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Oct 19, 2017 13:58:26 GMT
Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 19, 2017 13:58:26 GMT
Name: Che Gurrira
Rank: Governor
Gender: Male
Age: 38
Appearance: Black gorilla, looks like Che Guevara
Backstory: A young hard line socialist. He was born into a wealthy family, but adopted socialist teachings and was later elected, at the age of 34. He is the only major socialist governor in the west, who isn't a union leader, or national hero. Gurrira always wants to help the poor, and beliveves socialism will make the world more equal and greater.
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Oct 19, 2017 15:07:00 GMT
Post by Deleted on Oct 19, 2017 15:07:00 GMT
Chapter 4: Meeting between future enemies *1 week later* *Khan arrives at Governor Gorbav's mansion* *Khan walks in to the governor's office* Khan: Good day, governor. Gorbav: Ah yes, today is the great day of importance Khan: Yes, I have my suspections that unionists might try a revolt in this region Gorbav: Well this region, is heavily unionised, but that is no concern to have. Khan: Why do you think that, the state guard was overwhelmed 6 months ago with a defection rate of 40% Gorbav: Yes, but all is better now... Gorilla National Radio, said that the approval rating is close to 80% Khan: *looks him dead in the eyes* Governor, don't try to fool me, we both know what the real numbers are, and how this monarchy is on life support, that's why it is crucial this offensive goes over smoothly. Gorbav: Of course, ill ensure all state troopers, are at any major risk areas. Khan: Don't worry, the might of the Gorillan Royal Army will be at every major factory, have you made the increase in state troopers in the region? Gorbav: Yes of course a 200% increase in troopers, and all went through very tough loyalty tests. Khan: I hope that is the case governor, keeping tens of thousands of people under control isn't very easy, if I do say so. Gorbav: I'm certain that the unionists will not rebel, they want conditions to improve and the only way they can is if the war is swiftly won. Khan: Correct! Now I need to go help secure the regions *Leaves* (OOC: KHAAAAAAANNNN!!!  )
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Oct 20, 2017 14:41:19 GMT
Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 20, 2017 14:41:19 GMT
Chapter 5 - The battle begins
*The massive Royal airforce, begins to head to the eagle spire*
*hundreads of regular and turbo tanks move onto the spire*
*Gorillan mechs rush out of the forest*
*The eagles are terrified by this sight*
King Elrond: Oh no, this cant be happening.
*The tanks begin to shoot and pummel the main spire, supported by large artillery installations*
*The spire begins to shake*
King Elrond: Send in everything, all planes we have, all infantry and land regiments, no exceptions.
*A massive storm of eagle jets, and eagle infantry fly out to meet the enemy*
*General Gorring is commanding the aerial assault*
Gorring: L-14 and L-15, operate Kamikaze plan.
*L-15 and L-15 (which have tnt in their hulls) fly in on the spire causing mass shockwaves*
*Mean while the gorilla mechs begin to jump onto the sire and start punching it*
*Eagle infantry fly down intervene and do much damage to the mechs, ripping many of them to shreds*
*The spire shakes like a magnitude 7 earthquake*
*Many Eagle fighters begin to shoot down the royal gorilla gunships*
*Most gunships open their doors, and begin to shoot out of several major turrets, this massive row of bullets begins to surely crack down on the eagle forces*
*Eagle jets dominate the skies, but the tanks and artillery and leading to a non stop tremble in the spire*
King Elrond: All eagles evacuate immediately.
(To be continued...)
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Oct 21, 2017 16:54:38 GMT
Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 21, 2017 16:54:38 GMT
Chapter 6 - Near Domination
*As the eagle infantry rip through the gorilla mechs many of the mechs begin to explode, harming many eagles*
*The eagle infantry continue to fly towards the artillery*
*The artillery is still pummelling the spire, non-stop*
*The eagle infantry is now closing in*
*several massive 40 barrel chi machine guns roll out and begin to pummel the eagles*
*The effect of this were brutal the casualties numerous as eagles struggled to get out of the fire*
*Meanwhile, at the spire...*
*Several hundread eagles began to tie ropes around the spire and pulling it aswell as connecting to the other spires, all in hope that's it would collapse*
*Gorillan gunships lay havoc on the jets preventing them from reaching the artillery, mortar cores and rocket artillery are called in to smash the jet forces*
Gorring: They are going to capitulate! I can feel it, their forces are being overwhelmed. Perhaps its the time to end this war.
King Elrond: We cant fight this war, we cant win this... we need a God like miracle to save us....
Servant: Sir, don't worry, all will be fine.
*On the ground, Gen Kai Shek stands*
Gen Kai Shek: I predict it will be a meer minute before the spire collapses.
Mortar man: What about the ropes?
Gen Kai Shek: They will snap, and their tower much like their pride will fall and crumble.
Mortar Man: Keep pummeling boys!
*In the skies*
Eagle Jet Captain 14: Their are too many shots they are shooting non-stop in all directions. *Jet blown out of the air
Eagle Jet Captain 24: C14 do you copy, C14? *Jet gets blown out of the air*
Eagle Jet pilot 24-6: C24? No, we need to pull back *Squadron 24 along with some others begin to pull back*
Eagle Jet Captain 7: *In an ominous voice* Not on my watch, you wont. *Begins to fire on all fleeing jets*
Gorring: Ha, they fire on their defectors, their basically in a military civil war.
*Much of the royal gorilla military receives a signal*
Unknown gorilla: Execute Order 51
*Pilots and gunners begin to shoot at their own, allies*
General Gorki *On the ground*: The spire is about to fall, move in! *His turbo tank moves in to offer the eagles a peace treaty*
General Gorki: *calls up* King Elrond, we will cease fire, if you back down, come to our turbo tank and agree to sign for peace!
King Elrond: *Sighs* We don't have much other chance.
General Gorki: Your spire will fall in 10, 9, 8, 7
King Elrond: I surrender *To eagle military all military stand down, we are accepting surrender*
General Gorki: This is General Gorki, to gorilla military all stand down.
Gen Kai Shek: Cease Fire! *The artillery ceases fire*
Mortar man: That was tough. *Panting* We won, we won!
Gorring: Stand down with blaster fire anyone who does not obey in the next 20 seconds will be shot down. I recommend all pilots to disable power to the guns.
*Everyone including the rebels follow*
To be continued....
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 22, 2017 5:28:09 GMT
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Post by The J on Oct 23, 2017 1:56:26 GMT
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Oct 23, 2017 15:02:15 GMT
Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 23, 2017 15:02:15 GMT
Ok, right now I am hopefully gonna write a tonne of chapters. Also is it confusing with the crazy amount of generals and characters, don't worry most wont stay here for long.
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Oct 23, 2017 15:39:54 GMT
Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 23, 2017 15:39:54 GMT
TheFirstDecade The J batonmaster500Chapter 7 - The First Traitor (Note: Black text is when the kingdom is fighting, blue is when the republic/ eagles/ their allies are fighting) *Meanwhile during the invasion* *King Gortphiik is listening to Gen Kai Shek in the middle of the battle over the radio* Gen Kai Shek: The gatling guns are knocking out their infantry.
*General Getain, along with 4 gorilla soldiers enter the room, the soldiers spread out to either side of the rectangular room*King Gortphiik: Hold that thought, focus on the battle. *Ends the connection* Is something wrong?
Getain: Your majesty. You are under arrest by the Order of the 17th Amendment. Pulls out a shortblade *Getain stands across the room from Gortphiik*King Gortphiik: Really Getain... of all people you... Getain: Yes, your majesty.King Gortphiik: ...You couldn't have thought of a better name.
Getain: *A bit disappointed* You think this is a joke, but this can and most probably will end your careerKing Gortphiik: General you make me laugh, the eagles will capitulate and we will rebuild. Even if others join your cause, it will be too late.
Getain: Don't resist, Gortphiik, men, arrest him.King Gortphiik: Its treason then. *Puts on iron fists and plugs chi orb* (Yes I do like star wars quote) 1st left Soldier: What the...*King Gortphiik jumps up up to the left and quickly knocks out both of the soldiers*
*The 3rd soldier successfully shot Gortphiik in the left shoulder*King Gortphiik: Grr... *Jumps to the right side and knocks out the other 2 soldiers*
Getain: Impressive. But can you deal with me... *Plugs chi and puts on iron fists*
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Oct 23, 2017 16:12:17 GMT
Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 23, 2017 16:12:17 GMT
TheFirstDecade batonmaster500 The JChapter 8 - Getain's Legacy
Getain: Impressive. But can you deal with me... *Plugs chi and puts on iron fists*King Gortphiik: Easily, this wont even be a challenge. *Leaps upon Getain* *Getain dodges**Gortphiik punches: Left, right, left, right, right* *Getain dodges, all and barely dodges the last one*Getain: Its hammer time *Uppercuts Gortphiik**Gortphiik backflips out of the way*
*Getain charges Gortphiik with his right fist**Gortphiik blocks it*
*Getain trys to swoop in with his left fist**Gortphiik blocks it* *The 2 begin to non stop try to hit the other but they both keep successfully blocking the attacks, the battle speeds up, they are fighting so quickly that it seems like they're hands are moving at lighspeed* *Gortphiik smashes his iron fists into Getain's allowing him to use the knock back to get on a wall*
*Getain blocks preparing for a leap by Gortphiik**Gortphiik instead decides to run along the walls of the room*
*Getain also decides to run on the walls chasing Gortphiik**After a good solid minute of running, Gortphiik uses his right leg, to leap onto a bar on the ceiling, (yes his now upside down)*
*Getain leaps off the wall, the lighspeed battle begins**Gortphiik is staring into Getains eyes and vice versa, their is no emotion, their fists as if moving on their own, at unhuman speeds, sparks flying from the constant collision, a near ring of fire forms between the 2 of them* Getain: *Sneezes*King Gortphiik: May the king bless you, oh wait I am the king.
*Getain leaps back and with his right iron fists smahes the iron bar on which Gortphiik was hanging onto**Gortphiik lands on the ground smoothly, but for a moment stunned* *Getain, punches, right, left followed by an uppercut, all successful*Gortphiik: *Drops both iron fists and backs away into a corner, now frightened*
Getain: That shot in you right shoulder, you weren't able to react in time, that's why you lost. (I know I said left in my last post my bad) Gortphiik: *breathes heavily* Getain: *Drops iron fist and pulls out short sword* As I was saying, by the order of the 17th amendment your under arrest, surrender now.Gortphiik: I... I....
*Getain's face becomes suddenly shocked and then he falls and dies breaking into many lego pieces, he was killed by Genghis Khan* Genghis Khan: That was a close one, Gort. King Gortphiik: Tell me about it.... *pants heavily* Genghis Khan: *Turns on the radio* Gen Kai Shek: They are surrendering, they are! King Gortphiik: Looks like this is all finally over. Genghis Khan: *Khan smiles, before his face becomes very grim* I hope so.
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Oct 23, 2017 16:27:30 GMT
-last edited on Oct 23, 2017 16:27:51 GMT by egorsmirnov
Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 23, 2017 16:27:30 GMT
A quick show of who will appear in this story, (so I don't forget) and if it feels like everyone, well your correct.
People who will appear:
Existing characters:
-The full Rhodes family, (Including Reagan VI)
-Ryloth
-Bismarck
-Gokart II (the current Gokarts dad)
-Lysandre (Yes he is 10 atm)
-Gorbaskus (yes ik he is only 4)
Minor characters which will serve a pivotal role:
-Garistotle II (nothing to do with Aristotle)
-Ryan McArthur XXX (Yes that's the 30th)
-George IV
-Tarishe Khan (Son of Genghis)
-King Elrond
all will be explained in the story if now, I will post bios later on. (Is it getting annoying with so many characters?)
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 24, 2017 7:27:06 GMT
TheFirstDecade The J batonmaster500Chapter 9 - The deal is done. *General Gorki pulls up on his turbo tank and walks out with the treaty in his hands*
*King Elrond, flies down, a table is placed for the deal to be signed**There are gorillan gunships on either side of them, with the inside gunners still in them*
King Elrond: I beg mercy of you, is there no other choice.
General Gorki: No! Anyways the deal highlights 3 important aspects:
King Elrond: Which are?General Gorki: One, the eagles null their claims on the unclaimed land, including eagle eye forest, and firestone forest, and the artefact is to be recognised as gorillan sovereignty. And yes, you will remove your bases in the region. King Elrond: Seems fair, I agree.General Gorki: Second, the eagles will repay war reparations equal to 140% of the economic, political and manpower cost. King's advisor: I'm sorry this is madness! Normal treatys agree for 130% of economic costs and 100% of manpower costs, why should we pay for your political failures.General Gorki: *Looks at the advisor with a dead stare* King Elrond: *Sighs* Although the deal is harsh, it teaches us not to intervene in foreign affairs. I accept that demand.General Gorki: Wonderful. The final demand is simple the eagle military agrees to limit their military to 400 infantry, 150 jets, and 300 speedors, along with only 15 eagle tanks, and 50 eagle bikes, also you agree not to exceed the spending of the gorillan nation state. King Elrond: *Stares at him with dead eyes* You insult me! You think we will bow down to you for just that, I understand renouncing our claims that's the point of this war in the end, I understand the increased payments, I mean we are highly advanced and your a backwards, underdeveloped, militaristic, authoritarian state. But this! This is madness.
King's advisor: *Panics; he feels scared*General Gorki: *picks up radio* 6, 5.. King Elrond: *His expression changes from anger to deep fear, he is stunned by the quick action of the general*General Gorki: *slower now* 4, 3... 2
King Elrond: *As Gorki is saying two* Stop! I agree, I surrender.General Gorki: HALT!!! Halt!!! King Elrond: *Signs treaty* *Pants*General Gorki: You did a noble deed, Elrond, someone needed to put down your sense of noble superiority, for you are nothing, your tribe is not more than a collection of books and the worms who read them.
King Elrond: *Tears form on his eyes*
General Gorki: *Spits in his face* *Then takes the treaty and shows it to the tribe* We are victorious! We will rebuild! And we will not be humiliated ever again! *Gorillas begin to cheer, people jump out of their gunships and begin to hug, kiss, and drink together* *The artillery core is ecstatic* Gen Kai Shek: We won! *Over the radio* Your majesty they surrendered! They accepted all demands King Gortphiik: *Sigh of relief* Finally, we are liberated, now we can restore the constitution, and all will be fine. To be continued....
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Oct 24, 2017 13:35:55 GMT
Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 24, 2017 13:35:55 GMT
Hey can you guys like, like or reply to the posts so I know you have read them, it really motivates me to do more.
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Oct 24, 2017 20:39:22 GMT
-last edited on Oct 24, 2017 20:40:25 GMT by egorsmirnov
Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 24, 2017 20:39:22 GMT
The J TheFirstDecade batonmaster500 Chapter 10 - Chekov's gun, and the start of the revolution. *Gorki is waving the treaty happily yelling to his people...* ... *One of the nearby gunners, stares at him, in his eyes are fires of revolution*
*The gorilla begins to open fire, Gorki dies, and many other gorillans fall dead*
*Theres mayhem*
*The gunships in the sky begin to shoot at the artillery*
*Elrond's servant grabs the treaty and flies away with the king*Gen Kai Shek: What the.... *uninterpreted words that don't sound very nice* !? *Most of the gunships that were in ready position lift up
and begin shooting the stationary gunships, these battle ready ships and the aerial ones were all Republican*
Gen Kai Shek: Your majesty... we appear to have a minor incident.... King Gortphiik: Whats the worry, the treaty has been signed, come back we will drink fancy, and have a blast. Gen Kai Shek: There... ah.... *Lost for words* ... ah.... Genghis Khan: *Realises what Gen is about to say* Gen Kai Shek: well... theres a massive mutiny, *gulps* and they are destroying most of the ...artillery King Gortphiik: *Chokes on his drink* What!? What do you mean, mutiny, the grim reality gits him hard. What? Why? You just said they were cheering. Gen Kai Shek: Well they were cheering, now their killing. It rhymes so its kinda similar right. King Gortphiik: I am just dead confused, whats the situation Gen Kai Shek: Well its... uh... sh... *A blast hits Gen Kai Shek's commander centre*King Gortphiik: Gen! Gen! Whats the situation like? Gen Kai Shek: *whsipers* Shallow... *He gets kidnapped by eagles soon after*King Gortphiik: *Loses connection* *Blank stare into Genghis's face* Genghis Khan: I... I have no words. We should have seen it coming. King Gortphiik: How? How were we supposed to predict that people will mutiny when they win, it makes no literal sense. To be continued...
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Post by egorsmirnov on Oct 25, 2017 9:32:09 GMT
The J TheFirstDecade batonmaster500 Chapter 11 - The Western Revolution. *Chima Public Broadcaster reporter, Jean - Jacque Louis arrives at Gorbav's governor house* *All 10 Western Governors are there, first they speak, then they sign an agreement, the reporter writes down the events and then films a tape of Gorbav speaking, * *Jean copies the tape, then through secret sources, spy networks and hijackings, it is transferred to the media across chima, some medias have their signals hijacked*
*A young 10 year old Lysandre enters the house with his friend Gaulle* Lysandre: Man, I love the weekend anyways, anything new? Gaulle: Yeah, my mom said that today might be the day we defeat our enemy and we may return back to our tribe. Lysandre: Oh, cool it should be on the news I bet. *Lysandre turns on the radio* *Meanwhile at the gorilla HQ* Media manager: Ok, Gwen, we are launching live in 5 minutes, just read off the teleprompter, and then put in this recording of the King giving his royal speech, it will be broadcasted, all across the radio and Television, so make it good. Gwen: *She takes the keys to the room from her managers desk, puts on a royal ribbon, and heads to the news room* *Locks the door upon entering the room* Gwen: Hello, and welcome back, to Gorilla National TV and Radio, live, thank you for joining us. The King has announced new planned reforms following the victory, over the eagles at the spire, but first... *takes deep breath* Media manager: *To camera man* But first what?
Gwen: But first, the people should hear this, from one of chima most famous national heroes. *plugs in tape with the letters: AMP (a message to the people)* Media Manager: Oh, I bet its some general's victory speech. *Over the tv and radio* Gorbav: The time is now. The air can feel it. The land can taste it. Its the taste of revolution. Earlier today, I and 9 other governors of the Western Regions of The Gorillan lands have declared, the Gorillan Republic.
*begins speaking with much vigour and passion*
We will not stop until our goals are achieved. This monarchy is on life support, and it will die, it will fall. Our kings have not obeyed the Constitution, they do not care for us! They have suppressed our rights, and they have suppressed our freedoms! They are an archaic age-old institution that has failed us, and they will continue to fail us. They do not care for reforms, or the demands of both the people, and the new age. We will win! We will be victorious! You may try to take our lands, our allies, but you will never take our freedoms! You will never take away our ideas!
*Huge applause*
Your suppression will do nothing but brew more hate, it will only brew more resentment. At this rate their will be no reform, the people who are poor, will stay poor. We need a revolution! The people's revolution is unstoppable! We are unconquerable!!!
*Massive applause*
The army that won the victory over the eagles, is now in revolt! They are tired! They are angry! They have revolted! Your loyalist commanders are being destroyed by republican gunships, state troopers are in all out mutiny against you. .
*Massive applause*
Your loyalty numbers are a façade, only 1 in 5 gorillas actually support you, and as your reign of terror continues, you will have no allies, and your kingdom will be swallowed by the fires of revolution and burned, to ash!!!
*Massive applaus**Gwen's room is broken into and she is thrown in jail* *Back at Lysandre's home* *The 2 boys are standing stunned* Gaulle: This... this seems bad... Lysandre: *stands speechless*
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Oct 25, 2017 19:58:20 GMT
-last edited on Oct 25, 2017 19:58:55 GMT by The J
Post by The J on Oct 25, 2017 19:58:20 GMT
Great chapters. ![[y]](http://storage.proboards.com/6672327/images/WYWPH2VRo26pOFDid7QZ.png) Can you make a list of the characters who have been smashed so far?
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