I've only seen him in that one chapter on page 2! Surely he would have done or said something else by now, his unique traits presenting a unique character dynamic and side-conflict.
I've only seen him in that one chapter on page 2! Surely he would have done or said something else by now, his unique traits presenting a unique character dynamic and side-conflict.
I'm re-working the plot from where he became an intolerable wrench in the works of my story. Because of this, his part isn't going to be as larger-than-life as I'd planned.
Because you read past page two you doubtless noticed that he's included in a diologue with Guru on page five and is mentioned in passing on six.
"Wise words by wise men write wise deeds in wise pen." —Lollimon the Wise
I've only seen him in that one chapter on page 2! Surely he would have done or said something else by now, his unique traits presenting a unique character dynamic and side-conflict.
There has been no more written. On top of that this is still the building up part of the story, not even all the main characters are introduced (if I had to guess the situation status). Does this help answer you questions?
I've only seen him in that one chapter on page 2! Surely he would have done or said something else by now, his unique traits presenting a unique character dynamic and side-conflict.
I'm re-working the plot from where he became an intolerable wrench in the works of my story. Because of this, his part isn't going to be as larger-than-life as I'd planned.
Because you read past page two you doubtless noticed that he's included in a diologue with Guru on page five and is mentioned in passing on six.
Huh. Funnily enough it's only now that I've seen him on those pages ._.
I'm guessing having an overpowered character who has a compulsive need to control every situation is not good for a story, is it?
I'm re-working the plot from where he became an intolerable wrench in the works of my story. Because of this, his part isn't going to be as larger-than-life as I'd planned.
Because you read past page two you doubtless noticed that he's included in a diologue with Guru on page five and is mentioned in passing on six.
Huh. Funnily enough it's only now that I've seen him on those pages ._.
I'm guessing having an overpowered character who has a compulsive need to control every situation is not good for a story, is it?
It's fine. I'm making the best of it.
"Wise words by wise men write wise deeds in wise pen." —Lollimon the Wise
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