from Kratark's crater. Injured as he was though, Emarcee could not deny his own morbid curiosity. The Great Being stumbled forward, still dizzy from the myriad of blows he had taken today, especially the ones that were received on his head. He also winced on occassion from the wound on his back, which he had yet to bandage on account of the prolonged nature of the battles he had gotten himself into. When he did make it to the crater however, Emarcee carefully leaned over, peering into the pitch black hole. There he saw an altogether silent and terrifying sight. A motionless suit of armor. Inside it though -- antidermis violently raged about, almost as if it were about to become plasma. If one bothered to listen, to attempt to read the Makuta's mind, as Emarcee did, the only thing they would hear was a grown man screaming at the top of his lungs without any heavy metal accompaniment. A blind but silent rage being released internally as opposed to externally. Eventually the Makuta's armor began to twitch, shaking uncontrollably as the vibrating antidermis inside caused the armor to almost quite literally have a seizure. Fearing what should follow if he were to remain for much longer, Emarcee retreated. He would observe the rest of these events from the Queue of Em, where he could tend to his wounds without fear of incident. All the while though, Kratark would be condemned to remain in his own personal Karz: mentally screaming to himself in a complete and utter sense of despair and rancor, unable to find release from his own rage.
One could almost say the Makuta would need to Live and Learn. Even though he could hardly swallow his fears and pain.
Yes. That is a Sonic the Hedgehog reference. And yes that song absolutely applies to this situation in every single way. Deal with it.
***********
A hulking wretch of twisted metal trekked past buildings lit ablaze. With every step -- a dull thud that bore the distinct sound of a dead body hitting the ground, though there were no such bodies to be seen. Not yet anyway, not from his view.
A skyscraper, once home to over a hundred Xians, suddenly erupted with a series of mind-shattering explosions. Windows were not shattered but vaporized. Dust did not fall but rubble did. Smoke did not rise but beams of steel curled up in protest to the building's destruction. The megalith of concrete, in the hopes of somehow not returning to the earth whence it came in vain, did conspire to fall upon Makuta Karunax, though it could scarcely have picked a more resilient target. Karunax did not even look up. Instead he allowed the concrete to quite literally break itself upon him. As he walked forward, he literallycut out an outline of himself within the remains of the falling building, which of course with a city as populated as this managed to land on top of several transportation vehicles, a shipment of raw materials, and a host of civilians besides. Oh, and another building which managed to do the same exact thing, save for landing on top of Karunax.
The Makuta was pleased with the destruction. Before he could truly think about it though, a bolt of robotic crimson struck Karunax in the back. A shot fired by an equally robotic fiend -- Cold Steel "I would appreciate it if when you go 'conquering' someone or whatever it is you incourageable tin-cans do these days, that you not leave such a freaking mess! Jerk." Karunax payed no heed to the automaton leader of Xia and continued to walk forward. He would not be bothered to slay Cold Steel when he could instead be ensuring that the city around him was being destroyed. The mechanical brow upon Cold Steel's face furrowed at this and he brandished a straight, flat blade. It did not bear a point for thrusting, but rather a singular line of furious red ran through the center of the sword's blade. It was a weapon designed to be just as efficient and clean as its master. A weapon of pure energy save for some of the metal it used to contain said energy. The vaunted Karunax's armor, however, would still prove to be a problem in spite of these implements.
"I know you're ignoring me." Said Cold Steel, staring down Karunax with his usual calm, collected attitude, "Probably think you're all powerful and that I'm not worth your time. No one is. And yet -- if no one is worth your time, I fail to see why you're here. Maybe, I'll pretend you're not here too. Pick off all of your weaker underlings. Then you'd at least have to go about wrecking my place yourself instead of relying on your precious 'unity'."
A single wave of dooming black lunged out not unexpectedly from the outstretched arm of the titan. Only for it to be fizzled out and cut down like a rabid dog by an unfeeling blaze of pitiless crimson light. Cold Steel could manipulate elemental light energy at will, a trait which serves him and Xia particularly well when it came to dealing with Makuta. The automaton, none the worse for wear, marched onward, deadly purpose in his gaze.
"You're a jerk. You know that? I don't know how you got that armor. But I swear I'm gonna find a way to cut it in half. Just thinking about it makes me wanna shout some pretty ugly words. You see -- being confronted with something I can't break makes me ticked off as-"
Before the robot could finish his thought, he was grabbed by the arm -- swung over Karunax's head, and slammed into the asphalt directly behind the Makuta. "Oh yeah. 'infinite strength'. How could I of for-"
this time, Cold Steel was punched straight in the back. A hole in the floor in the shape of Cold Steel was thus created, one that was about a foot deep.
"Alright." Said the robot. Gradually floating his way out of the hole and back to where he originally was.
Double thumbs-up! ![[y]](http://storage.proboards.com/6672327/images/WYWPH2VRo26pOFDid7QZ.png)
Double thumbs-up! 
Just something I CON look at to remind me who is who. 
Just something I CON look at to remind me who is who. 
