"One time I washed Zane's outfit and turned it pink. It was the same day I put hot sauce in your chili." Just as I finish saying it, the memory is gone.
"It's really him, Cole," Mom says.
"Yeah. Well, I still don't believe it." I look over at Kai. Oh no.
"Kai. Please," I say.
"No. What is Zane?"
"A nindroid."
"Who killed the Great Devourer?"
"Lord Garmadon."
"Who was the ghost that possessed you?"
"Morro."
"What is the name of the person who hosted the Tournament of Elements?"
"Chen." I close my eyes and take a deep breath.
***
"I thought you would want to see the wonderful progress we're making." I open them to see Rose standing before me. Her hair is curly, her new emerald eyes have a sparkle to them, and she's wearing a green ninja outfit. My ninja outfit. "What do you think?" She smiles.
"I think... you're a monster that won’t win." She winks. I've had enough. I stand up and grab her. I throw her to the ground in pin her there. I put my hands to her neck.
***
“Don’t let go,” I tell Kai and Cole. They nod. “Alright, Rose. Give me your worse.” I swallow as boiling anger starts to run through my veins. Wu turns into a smiling Rose again. I start breathing deep, wanting to tackle her. I try to fight against the pull of the two Roses holding me back. I yell and I scream. I kick and thrash, but the two holding me don’t let up. I yell some more out of frustration.
“Annoying, isn’t it,” she says. “To be so close but can’t lay a hand on the one you wish to hurt.”
“Annoyance? That’s your best shot?” I muster a laugh despite the fact that she is making me mad. She gives me a mad smile.
“I am so glad you are finally enjoying this. ”
*** “You won’t feel it anymore, if you tell me about them,” I hear. I shake my head. “Don’t you want to forget this day? Tell me about your Mother.” I try to fight the urge to sopesk, but it hurts the more I resist. I scream.
“Her name is Misako.” I breath deep.
***
“Now, Jay!” Something white flies over my head. We catches it and ties it around my mouth. He created a gag from Zane’s suit! Sweat beats down my neck and cheeks. I blink and shake my head, trying to shake her out. I form my hands into fists and scream in the gag. I look at the woman, unable to show anything besides the hate Rose is making me feel. I look around in front of me.
*** "And what's wrong with what I want Lloyd?" I blink. That didn't come from my head. I look at My a and see that her attention is on the door. Against my better judgement, I look. Rose is standing in the doorway with Pythor standing next to her.
MY GOSH SHE WROTE ANOTHER ONE Girlfriend, you are on a roll right now!!
1. Aw, memories. . . oh wait now its gone Not good.
2. If it were me during the interrogation, I might have answered one of those questions with something like "John Cena" to lighten the mood. It may not work, but I'd probably try it, anyway.
3. why u wearing his stuff gurl
4. @underlined: My thoughts exactly, Lloyd!
5. MMMSKIMFFGEEEHHH FOR CRYING OUT LOUD JUST SMASH THAT LITTLE GIRLY PUNK ŌmŌ
6. KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT, SON. Ō_Ō
7. Eerily, some of this scene is reminding me of some of my earliest childhood days. Ugh, that just gave me flashbacks. XP
8. O.O There's no way I should be asking for more, because you have totally outdone yourself, K. Bravo. Holy cow, bravo. i leik
"One time I washed Zane's outfit and turned it pink. It was the same day I put hot sauce in your chili." Just as I finish saying it, the memory is gone.
"It's really him, Cole," Mom says.
"Yeah. Well, I still don't believe it." I look over at Kai. Oh no.
"Kai. Please," I say.
"No. What is Zane?"
"A nindroid."
"Who killed the Great Devourer?"
"Lord Garmadon."
"Who was the ghost that possessed you?"
"Morro."
"What is the name of the person who hosted the Tournament of Elements?"
"Chen." I close my eyes and take a deep breath.
***
"I thought you would want to see the wonderful progress we're making." I open them to see Rose standing before me. Her hair is curly, her new emerald eyes have a sparkle to them, and she's wearing a green ninja outfit. My ninja outfit. "What do you think?" She smiles.
"I think... you're a monster that won’t win." She winks. I've had enough. I stand up and grab her. I throw her to the ground in pin her there. I put my hands to her neck.
***
“Don’t let go,” I tell Kai and Cole. They nod. “Alright, Rose. Give me your worse.” I swallow as boiling anger starts to run through my veins. Wu turns into a smiling Rose again. I start breathing deep, wanting to tackle her. I try to fight against the pull of the two Roses holding me back. I yell and I scream. I kick and thrash, but the two holding me don’t let up. I yell some more out of frustration.
“Annoying, isn’t it,” she says. “To be so close but can’t lay a hand on the one you wish to hurt.”
“Annoyance? That’s your best shot?” I muster a laugh despite the fact that she is making me mad. She gives me a mad smile.
“I am so glad you are finally enjoying this. ”
*** “You won’t feel it anymore, if you tell me about them,” I hear. I shake my head. “Don’t you want to forget this day? Tell me about your Mother.” I try to fight the urge to sopesk, but it hurts the more I resist. I scream.
“Her name is Misako.” I breath deep.
***
“Now, Jay!” Something white flies over my head. We catches it and ties it around my mouth. He created a gag from Zane’s suit! Sweat beats down my neck and cheeks. I blink and shake my head, trying to shake her out. I form my hands into fists and scream in the gag. I look at the woman, unable to show anything besides the hate Rose is making me feel. I look around in front of me.
*** "And what's wrong with what I want Lloyd?" I blink. That didn't come from my head. I look at My a and see that her attention is on the door. Against my better judgement, I look. Rose is standing in the doorway with Pythor standing next to her.
MY GOSH SHE WROTE ANOTHER ONE Girlfriend, you are on a roll right now!!
1. Aw, memories. . . oh wait now its gone Not good.
2. If it were me during the interrogation, I might have answered one of those questions with something like "John Cena" to lighten the mood. It may not work, but I'd probably try it, anyway.
3. why u wearing his stuff gurl
4. @underlined: My thoughts exactly, Lloyd!
5. MMMSKIMFFGEEEHHH FOR CRYING OUT LOUD JUST SMASH THAT LITTLE GIRLY PUNK ŌmŌ
6. KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT, SON. Ō_Ō
7. Eerily, some of this scene is reminding me of some of my earliest childhood days. Ugh, that just gave me flashbacks. XP
8. O.O There's no way I should be asking for more, because you have totally outdone yourself, K. Bravo. Holy cow, bravo. i leik
I was writing for two days. Yeah...
1. Lol.
2. I don’t think that exists in this universe. Lol.
3. I thought it was explained?
4. Lol.
5. But he’ll end up hurting someone else if he does.
MY GOSH SHE WROTE ANOTHER ONE Girlfriend, you are on a roll right now!!
1. Aw, memories. . . oh wait now its gone Not good.
2. If it were me during the interrogation, I might have answered one of those questions with something like "John Cena" to lighten the mood. It may not work, but I'd probably try it, anyway.
3. why u wearing his stuff gurl
4. @underlined: My thoughts exactly, Lloyd!
5. MMMSKIMFFGEEEHHH FOR CRYING OUT LOUD JUST SMASH THAT LITTLE GIRLY PUNK ŌmŌ
6. KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT, SON. Ō_Ō
7. Eerily, some of this scene is reminding me of some of my earliest childhood days. Ugh, that just gave me flashbacks. XP
8. O.O There's no way I should be asking for more, because you have totally outdone yourself, K. Bravo. Holy cow, bravo. i leik
I was writing for two days. Yeah...
1. Lol.
2. I don’t think that exists in this universe. Lol.
3. I thought it was explained?
4. Lol.
5. But he’ll end up hurting someone else if he does.
6. Lol.
7. I don’t think that’s good.
8. Shurprised?
Here's a virtual cake for all your hard work.
3. Maybe three months ago. I ought to re-read this so it's all fresh in my head.
5. I know, but--GAH!!
7. It's not.
8. More like on the edge of my seat and very eager to see what happens next.
JOIN THE EVIL-ROSE HATERS CLUB, ROME!! GIVE IN TO YOUR JUSTIFIED ANGER AS A CONCERNED FANFIC READER!!!
I'm trying to remember, but didn't you guys love her at the beginning of the book?
Well, sure she was sweet at first (y'know, apart from the fact that she forced a guy into a relationship (O_o), but if they don't seek redemption for their ways, manipulators, blackmailers and deceivers deserve to be smashed before their time.
"And what's wrong with what I want Lloyd?" I blink. That didn't come from my head. I look at Nya and see that her attention is on the door. Against my better judgement, I look. Rose is standing in the doorway with Pythor standing next to her.
Harsh green font colour... unfair fights... manipulative antagonist... yep, I'm gonna be angry for the rest of the day.
Brick, Tigress. That thing haunts me everyday. I "two into" it's feelings every now and then for parts like this. There are times, I get really into writing that I feel like I can actually do those things irl. Thankfully I can't. I'm just gonna say that if I ever get a mind-controlling super power.... Let's just be glad I don't, shall we. He just happens to be my main character. I'm sorry!
Uh... Little bit of both. I write/type, which causes the flow of the story, then I rewrite/edit, which changes the scene some. I rewrite this... three times. I think.
Good-est, then.
*finally breathes smoothly*
wat So I'm not the only one!! Creepily, the characters I typically relate to the most are the villains -- I can just feel myself feeding on their anger and bitterness. . . O.O With that in mind, I'm glad you can't, either. I can't even imagine the mayhem that would take place should I gain mind-powers. O_O I've seen roadkill treated better than this kid.
So you're kind of willy-nilly, but you go back and edit the parts to make sure it's still in line with what you're planning. Interesting.
Good.
So... you like so far. Did I impress you?
I think you know "what" now. Same! We probably shouldn't be praising that we're both similar like that, though. Considering the fact that could be bad in a super-hero type world. I would know who each and everyone of you are by now if that were the case with me. XD
"And what's wrong with what I want Lloyd?" I blink. That didn't come from my head. I look at Nya and see that her attention is on the door. Against my better judgement, I look. Rose is standing in the doorway with Pythor standing next to her.
Harsh green font colour... unfair fights... manipulative antagonist... yep, I'm gonna be angry for the rest of the day.
I was darker when I first used it, sorry... "that is true"... "that is also true"... Feel free to take it out on me since 1) I am the author and 2) that is my Dark Side in a sense.
"Oh yeah? Name one." I look at her despite my pounding head. She looks exactly like the last time I saw her, except she's wearing a simple, white dress and heels. I sit up.
"I was there for you when no one else was, and I always will be."
"After you erased my memories and tricked me."
"What I showed you was a lie, yes, but what I told you was true."
"No."
"Yes. You were told what happened, were you not. About how your father died."
"Yeah. Nya did it. She had to do it!"
"She didn't even try to think of a way to save your father! None of them did!"
"I told them there was no way to! Dad had told me that there was no way to save him. He told me right before I left to go battle Morro!"
"Did he?" A smirk forms on Rose's lips. Her brown hair turns golden. "My appearance shows you how much control I have over you. Thought you would want to know."
"No," I whisper. I can't remember anything about talking to my Dad in the Preeminent. Rose laughs and I stand up.
"Fun, isn't it? Tell me, Lloyd. Tell me about your favorite memory."
"It was when Dad was 'cured'. That was the best day of my life." Her eyes turn from blue to green. "Stop this!"
"Oh, but this is fun. Aren't you having fun, Lloyd?" I cover my mouth before I can say anything else. "Tell me more about the members of your team, Lloyd." I blink and then there are five of her surrounding me. I look at them alarmed.
"No." I shake my head. I didn't want to believe it. One Rose was enough at the moment. All of them smirk, but the one in the middle talks.
"This is my domain. There is nothing you can do here to stop me." The two closest try to tackle me, but I quickly flip them over my shoulders. I kick the second one on my right hard in the stomach. She coils back a little, holding her stomach. The other two had backed up a little
I go up to the next one and punch it square in the jaw, knocking her down. The next one grabs my hand and trys to flip me over. Instead, I jump up, knock her down, and land on her back, pinning her to the floor. I take her head and bang it hard against the floor, knocking her out.
"Is that the best you can do?" The two I fliped over start to come at me again. I grab one and throw it in a random direction. I walk towards the other one. She's smiling as I grab her by the throat.
"L-lloyd," she croaks out. Her appearance changes to Nya. I'm holding her off the ground by the throat, both of her hands grasping mine. "P-please." I drop her, terrified at myself. She collaps to the floor, breathing deep. I look around the room.
Zane is laying on the floor, his head in parts. Kai is on the floor, asleep. Cole lays on the floor, holding his stomach. Kai is asleep on the floor, a brouse on his chin. Jay lays near the wall, also asleep.
"No." I shake my head.
"Oh, yes." Rose appears behind me, holding my shoulders. "It feels great, doesn't it?" I look at her, terrified. She smiles. I watch her transform into my Mom. Wu steps out from behind her.
"Lloyd?" Mom asks, gently. I move away from her, backing up.
"She's in my head. You're not safe," I say. Tears start to fill my eyes. I look back a Nya, who is now asleep and breathing normal. "I did this."
"No, you didn't." I look back at Mom. She takes a step towards me.
"No! I could hurt you."
"Lloyd."
"She made five of herself! One for each of them. I didn't know who was who. We're lucky enough that Zane was the one that got majorly hurt. Please. Just don't come near me." I back off more from them. Wu grabs her arms, keeping her back. I relax a little. "I'm just too dangerous. She's taking my memories, again. If I say anything aloud... I lose it. Please." They look at me with pity in their eyes. Mom's glaze shifts a little and her eyes grow into alarm.
"Lloyd, look out!"
Brilliant chapter, K66!!
As I read this, I imagined what Rose would sound like as this scene happens, and now after reading this chapter the voice I imagined kind of scares me.
Thank you, Zach.
Hee, hee. Her voice can change, too, so it can pretty much sound like anyone's head voice.
Harsh green font colour... unfair fights... manipulative antagonist... yep, I'm gonna be angry for the rest of the day.
I was darker when I first used it, sorry... "that is true"... "that is also true"... Feel free to take it out on me since 1) I am the author and 2) that is my Dark Side in a sense.
As I read this, I imagined what Rose would sound like as this scene happens, and now after reading this chapter the voice I imagined kind of scares me.
Thank you, Zach.
Hee, hee. Her voice can change, too, so it can pretty much sound like anyone's head voice.
You're welcome. Your most recent part was great too!
Yeah. You developed the villain very well, and it's definitely a big challenge for Lloyd and the rest of the Ninja with so many emotions and feelings.
I was darker when I first used it, sorry... "that is true"... "that is also true"... Feel free to take it out on me since 1) I am the author and 2) that is my Dark Side in a sense.
Well this is an interesting revelation.
So, essentially, Rose represents a part of you?
What's that suppose to mean?
Eh. In a way, I guess. It's what I would do at least if I were to torture someone. In my defense, it helps me drain that part of my mind so it doesn't poison the rest of my mind.
Eh. In a way, I guess. It's what I would do at least if I were to torture someone. In my defense, it helps me drain that part of my mind so it doesn't poison the rest of my mind.
Hee, hee. Her voice can change, too, so it can pretty much sound like anyone's head voice.
You're welcome. Your most recent part was great too!
Yeah. You developed the villain very well, and it's definitely a big challenge for Lloyd and the rest of the Ninja with so many emotions and feelings.
*Bows* I've developed a lot of newly found "motivation" for this story, recently.
Yeah. It's like a card game when writing. You gotta get the right amount of "numbers", and, if you do it right, you'll play them just right for the audience.
Girlfriend, you are on a roll right now!! ![[h]](http://storage.proboards.com/6672327/images/k3cXEdyNkyw6aB9dHN1d.png)
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oh wait now its gone 
Not good. 
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