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Apr 11, 2017 19:12:47 GMT
Post by bun02 on Apr 11, 2017 19:12:47 GMT
GAH! How has this sentence gone so out of control? We have a million different segments, including but not limited to
"He called in Star Butterfly to scare him off..."
"Which made Ariel go on a binge-treasure-hunt..."
"Somehow catapulting Atlantis back above water..."
"Ran into Buzz Lightyear, who was doing..."
And none of these have been added to. Then we have a bunch of other segments that we've been adding to, so somehow we're gonna have to figure out how to get all this tied into the sentence. (Z-whales, I might ask you for help. You're usually the one who's good at sorting the sentence out when it gets crazy )
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Apr 11, 2017 23:59:25 GMT
Post by Jade on Apr 11, 2017 23:59:25 GMT
...met Kylo Ren and started training in the Dark Side, but he had left the Sheriff floating in the middle of the ocean... ...where he was attacked by the Leviathan... ...who he fought against using Woody's hat and then...
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Post by LegoBuilder on Apr 12, 2017 1:26:56 GMT
...where he was attacked by the Leviathan... ...who he fought against using Woody's hat and then......he met this guy named Gaston who was a total jerk...
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Apr 12, 2017 13:38:26 GMT
Post by Z-Whales on Apr 12, 2017 13:38:26 GMT
GAH! How has this sentence gone so out of control? We have a million different segments, including but not limited to
"He called in Star Butterfly to scare him off..."
"Which made Ariel go on a binge-treasure-hunt..."
"Somehow catapulting Atlantis back above water..."
"Ran into Buzz Lightyear, who was doing..."
And none of these have been added to. Then we have a bunch of other segments that we've been adding to, so somehow we're gonna have to figure out how to get all this tied into the sentence. (Z-whales, I might ask you for help. You're usually the one who's good at sorting the sentence out when it gets crazy ) I will try. It's quite a daunting task. I might have to tackle it on the weekend. (Sorry if that sounds like a bad excuse. )
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Apr 12, 2017 13:39:17 GMT
Post by Z-Whales on Apr 12, 2017 13:39:17 GMT
...who he fought against using Woody's hat and then... ...he met this guy named Gaston who was a total jerk... ...and then Woody came, wanting his hat back, but Gaston took the hat and put it on himself...
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Apr 12, 2017 18:57:34 GMT
Post by bun02 on Apr 12, 2017 18:57:34 GMT
GAH! How has this sentence gone so out of control? We have a million different segments, including but not limited to
"He called in Star Butterfly to scare him off..."
"Which made Ariel go on a binge-treasure-hunt..."
"Somehow catapulting Atlantis back above water..."
"Ran into Buzz Lightyear, who was doing..."
And none of these have been added to. Then we have a bunch of other segments that we've been adding to, so somehow we're gonna have to figure out how to get all this tied into the sentence. (Z-whales, I might ask you for help. You're usually the one who's good at sorting the sentence out when it gets crazy ) I will try. It's quite a daunting task. I might have to tackle it on the weekend. (Sorry if that sounds like a bad excuse. ) Indeed it is. No, that's fine, I'll help you with it if you want anyways. No pressure.
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Apr 12, 2017 19:37:53 GMT
Post by LegoBuilder on Apr 12, 2017 19:37:53 GMT
...he met this guy named Gaston who was a total jerk... ...and then Woody came, wanting his hat back, but Gaston took the hat and put it on himself... ...then Gaston laughed at Woody, calling him a cowboy doll...
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Post by Jade on Apr 13, 2017 5:01:20 GMT
...and then Woody came, wanting his hat back, but Gaston took the hat and put it on himself... ...then Gaston laughed at Woody, calling him a cowboy doll... ...so Buzz fell with style and punched Gaston in the face and then...
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Apr 13, 2017 11:04:02 GMT
Post by LegoBuilder on Apr 13, 2017 11:04:02 GMT
...then Gaston laughed at Woody, calling him a cowboy doll... ...so Buzz fell with style and punched Gaston in the face and then......Mike Wazowski appeared and started dancing...
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Apr 13, 2017 17:12:43 GMT
Post by bun02 on Apr 13, 2017 17:12:43 GMT
...so Buzz fell with style and punched Gaston in the face and then... ...Mike Wazowski appeared and started dancing... ...but everyone ignored him as Woody and Gaston started slapping each other, and Buzz shot his fake laser at Gaston...
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Apr 13, 2017 20:49:49 GMT
Post by Z-Whales on Apr 13, 2017 20:49:49 GMT
I will try. It's quite a daunting task. I might have to tackle it on the weekend. (Sorry if that sounds like a bad excuse. ) Indeed it is. No, that's fine, I'll help you with it if you want anyways. No pressure. Okay. Good.
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Apr 13, 2017 20:51:12 GMT
Post by Z-Whales on Apr 13, 2017 20:51:12 GMT
...so Buzz fell with style and punched Gaston in the face and then... ...Mike Wazowski appeared and started dancing... ...and Woody had no idea what all the fuss was all about because he was a cowboy doll, and so had taken no offense from Gaston's comment...
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Apr 13, 2017 22:36:10 GMT
Post by LegoBuilder on Apr 13, 2017 22:36:10 GMT
...Mike Wazowski appeared and started dancing... ...but everyone ignored him as Woody and Gaston started slapping each other, and Buzz shot his fake laser at Gaston......then Woody started using Buzz as a shield and forced him to use his karate chop action arm...
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Post by Jade on Apr 14, 2017 5:03:56 GMT
...but everyone ignored him as Woody and Gaston started slapping each other, and Buzz shot his fake laser at Gaston... ...then Woody started using Buzz as a shield and forced him to use his karate chop action arm... ...which he used to hit Gaston in the chest, and then Gaston...
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Post by fantasius1111 on May 29, 2017 9:00:39 GMT
...then Woody started using Buzz as a shield and forced him to use his karate chop action arm... ...which he used to hit Gaston in the chest, and then Gaston......gave up and made his getaway in Buzz's spaceship...
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