Oh, is that the thing going on over in the LOTR board? It was actually half decent. Imagine trying to write Captain Jack Sparrow from the first person perspective.
Yep, smartly done. Wish I had read it. Yeah that sounds funny! XD
Okay, I couldn't really figure out what it was. It was quite amusing, I tried to rewrite it as a solo story later, but it never worked out.
Post by LegoAgentFigure on Oct 10, 2018 7:34:18 GMT
I ran and dived to the ground as the night was lit up with a huge explosion. I flew for a couple of seconds, then hit the ground. I lay on the ground, coughing a bit, until the dust cleared a bit. I struggled to my feet, then looked around. Riders had fallen off their horses, and riders and horses had fallen altogether. Benboy was alive though, to my disappointment. He had a six-shooter pointed at me as he too heaved himself to his feet and slowly started to approached.
“You’re more trouble than you’re worth.” He said hoarsely.
“I don’t have no regrets.” I coughed.
“You’re more dangerous than I expected.” Benboy said.
“Your powers of observation are weak. I’m also stupidly daring.” I said, clearing my throat.
“You’re coming back to camp, and maybe it’s time we deal with you properly.” Benboy said, gritting his teeth.
I ran and dived to the ground as the night was lit up with a huge explosion. I flew for a couple of seconds, then hit the ground. I lay on the ground, coughing a bit, until the dust cleared a bit. I struggled to my feet, then looked around. Riders had fallen off their horses, and riders and horses had fallen altogether. Benboy was alive though, to my disappointment. He had a six-shooter pointed at me as he too heaved himself to his feet and slowly started to approached.
“You’re more trouble than you’re worth.” He said hoarsely.
“I don’t have no regrets.” I coughed.
“You’re more dangerous than I expected.” Benboy said.
“Your powers of observation are weak. I’m also stupidly daring.” I said, clearing my throat.
“You’re coming back to camp, and maybe it’s time we deal with you properly.” Benboy said, gritting his teeth.
I ran and dived to the ground as the night was lit up with a huge explosion. I flew for a couple of seconds, then hit the ground. I lay on the ground, coughing a bit, until the dust cleared a bit. I struggled to my feet, then looked around. Riders had fallen off their horses, and riders and horses had fallen altogether. Benboy was alive though, to my disappointment. He had a six-shooter pointed at me as he too heaved himself to his feet and slowly started to approached.
“You’re more trouble than you’re worth.” He said hoarsely.
“I don’t have no regrets.” I coughed.
“You’re more dangerous than I expected.” Benboy said.
“Your powers of observation are weak. I’m also stupidly daring.” I said, clearing my throat.
“You’re coming back to camp, and maybe it’s time we deal with you properly.” Benboy said, gritting his teeth.
That verbal repartee. XD Great job!
ThankCON ya!
Nothing I've written so far would've been as good if it weren't for Con's fantastic edits! So special thanks to him!
Keep up the good work LEGO. 
It was actually half decent. 
Wish I had read it. Yeah that sounds funny! XD 
Keep up the good work LEGO. 
I'm happy. XD ![[y]](http://storage.proboards.com/6672327/images/WYWPH2VRo26pOFDid7QZ.png)
