Eh. In a way, I guess. It's what I would do at least if I were to torture someone. In my defense, it helps me drain that part of my mind so it doesn't poison the rest of my mind.
Does that make sense?
It means the revelation's interesting.
Curious... yes, it does make sense.
You seem a little too curious with this information.
Are you planning something for your story with this information or something?
You're welcome. Your most recent part was great too!
Yeah. You developed the villain very well, and it's definitely a big challenge for Lloyd and the rest of the Ninja with so many emotions and feelings.
*Bows* I've developed a lot of newly found "motivation" for this story, recently.
Yeah. It's like a card game when writing. You gotta get the right amount of "numbers", and, if you do it right, you'll play them just right for the audience.
That's awesome. Something must've inspired you recently to continue with this story.
Ah, I see. Then you're very good at playing your cards. Definitely looking forward to the next part.
*Bows* I've developed a lot of newly found "motivation" for this story, recently.
Yeah. It's like a card game when writing. You gotta get the right amount of "numbers", and, if you do it right, you'll play them just right for the audience.
That's awesome. Something must've inspired you recently to continue with this story.
Ah, I see. Then you're very good at playing your cards. Definitely looking forward to the next part.
I think it has to do with the fact with me drawing thoughts from my Dark Side to write Rose's movement and such.
wat So I'm not the only one!! Creepily, the characters I typically relate to the most are the villains -- I can just feel myself feeding on their anger and bitterness. . . O.O With that in mind, I'm glad you can't, either. I can't even imagine the mayhem that would take place should I gain mind-powers. O_O I've seen roadkill treated better than this kid.
So you're kind of willy-nilly, but you go back and edit the parts to make sure it's still in line with what you're planning. Interesting.
Good.
So... you like so far. Did I impress you?
I think you know "what" now. Same! We probably shouldn't be praising that we're both similar like that, though. Considering the fact that could be bad in a super-hero type world. I would know who each and everyone of you are by now if that were the case with me. XD
Pretty much. What are you thinking?
Good-good.
Very much so, yes. I think it'll take a few weeks to get those images out of my head.
Good thing we don't live in a superhero-type world, then. UGH. O_O No, thank you.
I'm thinking that's a good way to do it; you kind of let yourself go and allow your initial thoughts to fly over the keyboard onto the screen, then you go back and make sure everything's aligned with what you know you want and how you know the story needs to go. My way is different, but that's really because I'm such a control-freak.
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Post by Essa Kryze on Apr 22, 2018 21:59:36 GMT
Soooo I actually started reading this pretty soon after it came out but then I got life'd for a while and didn't read. But I have amended this grievous crime and caught up. Great job on all the story so far, I have no idea what comes next! :H Also I loved all the hilarious comments here. :'^D
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Post by LordTigress on Apr 30, 2018 13:30:13 GMT
I finally got to re-read this story over the weekend, ( ) and now some questions that I've conjured earlier are once more making me wonder;
Who was this guy Rose was supposed to marry? (--unless the letter at the beginning was a complete fake.)
Who are/were Rose's parents?
Where did this twisted, evil version of Rose come from?
It was said earlier that it was her "job to "borrow" memories, give them back, and make sure their owner is not led astray." How did she get this job? What is this job for? Who's in charge?
How did Pythor get involved with all this?
And how in the world are the ninja going to fix all this mental and emotional damage that's been done to Lloyd?
I've said it before, and I'll say it again: POOR LLOYD.
(I don't expect my questions to be answered right away or for all of them to be answered, this is kinda my way of saying "hey I read your story again and I still like it just thought you'd like to know". )
I finally got to re-read this story over the weekend, ( ) and now some questions that I've conjured earlier are once more making me wonder;
Who was this guy Rose was supposed to marry? (--unless the letter at the beginning was a complete fake.)
Who are/were Rose's parents?
Where did this twisted, evil version of Rose come from?
It was said earlier that it was her "job to "borrow" memories, give them back, and make sure their owner is not led astray." How did she get this job? What is this job for? Who's in charge?
How did Pythor get involved with all this?
And how in the world are the ninja going to fix all this mental and emotional damage that's been done to Lloyd?
I've said it before, and I'll say it again: POOR LLOYD.
(I don't expect my questions to be answered right away or for all of them to be answered, this is kinda my way of saying "hey I read your story again and I still like it just thought you'd like to know". )
Lol.
She wasn’t suppose to marry anyone. She wrote it for her future husband if she was to have one.
*Shrug* I don’t think even she knows.
You shall learn later, young one.
See above sentence.
I expect you to say it again at some point, too.
(Good. I wasn’t going to answer all of them anyway. )
Thank you for this. It helps me keep in mind what to answer when.
Your most recent part was great too! 
( ._.)
My way is different, but that's really because I'm such a control-freak. 
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) and now some questions that I've conjured earlier are once more making me wonder;