I demand knowledge of this new sombrero trio! Who does it consist of!?
Con, sweets, you.....Idrk. I thought you knew.
*Idk Okay good, I'm in the trio. Why would Sweets be in the Sombrero Trio? She doesn't wear a sombrero anymore (I know I don't, but I'm gonna put it back on ) so therefor why should she? Z-Whales is more worthy of being a part of it, because he still wears his.
*Idk Okay good, I'm in the trio. Why would Sweets be in the Sombrero Trio? She doesn't wear a sombrero anymore (I know I don't, but I'm gonna put it back on ) so therefor why should she? Z-Whales is more worthy of being a part of it, because he still wears his.
*Idk Okay good, I'm in the trio. Why would Sweets be in the Sombrero Trio? She doesn't wear a sombrero anymore (I know I don't, but I'm gonna put it back on ) so therefor why should she? Z-Whales is more worthy of being a part of it, because he still wears his.
I haz no idea, I just guessed who was in it. the truth comes out. XD
Having finally read the story up to the most recent chaptah (BATMAN!!!), I must say that I am thoroughly enjoying it. By far the most intense story I've read, either on here or the old MBs. But it's also very well written; the dialogue from the characters usually flows very well and seems quite natural.
Just want to add, my favorite character so far is.... Ward. I hope that doesn't make me some sort of psycho-maniac of some kind?
Hey, thanks man! I'm glad you like it so far. And thank you for your input. It's very encouraging because sometimes I am not sure how well a piece flows or something. So, it's good to know I'm on the right track for now.
Lol, yes it kind of does. What about him makes him your favorite character?
My favorite character is either Batman, Carson, or Nathaniel Creed. I can't make up my mind. ...but I can do that. Cuz I'm the writer.
Indeed. I'm glad you found my feedback helpful!
Idk exactly why, I guess it's just his portrayal in the story. I mentioned the dialogue flowing well, and Ward's especially seems smooth and befitting--hard to accomplish with a man of few words such as himself. On a related note, I appreciate how much he's affected the story, while actually being present for only a couple chapters, and saying little even in those chapters. Yes, he's evil, and he's also got some weird ideas. I think the two go hand in hand. All in all, he's a well-written evil character, which I appreciate, and enjoy.
Interesting. Do you actually consider Carson a character? I suppose that makes sense, but I honestly hadn't really thought of him in that light. And yes, you can kinda do whatever you want with the story, being the author.
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Hey, thanks man! I'm glad you like it so far. And thank you for your input. It's very encouraging because sometimes I am not sure how well a piece flows or something. So, it's good to know I'm on the right track for now.
Lol, yes it kind of does. What about him makes him your favorite character?
My favorite character is either Batman, Carson, or Nathaniel Creed. I can't make up my mind. ...but I can do that. Cuz I'm the writer.
Indeed. I'm glad you found my feedback helpful!
Idk exactly why, I guess it's just his portrayal in the story. I mentioned the dialogue flowing well, and Ward's especially seems smooth and befitting--hard to accomplish with a man of few words such as himself. On a related note, I appreciate how much he's affected the story, while actually being present for only a couple chapters, and saying little even in those chapters. Yes, he's evil, and he's also got some weird ideas. I think the two go hand in hand. All in all, he's a well-written evil character, which I appreciate, and enjoy.
Interesting. Do you actually consider Carson a character? I suppose that makes sense, but I honestly hadn't really thought of him in that light. And yes, you can kinda do whatever you want with the story, being the author.
That's very perceptive. Good job. I can tell you're a graduated homeschooler.
I do, because he's an AI. It helps me write him better. And thank you for your approval.
*Idk Okay good, I'm in the trio. Why would Sweets be in the Sombrero Trio? She doesn't wear a sombrero anymore (I know I don't, but I'm gonna put it back on ) so therefor why should she? Z-Whales is more worthy of being a part of it, because he still wears his.
Bro, are you gonna read the story or not? lol
Can you please give me some time to get round to it and everything else?
(AND BATMAN!!!!! @u@ 
) Very good job, keep it up! 
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lol 
Agreed on that. XD 
I'm glad you like it so far. 
You do that. ![[h]](http://storage.proboards.com/6672327/images/nPCskakrdhDERqIVGKuw.png)
