Post by ninjagofanmam on Feb 17, 2019 20:44:42 GMT
I'm probably forgetting to add some characters, but at least I've got the important ones. ( some characters are in two categories)
List of characters: Zephyr Jadyn Lisa Moe Nathan Sam ( Zephyr's grandfather ) Gloria ( Zephyr's grandmother ) Aunt Amelia Uncle Grayson Grace Zechariah Gavin Grant Zaida Gregory George Zahra Gabe Keegan Brent Chelsea Brent's other daughter Brent's daughters' friends: two boys, four girls ( I think ) Sage Slyder Squiggle Magenta Rick James Flyfree James' wife and two kids Copic Copper Moe's mother and father Mac Mark Police officer Steve Police officer Dave Police officer Nina Lily Representatives Retriever Hostile teens Hostile teens' leader Prison gaurds Blacksmith Milk store lady Hotel lady Mayor
Canon characters: Lloyd Griffin Turner Karlof Darith Zane Skylor Pixal Cole Kai Jay
Mentioned canon characters: Sensei Wu Tox Ronin Nya Gravis The First Spinjizu Master
Pack members: Calvin Rex Azalea Wolf general in jungle Alpha Alfida Delta ( New student ) Aiden ( New student ) New student Max Kent Omicron Nu Jet Haiki Gamma Rose Maze Ara Beryl Jeff Ila Mabel Xavier Speck Olivia Shad
Animals: Peak Luma Bettle Little Star Raven
Dream creatures: Green dragon Wolves Coyote Fox Border collie Unrevealed dog-like creature Dog-like creature
Departed characters: Gravis Sensei Wu The twins Psi Chi Hagga Tox's friend Past master of fire The first alpha Unamed wolf ancestors Alpha's father
Mentioned characters: Fred the garbage man The two detectives Jay and Nya's son Jay and Nya's daughter Hillary Gossip Alpha's daughter Past masters of gravity
Other people's characters mentioned: Mathida ( Tigress' OC )
Post by ninjagofanmam on Feb 17, 2019 21:23:15 GMT
Time for ( kinda ) deleted sences.
( I actually like this part, it just didn't fit anywhere in the story so I belive it never got posted, it can be considered canon. )
years ago, The Den
" Please, it's about our child's safety. " Said Alfida crossly. " I already told you could go. I just said I didn't want you to go without me. " Repiled Alpha calmly. " But you need to lead the pack, you can't put your life in danger like that! Besides, someone needs to look after our daughter. " She replied rolling her eyes and pushing some of her white hair out of her face. Alpha couldn't help but grin at this gesture. This is why I married her. He thought. Alpha's father had hated her attitude and the fact that her younger sister quit the pack. Alpha had found her inspiring though. " You're giving me that look again." said Alfida. " I can't help it. " He replied honestly. " You're such a softie. But seriously please. " plead Alfida. Alpha knew he couldn't say no to her. " Fine. But you know I can't save you if something happens..." He said defeated. " If it makes you feel better I'll take a team with me. It should just be into Borg Tower and out with the tracking device. We then use it to find our child and our enemies. " She said finally smiling. " We should be back by tomorrow. Goodbye Adolphus... " " No need to say goodbye Alfida, I WILL see you later. " After an embrace and a moment of silence she left to gather some warriors and leave.
That was the last time he saw her in person...
Present day, The Den
I will free you Alfida. I will protect our daughter, find our son, destroy the elemental masters and everyone with them, restore the balance, protect the pack and start a new age where we can live in peace like we were ment to...
Post by ninjagofanmam on Feb 17, 2019 21:33:06 GMT
( I actually like this part too, it's also canon, just didn't fit in the story and I didn't know where to take it from the point that it stops. )
Calvin got out of bed, he couldn't sleep no matter how hard he tried. It must have been the medicine the healer had given him. He grabbed for his crutches and made his way to the door of his room. He went up the stairs carefully, the last thing he wanted to do was break something else. Although he was getting more and more used to the stairs and it wasn't as painful as when he first broke his leg, he was still careful. He got up to the main level. The light of day was shineing through the skylights dimly. They never let it get to bright in the den, everyone was more comfortable with a low amount of light. Of course there were those who worked day jobs, slept at home or only stayed with the pack when needed, they complained about the low light sometimes. How they got any rest or were able to carry on normal lives outside of the pack was a mystery to Calvin. He stood up until the sun started to set when the other pack members began to stir and arrive. " Evening Rex. " Greeted Calvin as the groggy man walked by him pretending not to notice his fellow student and instead mumbling to himself " I hope the cook has brewed the coffee... : Rex then went toward the kitchen. Finally Azalea came up the stairs. Something had her on the edge, if looks could smash everyone in her line of vision would have been doomed by now. When she cought sight of Calvin though her face softened.
Post by ninjagofanmam on Feb 17, 2019 22:13:57 GMT
( This part is actually pretty long compared with the other ones. It is NOT canon and is actually an alternative version of when Retriever is taken to prison. I had some different ideas when I wrote this and have since decided to take the story in a different direction then this would have took it. And I was quoting the song Heathens and using the lyrics as writing prompt. )
Kriyptarim Prison
The gates opened, so did all the high security doors that lead into the main part of the prison. One prisoner was being brought in, handcuffed and head down. Alone other than the cops and prison guards that surrounded him. Wait for them to ask you who you know. He thought silently. Then they'll find I'm alone in world... Once they find out I really don't have any allies in hiding. " Please, don't make any sudden moves. " said one of the prison guards. You don't know the half of the abuse. He thought. " Where should we put him? This place has gotten pretty full over the years, I don't think there are any epyty cells except for the broken ones from last years small breakout. " One of them says. " I hear this guy is pretty dangerous, so I don't think it'll matter who we put him with. " Says another. The prisoner hardly listens though. " How about we put him in with some of those weird wolf warriors? " One of them offers. All of them seem to agree to this and walk over to the far left side of the room. One of the other prisoners notices and shouts. " Ha! You do that and he'll be smashed by morning! If not sooner... " They pay him no mind though and continue on.
-last edited on Feb 17, 2019 22:18:16 GMT by ninjagofanmam
Post by ninjagofanmam on Feb 17, 2019 22:15:56 GMT
( continued)
They open the cell and say. " Get back! Get back! No sudden moves! " They shove him in and slam the door behind him. Treated like an animal. He thought. " So how long have these " wolf warriors " even been here? " Asked a cop, who had probably never been here before. " Five years. " One of guards answer. " Yet they act like they haven't been here for more then five weeks. They scare the beans out of all the other prisoners, no wonder, we've had a few mishaps. Plus they hardly talk to anyone but their own. " " Their own? " the cop asks. The other cops and prison guards had left by now and it was just the two them watching. " They have their own group, containing all the ones who came in at once after breaking into Borg tower. Plus few of the other prisoners seemed to have joined them over the years. " They watched for bit longer in silence and then left. The new prisoner looked around at his new cell mates. There were four men, they all looked to be at different stages of their twenties, except for one who looked to be in hid mid thirties. They all had long hair, and some had more facel hair then others. After awhile of silence, they all sat down, some on the benches and some on floor. " Sit. " said the one in his thirties plainly. The new prisoner sat down on the floor up against the wall. He looked over at the prisoner next to him, he had pink around his right eye and his dark long hair fell in his face. " How'd I get here, sitting next to you?" The new prisoner asked looking at no one in particular. The prisoner growled at him darkly. Soon it was their turn for meal time. The new prisoner followed the others out to the eating area. He sat down and started eating like everyone else. I hate this place. He thought coldly. After awhile though he noticed that almost everyone was keeping away from him. He also noticed they were keeping their distance from one of the tables on the far side of the room with the least guards watching. His cell mates, along with three other men and four women were sitting at the table talking in low voices and looking over at him every once in a while.
Post by ninjagofanmam on Feb 17, 2019 22:19:27 GMT
( Continued )
The next time one of them looked over at him, he held their gaze, refusing to look away. In a single moment they all stood up, walked over and surrounded him. Those who had been brave enough to to sit near him fled. The oldest of bunch, a woman with white hair. Grabbed his scalp and push his head to the table. He did not fight though, he just closed his eyes and let his face relax. " We don't deal with outsiders very well. " Said the women, she must have been at least sixty years old, but somehow she was very strong. " The other prisoners say newcomers have a certain smell, I know what they mean now. " Said one of the men who wasn't one of his cell mates. He seemed to be one of the youngest there. The woman ignored what the young man said and continued. " You are smart, I can tell that much. But you've been put in our circle, whether you wanted to or not. So.. we need to make sure you know your place. " she got close to his ear and harshly whispered " Stay out of our plans, don't tell anyone, and don't follow us. We mean business and you can not use us as a safeguard from other prisoners! " She realised him and stood back. He slowly got up and carefully looked around him. They all looked at him expectantly. "Yeah, I got trust issues too... Not to mention, do you even know what I got in for?" He asked quietly. They all looked unimpressed. " I'm an assassin, and my latest target got me in..." Still unimpressed. " I can prove it. " He lifted up his arm to reveal the red that had already stained part of his bright orange shirt. " We noticed that the moment you came in here. " said the white haired women. " Just stay away and you'll be better off." They say they can smell my intentions, but they really can't, no one here can. He thought to himself.
Post by ninjagofanmam on Feb 17, 2019 22:26:15 GMT
Looks like I don't have as many deleted sences as I thought. I've got one or two really short ones, but it's so short I don't it's worth posting. I'll do the table of contents when I feel like getting around to it.
Looks like I don't have as many deleted sences as I thought. I've got one or two really short ones, but it's so short I don't it's worth posting. I'll do the table of contents when I feel like getting around to it.
Hey, I think you've got more deleted scenes than I do, and you were smart enough to save them. All I did was take a couple of screenshots. But seriously, those were great! We got to see a little bit more of the enemies' POV. >:3
I'm probably forgetting to add some characters, but at least I've got the important ones. ( some characters are in two categories)
List of characters: Zephyr Jadyn Lisa Moe Nathan Sam ( Zephyr's grandfather ) Gloria ( Zephyr's grandmother ) Aunt Amelia Uncle Grayson Grace Zechariah Gavin Grant Zaida Gregory George Zahra Gabe Keegan Brent Chelsea Brent's other daughter Brent's daughters' friends: two boys, four girls ( I think ) Sage Slyder Squiggle Magenta Rick James Flyfree James' wife and two kids Copic Copper Moe's mother and father Mac Mark Police officer Steve Police officer Dave Police officer Nina Lily Representatives Retriever Hostile teens Hostile teens' leader Prison gaurds Blacksmith Milk store lady Hotel lady Mayor
Canon characters: Lloyd Griffin Turner Karlof Darith Zane Skylor Pixal Cole Kai Jay
Mentioned canon characters: Sensei Wu Tox Ronin Nya Gravis The First Spinjizu Master
Pack members: Calvin Rex Azalea Wolf general in jungle Alpha Alfida Delta ( New student ) Aiden ( New student ) New student Max Kent Omicron Nu Jet Haiki Gamma Rose Maze Ara Beryl Jeff Ila Mabel Xavier Speck Olivia Shad
Animals: Peak Luma Bettle Little Star Raven
Dream creatures: Green dragon Wolves Coyote Fox Border collie Unrevealed dog-like creature Dog-like creature
Departed characters: Gravis Sensei Wu The twins Psi Chi Hagga Tox's friend Past master of fire The first alpha Unamed wolf ancestors Alpha's father
Mentioned characters: Fred the garbage man The two detectives Jay and Nya's son Jay and Nya's daughter Hillary Gossip Alpha's daughter Past masters of gravity
Other people's characters mentioned: Mathida ( Tigress' OC )
I'm probably forgetting to add some characters, but at least I've got the important ones. ( some characters are in two categories)
List of characters: *snip*
Other people's characters mentioned: Mathida ( Tigress' OC )
Bravo. *claps*
Say, if this book were a movie, what song would be playing during these credits?
Thank you!
That's a hard question, maybe some epic instrumental or a slower and more mysterious remix of the Weekend Whip. Or 21st Century Ninja by The Fold. ( I would say maybe Enter the Tournament, but that has a lot Tournament of Elements stuff in it that doesn't quite fit. )
Looks like I don't have as many deleted sences as I thought. I've got one or two really short ones, but it's so short I don't it's worth posting. I'll do the table of contents when I feel like getting around to it.
Hey, I think you've got more deleted scenes than I do, and you were smart enough to save them. All I did was take a couple of screenshots. But seriously, those were great! We got to see a little bit more of the enemies' POV. >:3
I did actually delete some, like there was this one really weird one I'm so glad I deleted. Thanks! Indeed.
( This part is actually pretty long compared with the other ones. It is NOT canon and is actually an alternative version of when Retriever is taken to prison. I had some different ideas when I wrote this and have since decided to take the story in a different direction then this would have took it. And I was quoting the song Heathens and using the lyrics as writing prompt. )
Kriyptarim Prison
The gates opened, so did all the high security doors that lead into the main part of the prison. One prisoner was being brought in, handcuffed and head down. Alone other than the cops and prison guards that surrounded him. Wait for them to ask you who you know. He thought silently. Then they'll find I'm alone in world... Once they find out I really don't have any allies in hiding. " Please, don't make any sudden moves. " said one of the prison guards. You don't know the half of the abuse. He thought. " Where should we put him? This place has gotten pretty full over the years, I don't think there are any epyty cells except for the broken ones from last years small breakout. " One of them says. " I hear this guy is pretty dangerous, so I don't think it'll matter who we put him with. " Says another. The prisoner hardly listens though. " How about we put him in with some of those weird wolf warriors? " One of them offers. All of them seem to agree to this and walk over to the far left side of the room. One of the other prisoners notices and shouts. " Ha! You do that and he'll be smashed by morning! If not sooner... " They pay him no mind though and continue on.
Oh yeah there's some Heathens in there. That's super neat.
( some characters are in two categories) 
( some characters are in two categories) ![[derp]](http://storage.proboards.com/6672327/images/YqNTPqyQUocVMYXZgUAI.png)
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Say, if this book were a movie, what song would be playing during these credits? 
We got to see a little bit more of the enemies' POV. >:3 
We got to see a little bit more of the enemies' POV. >:3 
( finally got around to adding it all up. 