Post by TheNewIceNinja on May 24, 2018 0:55:02 GMT
Great story! I wish it had never ended.
I DEMAND A SEQUEL!
But seriously, this was amazing and I hope that one day you legitimately publish this and it gets sold in hardcover because this is totally worth it and I will buy it and it will be one of my favorite books. You have a great talent and I hope you are a able to exploit it as much as possible.
But seriously, this was amazing and I hope that one day you legitimately publish this and it gets sold in hardcover because this is totally worth it and I will buy it and it will be one of my favorite books. You have a great talent and I hope you are a able to exploit it as much as possible.
Chapter 25: Conclusion Part 4 "We're very impressed with your determination and skills, Andrew." Wu said to Andrew kindly. The ninja were back in the temple, and things were beginning to feel normal again. Kai and Cole's injuries had mostly healed (they still had to tread lightly), Lloyd had been freed from possession when he was trapped in the cage, similar to Jay and Nya, who had also been freed from the Departed Realm to join their new prison, now freed. (Andrew suggested perhaps Camille wanted all the Elemental Masters in one place for a feeling of superiority - it was the best guess they had.) Meanwhile, Jay was working on repairing Zane, trying to get him back to the normal Zane. "I think I've got everything back to normal," Jay had said, "except for his speech. Now he only speaks in Fritz Donnegan quotes for some reason." "'For some reason?!'" Nya had quoted. "Jay, it seems like whenever something happens to Zane, you add your own little touches which annoy everybody but you! It's not fair!" "Fair?" Zane had repeated. "Fair isn't a word where I come from!" Remembering he was still standing in front of the ninja, Andrew regained his train of thought and replied, "Thanks. I couldn't have done it without your teaching." The ninja spent the evening celebrating their victory, the wholeness of their team, and the addition of a new member. They spent the evening laughing and enjoying each other's company, making Andrew feel for the team in a way he had not felt before. All laughing, all carefree, and some acting as if they had no common sense. The moon had been out for a while when the ninja decided they had endured enough partying for the night, and began to head to their rooms for bed. Andrew was beginning to head to his own when Lloyd asked him to stay. "Hey." Lloyd said.
Definitely the best and most exciting chapter part of the story so far. It's so exciting I'm bored!
Do forgive me if I’m wrong, but I thought it was “fear isn’t a word where I come from”
If I remember right, I think it's been said both ways in the show, but I'm not sure.
*** Camille, then turned around and began to walk away from the hill. Turning her head over her shoulder, she declared, "You haven't seen the last of me . . . brother." "Perhaps - but if you ever are foolish enough to wander into our lands again, you can bet I'll be ready for you." Camille then continued walking down from the hill, soon disappearing from sight.
Chapter 25: Conclusion Part 5 "Hi." Andrew responded. "How're things going now that you're a ninja?" Andrew figured Lloyd, who previously was very involved in his training, wanted to make sure he was doing fine. "I'm doing great." Andrew declared. "I feel like this is the home I never had." Lloyd smiled. "You said when Camille was going away that you considered us family. You really believe that?" "Yeah, why wouldn't I? I think there's a bit more to it than sharing blood. As I said, I feel like this is where I belong - thanks for letting me in." Lloyd seemed honored by his words, and began to reply. Suddenly, Jay peeped in. "We having some emotional chat over here or something?" He asked, smirking. "Oh, Jay!" Lloyd gasped. "Sorry - you surprised me. I was just talking to Andrew about -" "Yeah, I heard. Try not to make it too cheesy, okay?" He laughed, walking off. "I'm with him." Andrew agreed when he was gone. "I'll see you in the morning." Lloyd agreed to join the others and finally rest for the night. Andrew waved, saying he was just gonna do a couple things before he went to bed. Then, once he heard the door close, he ran off to the main room and squeezed behind the TV. He pulled out a small remote he had left there earlier. The remote controlled a couple Christmas lights - all he had to do was flip a switch and the lights were turned on. During the festivities, Andrew had left the party temporarily to "use the bathroom," but when he did so, he had different intentions in mind. The Christmas lights could be spread out and put in places most would not suspect. Bestowing an evil grin, Andrew flipped the switch on the remote. "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaugh!! There's a monster in my room!" Jay's screech sounded not too far off. "Wha-aaaaaaaaugh!! There's something with glowing eyes in here!" Kai yelled. "Who are you, and why are your eyes red?!?" Nya yelled. Andrew, failing to stifle his laughs, ran to hide behind the couch as the ninja's screams of terror ensued. He was being honest when he said he thought of the ninja like family. Like true family, he was going to have fun with the siblings he never had - and who knew what tomorrow would bring?
Perfect. Sounds like everything's back to normal.
I kinda liked Lloyd's friendship with Andrew. . . so cute. . .
Ahh. . . the sound of horrified screaming is so relaxing.
*** One day, the ninja were indulging in a leisurely chat in the living room of the temple. It began considering the functionality of the current training equipment, but as with all good conversations, the sanity soon diminished as they discussed the functionality of unicorns if they were real. ***
functionality of unicorns, sounds like stuff I talk with my siblings about.
Oh boy, this'll be interesting.
same here
I mean-- not gonna ask. Because I have no idea what conversations like those are like. Because I'm much too mature for that. And I have better things to talk about. Like, legit things. Totally. Yup.
"Here, Andrew!" Wu shouted. "Take my hand!" Andrew lifted his hand to grab ahold of Wu, only to fall suddenly into the portal as it suddenly shut, showing no sign of its previous existence. The ninja stood staring at the floor in shock, taking in the new information - they had lost their friend. Nobody knew what to say. All they could do was stand and acknowledge their recent loss. After a few moments, Jay spoke up. "I was just beginning to like the kid." He said sadly.
WHOA! WHAT? Where did he go?! As much as I probably should be concerned for Andrew, he's proven he can take care of himself. That. Is. So. Awesome though! He could be anywhere, anytime, any realm!!!!!
Dang it, Jay. Why'd you leave your wrenches lying around?? And Andrew, why'd you trip on it?? Shame on you.
Chapter 25: Conclusion Part 4 "I think I've got everything back to normal," Jay had said, "except for his speech. Now he only speaks in Fritz Donnegan quotes for some reason." "'For some reason?!'" Nya had quoted. "Jay, it seems like whenever something happens to Zane, you add your own little touches which annoy everybody but you! It's not fair!" "Fair?" Zane had repeated. "Fair isn't a word where I come from!"
Do forgive me if I’m wrong, but I thought it was “fear isn’t a word where I come from”
They keep changing the quote; it's both been "fear" and "fair."
Post by MockingbirdInc on May 25, 2018 8:29:32 GMT
Epilogue: Psych, It's Not A Conclusion - Part 3 A sharp dong of the doorbell echoed loudly throughout the temple. Wu sighed. "I will go and answer the door." "Boy, you look a bit glum." The mailman noted as he handed a large package to Wu through the doorway. "Everything okay?" "Yes, it is fine." Wu said somberly as he shut the door slowly. The mailman shrugged and walked away, slightly disappointed nobody had asked how he had gotten to the temple grounds. "What was it, Sensei?" Kai asked halfheartedly. Sensei Wu put down the box he was holding and opened its cardboard folds to reveal folded layers of fabric, each with different shades of varying colors. He held up the green suit which was previously atop the others. "Our new suits!" Nya exclaimed. The ninja peered over the box, looking at their new clothes. "I am excited too." Zane declared. "But I do not feel as if it replaces our friend." The phone rang from the living room, echoing loudly through the corridors of the temple. "I'll get it." Cole sighed, hopping to his feet and running to grab it. "Oh, hi Dr. Saunders!" His voice could be heard from the other room, his dialogue pausing frequently. "We're, um, fine. Yeah? Uh-huh? Oh, that! Yeah! We'll be right over. Bye!" "What was that?" Lloyd asked. "Dr. Saunders - he wanted us to come to the museum to clean up after the wreckage from Day of the Departed." Kai sighed. "I guess we could use a distraction - and we did make quite the mess." "Yes, I believe it might be good for you." Wu noted, his mind clearly elsewhere. "I need to visit the monastery to . . . finish an old fight. I want you all to stay here. I feel it is something I should do alone." The ninja looked at each other, initially confused, but then decided it was better not to question their sensei's ways. "As you wish." Said Lloyd. "Let's go."
But seriously, this was amazing and I hope that one day you legitimately publish this and it gets sold in hardcover because this is totally worth it and I will buy it and it will be one of my favorite books. You have a great talent and I hope you are a able to exploit it as much as possible.
And about that sequel...
Aw, glad you liked it so much!
A sequel will definitely happen. I just want it to be post-season 9, which I can't do until I've actually seen it. (Also, this time I'd like to do a bit more planning. This story was rushed into which made for a lot of weak moments.)
WHOA! WHAT? Where did he go?! As much as I probably should be concerned for Andrew, he's proven he can take care of himself. That. Is. So. Awesome though! He could be anywhere, anytime, any realm!!!!!
Dang it, Jay. Why'd you leave your wrenches lying around?? And Andrew, why'd you trip on it?? Shame on you.
Epilogue: Psych, It's Not A Conclusion - Part 3 A sharp dong of the doorbell echoed loudly throughout the temple. Wu sighed. "I will go and answer the door." "Boy, you look a bit glum." The mailman noted as he handed a large package to Wu through the doorway. "Everything okay?" "Yes, it is fine." Wu said somberly as he shut the door slowly. The mailman shrugged and walked away, slightly disappointed nobody had asked how he had gotten to the temple grounds. "What was it, Sensei?" Kai asked halfheartedly. Sensei Wu put down the box he was holding and opened its cardboard folds to reveal folded layers of fabric, each with different shades of varying colors. He held up the green suit which was previously atop the others. "Our new suits!" Nya exclaimed. The ninja peered over the box, looking at their new clothes. "I am excited too." Zane declared. "But I do not feel as if it replaces our friend." The phone rang from the living room, echoing loudly through the corridors of the temple. "I'll get it." Cole sighed, hopping to his feet and running to grab it. "Oh, hi Dr. Saunders!" His voice could be heard from the other room, his dialogue pausing frequently. "We're, um, fine. Yeah? Uh-huh? Oh, that! Yeah! We'll be right over. Bye!" "What was that?" Lloyd asked. "Dr. Saunders - he wanted us to come to the museum to clean up after the wreckage from Day of the Departed." Kai sighed. "I guess we could use a distraction - and we did make quite the mess." "Yes, I believe it might be good for you." Wu noted, his mind clearly elsewhere. "I need to visit the monastery to . . . finish an old fight. I want you all to stay here. I feel it is something I should do alone." The ninja looked at each other, initially confused, but then decided it was better not to question their sensei's ways. "As you wish." Said Lloyd. "Let's go."
Post by MockingbirdInc on May 26, 2018 20:09:34 GMT
Epilogue: Psych, It's Not A Conclusion - Part 4 The journey to the monastery was a long one. Wu walked slowly, seeing no need to rush, but also felt it took more strain and effort to go quickly. He looked up at the billowing, dark clouds forming in the sky. The formation was almost unnatural. He leaned upon his long bamboo staff with each step upon the smooth stone stairs. The air was getting slightly thinner as he reached the top of the mountain, getting past the final step and standing firmly on the old ground of memories. It was burnt and ruined, but it was still his home. Memories, both jovial and painful flooded him upon seeing the wreckage, filling him with burning nostalgia. He walked over to a white wall which had not been fully burned down in the wreckage. He grunted slightly as he sat down on the stone ground, covered with dirt and ash. There he sat, staring at the burnt building. A delicate yellow butterfly fluttered over, heading towards the bush and alighting on a flower, only to be interrupted by the unexpected scurry of a creature inside the bush. The butterfly shot off suddenly, not wanting to be harmed by it. A small brown bunny stuck out its head, then spotted a flower and plucked it from the bush, gnawing and munching on the small snack. Wu grabbed a small metal object from his cloak, and held it in his hand - his pocket watch. It ticked softly. He flipped it open and looked at where the clock hands stood. It was time. A sudden strike of thunder sounded from above as a colorful, swirling vortex appeared from the sky. It fizzled and crackled, setting off reflections upon the monastery’s grounds. A ball of white light was suddenly cast down from the vortex, disappearing to reveal a man in a cloak with an intricate maroon-black suit, facing away from Wu. "Right on time." Wu said, acknowledging the marking on his watch. The man turned around suddenly. "What?" He asked in confusion, surprised by his presence. Wu looked up to meet his gaze. "Long time, no see."
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